Tumhare hai hum….(tr fic)last part pg18 - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: vitak

TWO YEARS LATER



Aur khana lekar jaana!!! Registrar office mein pura din baithna hoga.!!!

Ranveer tried to start his bike….which wasn't starting.
Ranveer:Haan ma humne le liya hain!!! He shouted back to his mother.
Shit!!!! Is bike ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha!!!
He tried to start it again.it refused to budge.
Ranveer kicked it hard!!!bloody bike!!!!

Ranveers mom watched him from the kitchen,shaking her head.

Maa:kya hua ranveer?sab theek hai na?

Ranveer turned an angry face towards her:KAHA theek hai!!!BIKE start nahi ho raha hai!!!ab chal ke jaana hoga!!! Ab late ho jayenge aur phir who officer bhav khayega!!!
He took his tiffin and left….cursing his luck.

Ranveers mom saw him leave,worry lacing her face.ranveer was becoming totally worked up.Trying to restart his fathers business,running around for the formalities……and on top of that his non existent social life……

She had sensed when he had come back that he hadnt wanted too.had also known WHY he hadnt wanted to……
She knew he missed her terribly.he didn't tell her….but she knew.she wished she could do something about it……but he would never confide in her…….....yeh aaj kal ke bache!!!khud ko bahut strong samajhte he.par itna bhi nahi samajhte…ki dukh batne se who kam hi nahi hota….balki uske sujhav nikalte hai.ab ye hume nahi batayega ki problem kya hai to hum kaise suljhayenge use?

She shook her head in frustration.

Just then
TRING TRING.

Maa:ab itni jaldi kaun aa gaya?
She hurried to the door and opened it.
And got the shock of her life.


Tia stood in the entrance…..winding her hands together nervously.

Tia:hel….hello….aunty!!!kaise hai aap?

Maa stood there…open mouthed for a minute.here she was …thinking about how much this girl was making her son suffer and….here….

Tia looked uncomfortabe.
Tia:aunty……apko…yaad hoga….tia..tia ahuja….main yaha ayithi …ek baar….?

wow a great twist awsome cant wait to read the next part 👏 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
vinitha...ur fic totally rocks..and i am waiting for tia n ranny meet..plz cont soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
vini continue fast...i cant wait 4 next part n all d parts r awesum 👏 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
tooo gud!!!!!!!

w8in for der meetin!!!!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 😳 😳 How sweet...please cont sooon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ranveer came back at 6,apparantly still in a bad mood….and suddenly stopped in his tracks.
Then shook his head.


Ab hallucinate bhi karne lage?bad ranveer ,very bad.

He walked right past tia who had fallen asleep and went inside.

Maa:ranveer!!! Aap….tia kaha hai?bahar hi hai na?

Ranveer stared at her,then raced back outside.

TIA!!!! His heart started beating fast.he slowly walked up to her and….

Tia!!! Oh god it was her!!! His hands were trembling.he reached out to touch her…..and she awoke.

They just looked at each other for a minute…..unable to say anything.

Pure joy shone in ranveers eyes.he gave way to his urge and pulled her into his arms and held her tightly….not caring about anybody watching them.

Tia felt tears coming to her eyes.she hugged him back,though he was already crushing her.the tears came easily …..though she didn't know for what she was crying.she felt overcome…..seeing him after so many days!!!!

she kissed his face,everywhere, coming to his lips…….then suddenly came back to her senses.

Tia:ran……
He pulled back and looked at her.
She looked changed….more……womanly…..mature.
She was glowing,her eyelashes were wet……ranveer couldn't stop himself.he reached forward and kissed them away,lingering on them.

Finally he pulled himself away and looked at her in wonder,not able to stop smiling.
Ran:tia….aap …yaha?

Tia:ranveer……i….
Ranveer laughed!!he craddled her face in his hands,stroking her face with his thumb.

Tia smiled shyly at him.just then
AHEM AHEM!!

Tia was out of ranveers arms in a flash.

Vasu stood there,an innocent expression on her face.

Vasu:ummm…maa aap dono ko andar bula rahi hai.aa sakte hai?

Tia smiled nervously at her and hurried inside,too embarrassed to say anything.

Vasu looked at ranveer who was smiling after tia, her eyebrows raised.
Ranveer didn't get angry.he ruffled her hair and went inside,still smiling.




It was night time.tia turned over on the bed……ranveers bed.he was sleeping outside.
She opened her eyes and fingered the blanket.
She had to tell him soon….but ……she didn't know how he felt about her …..
The way he had reacted on first seeing her was more than enough but still……
She blushed thinking about him.she hid her face in the pillow and smiled to herself.

Silly girl!!! Ek 16 year old ki tarah behave kar rahi ho!!! Jaise ranveer se pehle baar mil rahi ho.


She closed her eyes and tried to sleep.
Suddenly her skin prickled……there was someone in the room.she turned over just as ranveer clamped a hand on her mouth.

Her eyes widened.he put a finger on his lips and motioned her to get up.
Tia(whispering)what is….

Ranveer(whispering)keep quiet and come with me.
She got up slowly,excitement building up in her.they tiptoed across the hall and let themselves out.

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
this pat was soooooooooooooo beautiful...........it was sooooooo romantic ............. so sweet ........so pure...............so natural..............and soooooo teenaged sort of........i eman i cant express what i am feeling after reading this part of your fic 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
i just read the whole story now 👏

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