Tumhare hai hum….(tr fic)last part pg18 - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesummmmmmmmmm!!!!!!cont. fast

update d title of ur fic!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome.... simply brilliant..
dont have ne more words to appreciate.
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Edited by Shadow Cat - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
wowieeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
its was toooooo goooooooooood.....please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
hey wen r u gonna cont plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fasst 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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They ran across the path and reached an old shed at the back of the house……but a little away from it.
Ranveer closed the door and leaned against the wall,pulling tia towards him.she rested her head against his chest and laughed softly.

Tia:ranveer!!tum kya paagal ho gaye ho?tumhare maa ko pata chalega toh kya sochegi mere baare mein?

Ranveer:kuch nahi sochegi.he ran his hands through her hair and angled her neck so he could see her properly.
Tia swallowed.
Tia:ranveer…..tia tumse bahut naraz hai.

Ranveer:kyu?

Tia:kyu? Tumnne tia ko bilkul miss nahi kiya na?pehle toh roz baat karte the,aur phir….phone karna bilkul hi chod diya?

Ranveer(feeling bad):tia….hum har roz international calls afford nahi kar sakte hai.
then looking accusingly at her,
Par aap toh kar sakthi thi na?humne call karna chod diya…toh apne bhi?apko toh pata hai yaha financial crunch hai.

Tia(looking down):who….tia ko….sochna tha.

Ranveer:kya?

Tia:……….

Ranveer:kya sochna tha tia?

Tia:tumhare…humare baare main.

Ranveer stilled.humare baare main kya?

Tia:ranveer…..tumne tia se kaha tha na…tumhe bank ko dene ke liye ek guarrantor chahiye?

Ranveer:ha.par…use…kya?

Tia:tia….tumhe guarantee dena chahthi hai.

Ranveer had a questioning look on his face.
Ran:aur?????

Tia:aur……tum batao.(she inclined her head,blushing)

Ran(leaning close to her)aur…..

Tia was trapped.she tried to move away,but ranveer had one hand on each side of her.

Tia:aur….mere kuch conditions hai.

Ran(starting to smile now) :go on….

Tia:mein yahi pe reh kar dekhna chahti hoon,ki tum apna kaam theek se kar rahe ho ya nahi……paise theek se use kar rahe ho ki nahi……and…you know….the works?

Ran:hmmm.sooooo???

Tia(frustrated now):what so what??? Tia is waiting.

Ranveer turned around so that she was the one who was against the wall.
He looked at her.tias breath hitched at the expression on his face.
He ran his finger over her face.then leaned over her and kissed her forehead gently.he pecked her on her nose.landing soft kisses all over her face.

Tia closed her eyes.he moved down to to her lips and kissed her there.
She wound her hands around his neck and pulled him closer.
He moved closer to her and kissed her passionately……dropping his head on her neck and kissing her all over….. 😳

Tia felt limp when he finally left her.he caught her just as she was swaying on her feet.
Her face was flushed……and ranveer had never found her more utterly beautiful.

He leaned back towards her but tia placed a finger against his lips.

Ranveer smiled at her.
Ran:I want you to say it.

Tia pushed her hair away from her face and looked at him.
Tia:I want to be here….with you.i want to spend the rest of my life with you.and…..i love you.she face heated up as she said that and she turned away.

Raneer looked as if uske mann me ladoo phoot rahe the.
But he asked in a very serious tone.
Ran:par apka design ka course?ek saal baaki hai na?

Tia slipped from below his grasp and walked to the middle of the shed.
Tia:kya khaak course!!!arre who kya tia ko sikhayenge,tia toh unhe kuch tips de sakti hai. Tia ne toh decide kar liya hai.tia wapas aa rahi hai….aur who bhi yaha!!
Then having a sudden thought,……unless ofcourse,tum nahi chahte……

Ranveer pulled her back against him.don't be stupid.hum ma se kal hi baat karenge.he nuzzled her neck.i cant be away any longer tia.

Tia(suspiciously):maa…se kya baat karoge?

Ran:of course humarri shaadi ke baare mein.
Looking at tias shocked expression.
Kyu??apne kya socha tha?

Tia(a happy smile on her face.):kuch nahi…nahi …kuch nahi"!!!!kuch bhiiii nahiiii.
And she laughed in delight and flung her arms around him….hugging him tightly.

Ranveer didn't let go of that chance.before she knew it he was kissing her again…….
And tia didn't stop him this time.she gave herself up fully…knowing that she couldn't do anything about it anyway……

After all,that was what she had come there for. 😉
Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
😳 This is all i can say...its sooo brilliant...please cont quickyl...i cant wait!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
next part last part 😆

thanks for all your sweet comments 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
i read all parts today.

it is aweeeeeesome....

please continue soooooooooooooon

and what is tia going to tell ran
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
its 2 gud 👏

plz conti soon ,if possible by evening 😃 ,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
wow vinitha..that was awesom..but plzz cont naa..dont make it a last part..plz.

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