relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Ashi: thakur !!!!!!!!! aaj kyaa heart attacks day hain !!!!! subah se itne surprises and now tum bhi achaanak se aa gaye

Ranveer : ashi , aap ne uv se baat ki ?? (trying to give her hints abt uv's state )

Ashi : uv se ?? ab kyaa hua use ??

Ranveer : hume lagtaa hain aapko neal ke bare main uv se baat karni chaahiye

Ashi : neal ke baare main ?? kyun

Ranveer : uv,neal ko lekar ……..

Ashi : oh !!!

Ranveer : aap baat karengi naa ?? (thinking that she understood what he meant )

Ashi : ranveer don't worry , neal adjusting type hain , use uv ke saath room share karne main koi problem nahi hogi , mujhe lagta hain ki who dono jald hi bahut acche friends ban jaayenge !

Ranveer :nahi aashi who hum us baare main nahi ……..
(Just then her mobile rings and guess who ?? )

ashi : mama ??????

sonia : toh meri mumum ko surprise kaisa laga ??

ashi : mama , aapne yeh correct nahi kiya !!!! aapko pata tha and aapne bataaya nahi

sonia : mumum neal ne mujhe manaa kiyaa tha and even …..
ashi (without letting her mom complete the sentence ) yeh neal bhi naa !!!!!
and mama aap kahaa ho ?? plzzzz come soon .waise kehnaa toh nahi chahiyee but I am missing you !!!!!

sonia :even me too !! (just then her spot boy calls her and tells her that her shot is ready )
accha mumum abhi mujhe jaana hain . baad main baat karungi ok
take care !! bye !! love u

ashi : love u too mama

just then uv enters and signs ranveer to come to him . ranveer excuses himself and goes to uv

uv : tum wahaa us ke paas kyaa kar rahe the ??
ranveer : banaa !!!!! aapko kyaa hua ?? hum kyaa apko neal dikte hain ??
uv : sorry dude !! but I hate this neal
ranveer : (smiling naughtily) hume lagtaa hain ki aap kuch zyaada hi jealous ho rahe hain !
uv : jealous ??? dude are u nuts !!! main koi jealous velous nahi hoon alrite
ranveer : theek hain banaa (nodding and leaves )
uv:(in his mind) main koi jealous velous nahi , who bhi us neal ke wajah se ! no ways !! agar ashi ko uske saath rehna hain toh rahe !!!!! mujhe koi farak nahi padta

after a while
uv : ( again in his mind ) aakhir us neal main aashi ko dikta kyaa hain !! ashi tum mere saath aisaa nahi kar sakti !! I hate u neal ……..

ashi :(comes near him ) hi heman !!!!!!!
uv : kyaa hain wacko ??
ashi : kyaa hain !!!!! tum itne bure mood main kyun ho ! aise tum bilkul ek jumglee lagte ho !
uv : cut the crap !!!!!!! mujhe disturb mat karo !!!!!
ashi : disturb ?? waise tum kyaa kar rahe ho ,and tumharaa mood itna accha kyun hain ?? kyaa hua ??
uv : kuch nahi aur tumhe usse kyaa ??
ashi : uv ??
uv : waise bhi tumhe toh abhi neal ke saath jaana hain naa !! achaanak meri yaad kaise aa gayi ??
ashi : neal yahaa nahi hain ,woh kahi bahar gayaa hain
uv : oh !!!!! so u remembered me !!! anyways byee mujhe bahut kaam hain (and leaves )

ashi is still wondering as to what happened to uv .
ashi :(in her mind ) isko aaj kyaa ho gaya !! itne gusse main kyun tha !!!! lagta hain kise se ladkar aaya hain , but mujhe kyun nahi bataa raha ! bataana nahi chahata na bataaye !! jab problem had se bad jaayegi tab anyways mere paas hi aayega naa !

just then neal enters with someone . Ashi is shocked and delighted ……………….
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
wow yaar.......uv is gettin really jealous.......but itll be a sight to see ashi jealous too......pls pls pls continue this fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
well done nishi the lingo is us like uvs 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
ur fic is awesome , i had never read such a fic b4. 👏 👏 👏
please continue soon i am waiting
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
oh!nishi its really nice. waiting 4 the next part.


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
hey nishi dis is cute!!...i luvd it.

kudos!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
OMG!i just read d whole fic now & i'm kinda speechless.....................
OK i can just say that this fic is.....AWESOME!it totally rox.poor uv.& dat neal character is 2 gud yaar.par i feel bad about yuvi darling

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Great going Nishi! 👏

Can't wait for Khushi to make things more interesting!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
plzzzzzzzzz nishi sent next part fast i just can't wait.
thxxxxx for superb fanfic 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ashi : hey bhaggu !!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh kyaa ho rahaa hain !

Neal : (smiling comes near her and asks her as if he doesn't know anything ) :kyaa ho raha hain bhaggu ??

Ashi : haha !!! very funny !

(Meanwhile yuvi's watching them from a hide out and as usual feeling jealous )

ashi : kyaa poora ka poora st.marks yahaa pe he !! kahi main koi sapna toh nahi dekh rahi !!!!!!!!
neal : (pinches her very hardly ) : nahi baalike !!!!

ashi : oouch !!!!!! that hurts neal !! kitni baar kahaa hain ki apni yeh kusti aur wrestling mujhpar mat try karo , it hurts !!!!!!

neal : ok annie !!!! sorry !!!

ashi : khush !!!!!! (and goes and hugs her but khushi does not respond )

khushi : neal , mujhe mere room jaana hain , agar tumhaari issi baatein poori ho gayi ho then if u will plzz help take this luggage !

ashi : khush !!!! what's wrong with u ! tum mujhse baat bhi nahi karogi !

khushi (in an adamant way ): neal main jaa rahi hoo ( and leaves )

ashi :( almost in tears ) neal ………

neal : don't worry !! who thodi si naraaz hain tumse , isiliye aisa kar rahi hain (patting her shoulder )

ashi : par maine aisa kyaa kar diya ??

neal : woh toh tumhe khud sochna chaahiye annie ki tumne kyaa kiya or infact kyaa nahi kiya (leaves )

ashi : (in her mind ) hey bhaggu !!! khush mujhse naraaz kyun hain ?? maine aisa kyaa kar diya ?? plzz god main uske dosti ke bina nahi reh sakti , she is soo near to me but yet far …….. god plzzzzzz help me (leaves in a sober mood )

some one calls her from behind : hey annie !!!!!!

ashi : harsh !!!!!!!! naina !!!!!!! tum log !!!! here ??

harsh : offcouse annie ! hum paanch kabhi bhi ek doosre se alag nahi reh sakte naa ,after all 5 fingers make a fist which is strong naa …
naina :offcourse annie !!!!!

ashi : but ………. Khush mujhse baat nahi kar rahi

h and N : its ok annie !!!!! she's a lil upset coz of u !!!!! go and speak to her , phir sab theek ho jaayega , like before

ashi : ok !!! anyways I think u need to go and unpack !! byee

h and n : yaa !!!! byeeee

ashi : waise nains , girls hostel is taraf hain alrite ,wahaa mat chali jaana (smiling naughtily)

naina : shut up annie !!! mujhe pata hain !!! (blushes and leaves )

ashi : waise aap kyaa unke footprints ko dekte rahenge eternity tak yaa phir jaayenge else I have no issues in pushing u !!!!!

neal : ok baba !!!! jaa raha hoo !!!! happy !!!

ashi : (in her mind ) pehle jaisa !! tumhe kyaa pata ki meri life pele jaisi nahi rahi !! not the same anvesha !!! not annie , not ur annie but she is ashi ! sab kuch kitna badal gaya ek saal main , me , my life , my likes , dislikes ………my dreams ! how will I say u all that !!! I am in love , yes I am ,but am equally afraid as to being ditched again by him , but even then I love him ….. (gives a sigh ) thanks bhaggu !!!! u sent back them to me !!!!!

yuvi : oh !!! now even these 3 ppl !!!!! ab ashi ko toh meri zaroorat nahi !!!! but woh neal ,but I have seen an ashi soo emotional in front of everyone !! haan mere saamne kabhi kabhi who roti thi , but ………… (hits against the wall and continues cursing neal )

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