Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome parts Reshmi 😳

loved them both 😳 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome parts......greattttt..... 👏
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PART 8


While they were boating , they see an island …(Well of course ..Tiavi island) .

Yuvi --- (pretending ) Woh dekho Woh…….waha par ek island hain…….(actually all this was planned)
Aashi --- (pretending again) Island ….how interesting…Kaha hain.
Yuvi --- Wacko …..tumhe dikhayi nahi deta….Woh dekho.
Aashi --- Ya…..Ya….Great Yuvi….Wahi pe chalte hain.
Tia --- (who recognized the island) Guys………hum yahan pe boating ke liye aaye hain , island darshan ke liye nahin.
Aashi --- Shut up Timbo.... …yeh kisi bhi book mein nahin likha hain ki boating karte waqt island pe nahi jaana chahiye . Aur waise bhi mein tired feel kar rahi hoon. Wahan chalkar rest kar lete hain.

All agree to that and obviously even Ranveer agree because that was all he wanted . Actually uske pet mein toh laddoo phoot rahe the. And Tia again was left with no option , she had to heed to them.

After reaching the island they all go to explore the island ( and obviously this was Aashi's suggestion which Tia had to agree) . Tia was walking with them unwillingly , Ranveer didn't move his eyes away from Tia and on getting an opportunity …….Aashi , Yuvi and Sid sneaked away leaving Tia – Ranveer alone.Tia was too tired to notice this and Ranveer was busy ( you know with what). After going ahead for a while they realize that Yuvi , Sid and Aashi were missing.

Tia --- Ranveer ….Yeh teeno kaha chale gaye.
Ranveer --- Pata nahi Tia abhi toh hamare saath the..
Tia --- (worried) Oh Tia's God !!!!!!!!!! Hum sab alag ho gaye hain . Ranveer humein chalke unhe dhoondhna hoga.
Ranveer --- Nahi Tia…….Woh sab bhi humein dhoond rahe honge. Humein yahi rukhkar unka wait karna chahiye , warna ek doosre ko dhoondne ke chakkar mein kahi hum deep jungle mein na chale jaye.
Tia --- Shayad tum thik keh rahe ho Ranveer.

Then both of them sit under a tree . Ranveer wanted to talk to Tia but didn't know how to begin . Thus time passed with both of them remembering the moments they spent on that island before and none of them initiating a talk . Meanwhile Aashi , Yuvi and Sid who were hiding behind the bushes went crazy seeing them not utilise the opportunity.

Aashi --- ( in a frustrated tone) Hey Bhaggu ……yeh dono kis planet ke hain. Humne inke liye itna kuch kiya…par ……yeh idiotic creatures …..( and then finding no words to let out the frustration) …..inka kuch nahi ho sakta . Log sahi kehte hain ki ..Bhaggu bhi usi ki help karta hain jo apni help karna chahte ho.

Sid --- (trying to calm her) Aashi calm down puhleez …..now take a deep breath
Aashi --- (now more frustrated) Sid Timbo ki Tarah baat karna band karo
Sid --- Okay Aashi …….
Yuvi --- Sid (after an idea struck him) Tum mimicry bohot acchha kar lete ho …..right..
Sid --- Ya….(with attitude in his voice) Kyon , koi shak ????
Yuvi --- Nahin Sid ……Toh please Lion ki tarah roar karke batavo …..aut haan zara loudly….


Sid does exactly what Yuvi had asked him to do. Hearing the roar , Tia got terrified and she ran towards Ranveer and hugged him tightly. And how could our hero let go that chance , he hugged her back. . On seeing this , the threesome were elated and Aashi patted Yuvi's back for his biilliance.

Tia –Ranveer were in that position for quite sometime till Tia came back to her senses and pulled back. She felt very akward and she also realized that Ranveer's touch had the same old effect on her. She felt angry on herself for feeling this way.

Ranveer --- (consoling her) Tia….....aapko chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahin , hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge…

Tia --- (angry and hurt and for the first time letting out her anger) Tumhe Tia ki worry karne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Tum Tia ko akela kyon nahi chhod dete , Tia ki life se chale kyon nahi jaate.
Ranveer --- (happy that finally Tia spoke to him normally without pretence) Kyonki aaj bhi hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hain.
Tia --- (letting out the pain) Bas karo Ranveer , Tia aur bear nahi kar sakti . Agar tum Tia se pyaar karte toh Tia ko kabhi nahin chhodte.


Ranveer --- Tia hum hamari galti mante hain . Lekin Tia aap toh humein jaanti hain na ….hum gusse mein aakar kuch bhi keh dete hain aur galti realize hone par repent karte hain. Do baar break – up ke baad hum aapko lekar bohot possessive ho gaye the , aapko khone se darte the . Aur Shyla ne issi baat ka faida uthaya .Usne hamare saamne aise situations create kiye ki hum aapke aur Rahul ke relations pe doubt karne lage. Aur aap bhi hamesha Rahul ke saath rehti thi ………isliye hum upset ho gaye . Aur us din jab aap Rahul ke saath bahar gayi toh hum bear nahi kar sake aur gusse mein humne aapse break –up kar liya. Baad mein jab hamara jussa thanda hua tab hum aapse milne aaye the , par aap London jaa chuki thi.

Tia --- Raveer ….Tia Rahul ke saath isliye rehti thi kyonki hum dono ek project mein saath kam kar rahe the aur ussi ke barein mein research karne ke liye Tia uske saath bahar gayi thi.

Ranveer --- Iske barein mein humein aapke jaane ke baad Rahul ne bataya , lekin hum kuch nahi kar sakte the …..aap jaa chuki thi .

Tia --- Ranveer ….ab yeh sab kehne ka koi faida nahi hain……………bohot late ho chukka hain.
Ranveer --- Par …Tia
Tia --- Ranveer ….Tia is barein mein aur discussion nahi karna chahti.

The hiding trio realized that it will be dusk soon and they have to leave. They were happy that eventhough they were not fully successful in bringing them back together , atleast they were able to break the ice between them . Then they came out from hiding pretending to be happy on finding Tia & Ranveer and after that all of them set off back to the resort.

After they came back , on seeing Pri and Meher Sid hid behind Yuvi's back . Tia went to Pri ……….

Tia --- Babes ….Kya Meher ka gussa ab kuch control mein hain.????
Pri --- ( not understanding ) Gussa aur Meher………..Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho ????
Yuvi --- ( trying to divert their attention) Meher -------Babes----tum is dress mein bohot pretty lag rahi ho.
Sid --- ( supporting him) Haan…Meher…kaha se li ????
Meher --- ( excited) Guys …..fashion street se….
Tia --- ( totally confused) Guys yeh tum kya discuss kar rahe ho . Anyways you guys carry on ……Tia bohot tired feel kar rahi hain , isliye apne rrom mein jaa rahi hain.

Pri --- Ruko Tia ……Tumhare liye ek surpise hain
Tia --- Surprise ….. Magar Kya ?????
Meher --- Haan Babes …….Look there….
Tia looks in that direction and finds Suraj standing there. Tia is startled on seeing him.
Suraj --- Hey Gorgeous…
Tia --- Suraj tum…..
Suraj --- Haan mein …….Surprised…..BTW Mujhe miss kiya ( Tia smiled or rather tried to smile) Hey …mujhe glare karna band karo aur apne friends se introduce karao.

Tia --- Ya ..Suraj …Yeh Aashi , Yuvi , Sid hain aur yeh ( not looking at him) Ranveer hain. Aur guys yeh Suraj hain …..Tia ka fianc.

Everyone stood there shocked after hearing this and Ranveer was totally shattered , he couldn't believe his ears.


Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too gud Reshmi 👏

but how i wish Tia hadnt engaged Suraj

continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww awesum part reshmi.just toooooooooooooooo gud.plz cont fast asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I like this part a lot... very nicely written



Ranveer felt an arrow piercing his heart because of Tia's ignorant behaviour. She was neither angry at him nor did she show signs of love for him. She behaved as if he didn't matter to her anymore . A fear gripped him ……a fear of having lost her….

He spent the whole night sitting there thinking about the time he spent with her. The way she used to surprise him , the way her smile would ease him of all his troubles , the way she used to hug him and encourage him to face all the problems , the way her innocent remarks brought a smile on his face , the way they used to meet secretly ,the way they used to stare at each other unaware of the crowd around them , their first kiss etc etc.

Ranveer felt an arrow piercing his heart because of Tia's ignorant behaviour. She was neither angry at him nor did she show signs of love for him. She behaved as if he didn't matter to her anymore . A fear gripped him ……a fear of having lost her….Ranveer felt an arrow piercing his heart because of Tia's ignorant behaviour. She was neither angry at him nor did she show signs of love for him. She behaved as if he didn't matter to her anymore . A fear gripped him ……a fear of having lost her….

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