Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26 - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
awesome part 👏
but puhleese dont let tia nd ranveer break- apart,pls. 😭
nd,will be waiting eagerly,so,pls cont fast. 😃 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
thanx a lot reshmi to cont ur fic..and it was awesum,mind blowing.👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
plzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi post akr reshmi 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooo. 😭 😭 😭
ye kya ho gaya.plz plz plz tia ranveer ko alag maat karo.
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
plz cont soon......im desperate 2 know wats goin 2 happen next
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys I was going to post next part tomorrow . But because of special requests I am continuing it today itself.




PART 10


Not able to control his emotions , Ranveer cried bitterly falling on the floor . Then he felt a hand on his shoulder . On turning back he saw Tia standing there with tears in her eyes. She was dressed casually , not in bridal wear . He didn't understand anything and Tia realized this-----------

Tia --- Ranveer …. Tia ne koi shaadi nahi ki …
Ranveer --- ( very happy but still in tears ) Hum kuch samjhe nahi
Tia --- (wiping his tears ) Ranveer jab Tia ne Suraj ko hamare barein mein bataya …toh who samajh gaya…aur yeh sab usne hume milane ke liye tha .
Ranveer --- Sach !!!! Tia
Tia --- (naughtily) Muchh …… BTW Ranveer (looking at him from the corner of her eye to see his reaction) ……Suraj kitna cute hain na..??? Usne hamari kitni help ki …
Ranveer --- (feeling a bit jealous) Cuteee …………..my foot . Aapke Suraj ne hamari jaan nikal di thi.
Tia --- (now feeling annoyed ) Ranveer ek toh Suraj ne hamari help ki aur tum usi ko blame kar rahe ho
Ranveer --- ( pulling her closer and with a smirk ) Tia …aapko hamare saamne kissi paraye mard ki tareef nahi karni chahiye..
Tia --- (hitting him on his head lovingly) Paraya mard….hmmm…..Ranveer tum bhi na……..
Ranveer --- ( pulling Tia even more closer ) Hum bhi na kya ….Tia..????
Tia --- Woh………Woh …..(finding no answer )

Ranveer could wait no longer and before Tia could find an answer he placed a kiss on her neck and then trailed upward to kiss her lips . Tia turned in his arms and hugged him.

Tia – ( still in his arms ) " Tia loves you " ( she whispered quietly)
Ranveer --- (pulling away a little and looking into her eyes) I love you too …Tia …itna ki aap soch bhi nahi sakti ( then again pulling her roughly into a hug)

They both didn't want to let go of that moment ---the moment of their unision after 6 years .

Ranveer --- (stroking her hair) Tia …..aaj hum apna pura din aapke saath spend karna chahte hain.
Tia --- (softly ) Tia bhi ……

And so Ranveer took Tia to a fair ----- they both sat on rides stealing some kisses in between , shared ice-cream together , Ranveer even won a teddy for Tia in a game by throwing ring on the teddy and when Tia shot an arrow , instead of hitting target it hit a pehalwan and they both had to run from there for their lives. They couldn't stop laughing about it . And whole day Ranveer kept on teasing Tia about it . They were enjoying each other's company so much that they didn't realize how time flew fast .

And there Sumeet was worried because Tia didn't come home even after midnight , she had never been this late before .

After all the fun , they were now sitting in a garden-----with Tia resting her head on Ranveer's shoulder .

Tia --- Ranveer ..Tia ne aaj bohot enjoy kiya…
Ranveer --- (placing his hand on her cheek) Aaj aapke wajah se itne saalon baad hume itni khushi milee. Aap humein kabhi chodkar mat jaana ..
Tia --- (looking at him) Tia tumhe kabhi chodkar nahi jayegi . Tia tumhare bina nahi reh sakti .

On hearing that , Ranveer goes closer to her and places small kisses on her neck .Just then Tia's cell rings . And when Tia was about to receive it

Ranveer --- (still kissing )No….No….Tia…please
Tia --- ( trying to divert her attention ) Ranveer …Papa ka phone hain . Tia ko attend karna hi padega.
Tia --- (attending the call) Haan Papa
Sumeet --- Tia tum kaha ho ……Pata hain raat ke barah baj chuke hain …
Tia --- (finding difficult to concentrate since Ranveer was still kissing her , now her face ) Papa…..Woh…..woh…
Summet --- Kya huan Tia ??? Tum thik toh ho na…
Tia --- (holding the mobile) Ranveer …stop it ….(and then talking to Summet again) Papa aap bilkul worry mat kijiye ….Tia abhi nikalti hain….Okay ….Bye
Sumeet --- Alright princess
Tia --- ( after the call , hitting Ranveer slowly) Ranveer tum thoda bhi control nahi kar sakte . Tia Papa se baat kar rahi thi….unhe pata chal jaata toh ..

Ranveer --- (grinning) Toh kya hota….
Tia --- ( in a hurry) Ab woh sab chhodo………. jaldi se Tia ko ghar drop kar do …..Papa worry kar rahe hain
Ranveer --- (placing his arms around her ) Hum aapko kahi nahi jaane denge ……..apni puri life
Tia --- (smiling and cupping his cheek ) Ranveer uske liye tumhe Tia se shaadi karni hogi …..
Ranveer --- (feeling sad about letting her go) Alright ….......hum kal hi Maa se baat karte hain….....Fine
Tia --- (elated) Really….….(.and then she kisses Ranveer on his cheek and this brings a smile on Ranveer 's face. )

Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
awesomee 👏 ,finally u continued resmi.luved d part.pls post asap. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
yopee,me the first one 2 reply 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
awesomeeeeeeee .....greattttttt.......fantastic....... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
awwwwwwwwww 😳 its so cuteeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
loved this part!!! cont asap 😳 😳 😳

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