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ritushree sarkar

@ArjunArohi4ever

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#121

hey niki plz cont soon yaar.

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nikki

@a.r.t.y

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#122

HERE IT IS........
--------------------------------------------------------Part 14

In one flick of lightening the-feeling-of-love atmosphere disappeared "BOOM!!" went the thunder and Ashi and Yuvi immediately parted from their close encounter…with each other. They quickly moved to the edges of the stone bench blushing like crazy because they didn't even think that a moment like that would have occurred in their entire lives in Maurya…..

Their fantasy started to take the better of them……….especially Yuvi's…………

Then it started to rain…. Soft drops of water hit the ground and thunder filled the air…there was a long gap of silence as no one had the guts to say anything about what just happened…Yuvi began to say... "Uh…Ash-"but instead Ashi just got up and went towards the big tree and just stood under it….. Yuvi began to worry…..

'Either she doesn't want to talk to me or maybe she's just wants to get shade…'
Yuvi thought...both were soaking wet! "Ohk!...dude chill!!" he said to himself as he mustered all the guts left in him to talk to her….

And when he finally reached under the tree he found her slumped down sitting on the ground with her knees folded up and staring at the rain… Yuvi looked at her and sat down next to her….he was about to say sorry….he didn't know why but he felt that it would be the right thing to say about what just happened….so he did….

"Ashi... I am really sor-" his sentence was interrupted at he felt Ashi's hand on his shoulder and the last thing he saw were her eyes before he was trapped in a feeling he had never felt before…about anyone else….then he realized… Ashi kisses really well!!!

A few moments felt like eternity as slowly yet lovingly she kissed him…. It wasn't the romantic atmosphere they imagined…the hard rain and the loud thunder…..but they didn't mind…instead Ashi wrapped one of her arm's around Yuvi's neck to bring him closer and the other was in his hair…enjoying the feeling of his jet black curls between her fingers…and automatically Yuvi hugged her by the waist….

After that helluva kiss… the rain stopped and the collage bell rang….Ashi was just staring at him and his diamond-red-lakme-lipstick lips and laughed as she rubbed them off before some one saw him….. Yuvi couldn't say anything…that was just mind blowing!!....it was like the best thing that had every happened to him!

He actually felt love for the first time in his life some one he never expected from…. Ashi was done rubbing the mark off his lips and got up….dust her pants and held Yuvi by his hand………………………………………………………

"BOOM!!" One more crash of thunder brought Yuvi back to reality…. 'That was just a fantasy….I was dreaming….make that day dreaming….' He thought….just then Ashi got up and quietly said…. "I think we should go back….its raining really hard…." Yuvi smiled… "yeah.." he replied and followed behind her… wishing so hard that a dream like that would actually turn into reality one day…….

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oh m really sowy if u guy dint lik it!!!
i sux at writing romatic scenes.....it took me 2 days to get it right 😭

luv,
niki

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Divya

@divya_92

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#123

oh gawd!!!!!!!!!!!

tht was a perfect part.. a perfect Romantic scene
jus like wht Ashi Yuvi might hv done 😳

👏

awesome part Nikki

😳 😳

do i need to say more

continue soon

Divz

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shilpa

@iloveashi

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#124

NICE PART NIKKI CONTINUE FAST 👏

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#125

it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
plz cont soon.

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Eloquent

@Eloquent

Sparkler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#126

awesome..nikki!!! 👏

dis..part..rox!!!amazing!!!

but..temme..somethig...did.it..really..happen..or..was
a..part..of..yuvi's..day-dream 😉
plz..do..conti.ASAP!!!