Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well !!! guys I have been reading a lot of fics in this forum for a long

time. And now Iam inspired to write one. I don't know whether Iam

good at it or not. But I want to explore myself so just giving a try.

Please do post your comments----both positive as well as negative

comments are welcome. So here it goes......................

DIL KYA KAREIN

PART 1

Everyone in the party was waiting for her to come. But since she was taking time

Sumeet went upstairs to her room to fetch her.

Sumeet—Tia….Tia…..tum abhi tak ready nahi hui, sab tumhara wait kar rahe he

Tia --- Bus 1 min Papa Tia abhi aati hain

Then she opened the door and came out .She was looking sooooo beautiful. She

was wearing a blue coloured embroidered chholi and pink coloured lehenga with

blue embroidered border .She was carrying a pink duppatta in both her hands.

She had left her hair open .She was wearing long matching earings, matching

bangles and a chain with blue pendant

.Sumeet had tears of joy in his eyes since today was the most important day of her life.He was not able to contain his happiness . He went near to her and kissed her forehead.

Tia --- (excited) Papa ……..Tia kaisi lag rahi hai

Sumeet ---Hamesha ki tarah ……sabse beautiful , ek princess ki tarah.

Tia --- Thank you Papa….ab chale warne sab Tia ka murder kar denge.

They both laugh

While she was moving downstairs all eyes were fixed on her—some with envy and some with admiration. And when he looked at her he just could not take off his

eyes from her.His face lit up on seeing her. And she too noticed the immense love

for her in his eyes.

Tia thought that today she is going to take the first step of being with someone who has always made her feel special , gave his shoulder to cry upon when she was hurting , made her laugh with his funny jokes when she was sad, protected and

helped her when she was in need.. He has always been there for her whenever she

was lonely like a true mate.And she knew that he would never ever let her down.

She was very sure of her decision to marry him.

Then Sumeet came on the platform and made the announcement.

Sumeet --- Teen mahine pehle meri beti ne ek decision liya aur aaj woh usse official banane jaa rahi hain. Aap sab yeh party throw karne ki wajah toh jaante hi honge.

Toh jyada deir na karte huen hum yeh ceremony start karte hain.

Then he moved ahead and gave the engagement ring to Tia . Tia put the ring into

his finger and vice-versa.

Sumeet --- Mein aaj aap sab ko ek baat advance mein batana chahta hoon . Aaj se

teen mahine baad mein apni beti Tia ki shaadi Suraj Khanna ke saath karoonga .

After that the party began . There was dance , music and masti.

Suraj moved towards Tia

Suraj --- Hey gorgeous , wanna danace

Tia — (smiling) sure why not

He took her to the dance floor and they danced happily to celebrate their engagement.

After the dance they went to the garden for fresh air since they were very tired.

Suraj---Gorgeous… aaj meri life ka ab tak ka sabse khoobsurat din hain.

Tia --- hmmmmmmm ab tak ka ..ha…

Suraj — I mean sabse accha din toh hamari shaadi ka hoga na

Tia -–- ohhh…….. suraj tum bhi na………

Suraj — (bit sadly) Lekin mein thoda dukhi bhi hoon kyunki tum toh kal India

jaa raheE ho mujhe akele chhod kar

Tia — (smiling) Hum ne milke decide kiya tha na ki hum shaadi India mein karenge.

Suraj — Yaa you are right………… Par shaadi toh 3 months baad hain . Tum

abhi se kyon jaa rahi ho.

Tia — Kyonki Tia hamesha ke liye tumhare saath London settle hone se pehle

apni country mein apni angels ke saath kuch time spend karna chahti hain.

Suraj — Yaa…………… I understand . Par tia mein tumhein bohot miss karoonga

Tia --- Oops………!!!!!!

Suraj — Kya hua???????

Tia — Suraj raat ke 2.00 baj chuke hain. ……..Is engagement ke chakkar mein Tia

ne packing bhi nahi ke..Aur Tia ka flight kal Subah 9.00 baje ka hein.Ab Tia ko

jana hoga. Ok bye.

While she was rushing off

Suraj — Tia …………

Tia — kya hua

Suraj --- Good night , sweet dreams aur kal subah mein tumhein chhodne aayoonga

Tia — Okay…..okay…. bye( and she rushes off)

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kutie thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow..a nice fic..plzz cont soon..but where is my ranny..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good 😳

continue soon 😛

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really good. But pls introduce Ranveer soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice fic do continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kool yaar.

the oder day i was thiking ki dere r very few t-r fics than god u started dis 1.

nice concept 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey yaar its realy awsoem but their was a shock
i was expecting the name to ranver sisodia
but i think ur fic is gonna be interesting soo plzzzzzzzzzzz cont afst
👏

its awsoem
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Posted: 19 years ago
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introduce ranveer soon na...plz 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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honey..it was really amazing...fabulously written continue soon

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