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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
rocking fic yaar.best of luck 4 ur exams & plz jaldi likho na.i love ur fic 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
hey! dont do this , u have given us such a lovely fic dont stop mid way, but i can understand u have xams so i wish u all gud luck, take u'r time & complete it.


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ashi, khushi and naina are discussing abt their old days. Ashi is asking them every detail abt nainital, their homes, teachers,………….
Khushi : toh tu bata ….yahaa kaisa hain ??
Naina : haa !!!! ab tumhari baari hain hotseat par
Ashi :(in a lil low note ) usse pehle mujhe aap donon ko ek baat bolni thi
Khushi and Naina : kyaa ???
Ashi : tum log harsh aur neal ko nahi bataaogi ki aaj class main kyaa hua
Khushi & naina : kyun ??
Ashi : plzzzzzz
Naina : koi tumse aise baat kare aur hum kuch na kare ?? annie ……..
Khushi (holds ashi's hand ): ok nahi bataayenge ! (signs even naina to do so ) par baat kyaa hain ??
Ashi (trying to be indifferent) :kuch nahi !!! ……..kuch bhi toh nahi !!!!
Khushi : tumhe kyaa lagta hain ?? tum humse jhoot bol sakti ho ?? hum kyaa tumhe brainless bimbos dikthe hain ??
Ashi : plzzzzzzzzz , kuch mat poocho ! is waqt mere paas koi answers nahi hain
Naina :but annie ……….. (just then harsh and neal come and the girls see them and keep quiet )

Harsh : ( like the old man in sholay): itna sannaata kyun hain bhai ??
Neal : lagta hain ab humaari social class hain , sabhi so rahe hain naa ……
(all of them burst out laughing and the whole canteen stares at them for a second )
ashi : neal !!! who toh ek outstanding class tha naa !!!!! …………sabhi log class ke out stand karte the !!!!!!!
neal : tu toh bach gayi , but we had to suffer in that class for an year !!!!!
harsh : aur woh physics ka class !!!!!! god !!!
khushi : sach bolu mujhe abhi tak ohms law samajh main nahi aaye !!!woh toh hamesha circuits banaate rehte the and tell " yeh 55 ohm ka hain , yeh 67 ohm ka hain and yeh ……."
Naina :And within that hum sab so jaate !!!!!
Ashi : yahaa pe bahut cool tha !!!!! I mean maine kuch toh seekha !!! I bet agar RD sir, ayeasha ma'am , sab hote toh kaisa hota ??
Harsh :yeh sab kaun hain ??
Ashi : humaare last year ke teachers ……jo maurya chod ke chale gaye !! abhi toh sabhi .
All of them : DUH UH 'S HAIN !!!!!!! (and start laughing )

Just then ashi receives a message on her cell from Sid to come to their table.
Ashi: guy's abhi mujhe ek kaam hain!!! Meet u later!!

Ashi comes to the table where uv, ranveer , tia,sid , meher , pri and vrinda are seated . a chair is vacant next to uv , ashi goes there to sit but just then remembers what uv told her in the class and goes and sits next to vrinda who is almost opposite to him . all of sense her behaviour towads uv , understand it , but prefer not to talk abt it . meanwhile uv feels bad , and guilty at the same time and just stares at ashi , but ashi tries not to face him .

Ashi : toh sid !!!! mujhe yahaa kyun bulaaya ??
Sid : woh ………..
Vrinda : woh nus uhi …..
Tia : woh actually …..
Ashi : kyaaa hain !!!!! tum sab kyaa kehna chahate ho ?? (almost irritated )
Ranveer : woh actually hum sab tumse yeh ………
(just then all her friends come there and khushi keeps her hand on ashi's shoulder )
khushi : annie tumne yeh theek nahi kiyaa !!!!!
ashi : ab maine kyaa kar diya ??
harsh : apne doston se nahi milwaaogi ??
neal : mujhse toh milwa chuki hain !!!!
khushi : toh kyaa !!!!! hum chaaron ke alag alag brains hain , ek nahi ki tumse mil liya toh sab se mil liya !!!!
ashi : haan !!!!! tum kyaa apne aapko Alexander the great samajhte ho !!!
neal : chup !!!!! tuje pata hain naa ki mujhe history bilkul nahi pasand , phir ……..
ashi : but history teacher to bahut pasand thi !!!!! (winks ) jab hum sab class ke out the toh sirf tum woh class attend karte the !!
all her gang : haan bilkul !!!!!! u know u were her fav student !!!!!! wah !! kyaa class tha !!!!
neal : plzzzzzzzz stop it !!!!!!! mujhe woh chashmish ma'am bilkul nahi pasand !she was like a nerd !!!!!! hamesha mere hi peeche padi rehti thi !!!!!
ashi : kyaa pata !!!yaha pe bhi aa jaaye !!!
neal : annie !!!!!
all the maurya team : annie ?????????
ashi : me !!!! annie !!!!! alrite ??
khushi : now stop it !!!!! tum log bhi naa ……. And annie apne friends ko introduce karo naa !!!
ashi : alrite !!!!
(pointing to each one as she calls their names )
yeh sid hain !!!!! sab se bada bewakoof and joker no.1 , but a true person by heart , hamesha sab ko hasa hasa kar irritate karta rehta hain !!! kabhi kabhi toh mujhe lagta hain ki koi itna stupid kaise ho sakta hain !!!
yeh pri ! motiroli ! hamesha iski duniya khane ke peeche ghoomti rehti hain , but a real sweetu ! yeh ek angle ………oops angel hain . but she has a childs heart !
yeh meher !!!!!! miss beautiful and brainy ! u know what ?? maurya main shaayad hi koi aisa ladka hoga jisko ispar crush nahi hain ! (meher blushes and so does sid ) . she is another angel !
(next is uv's turn but ashi somehow feels uncomfortable and suddenly jumps to introduce someone else . both naina and khushi observe this but not the guys )
this is tadaa !!!!!! TIMBO !!!!! timbett , i.e tia ahuja !!!! (tia gives a angry look to her ) iske paas dimaag nahi hain , actually isne use mama ko de diya hain , I mean pehle tha ab nahi hain ! (ashi sees tia staring wildly at her ) oh puhleez itna tacky look mat do (in tia's style ) goes and keeps her hand on tia's shoulder , anyways yeh mom ki "BEST FRIEND "hain . she is the main angle in the triangle !!! oops I mean in the three angels ! and yes girls agar tumhe make up , nail care , hair care , skin care ……..and koi bhi care other than brain care ke baare main koi bhi lessons yaa tips jaanna ho toh timbett is there for u . and boys tum bhi is facility ka use kar sakte ho !!!! …………..but I know that she has a child's heart and is innocent . yeh apne friends ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain !!! and yes iske papa mere guardian hain !!!!!!
yeh hain mate vrindeshwari devi !!!! actually vrinda , itna darne ki koi baat nahi , but her name is just "vrinda " . meri roommate hain . bilkul ek duffer hain , isko nobel peace prize milna chahiye !! coz according to her is duniya main koi bhi bura insaan hai !! yeh kabhi kisi ka bura soch bhi nahi sakti . studies main hamesha first !!!
(by now ashi realizes that naina and khushi are staring at her for not introducing yuvi ) yeh rahi angels ki ek group !!!!! next ………….(manages to go near uv )
yeh hain yuvraj dev , uv . yashwant dev ke bete !!!!! yeh guitar bahut accha bajaata hain and gaata bhi hain . he composes music and is a music buff !!!!!(feeling uncomfortable moves to varun )
yeh va…va….varun hain !!!!! (trying to stammer ) a big brain !!! hamesha kitaabon main dooba rehta hain ! a very true friend indeed ! hamesha sab ki help karta rehta hain . isiki wajah se main nainital nahi aa paaye thi …..and woh story main baad main bataaongi !
and yes !!!!!! yeh hain thakur !!!! i.e ranveer sisodia !! sab se gutsy ,sab se accha and sab se bold !!! u know what thakur bhi ek bahut bada music buff hain and so is timbo ! actually is saal ki holidays hum sab ne thakur ke yahaa bitaaya tha , sanganer i.e in rajasthan main ! even he has big brains !!!

and now it's your turn !!!!!! (going to st.marks gang)
yeh !! tumlog ko pata hain naa ……..Neal hain !!! mera sabse pehla friend !! we met when we were toddlers !! tab se mera dimaag paka raha hain ! iska screw sirf dheela hi nahi kahi kho gaya hain !! hamesha irritate karta hain ! but even then …………I love him a lot !!!(goes and hugs him , and no guesses uv is jealous ) and btw neal nanna (grandma ) loves me more than u !!!! (neal stares at her )
and yeh !! khushi !!!! khush , I call her so . as her name says she is khushi !!!! jahaa bhi jaati hain hamesha khusiyan saath laati hain !!!! sabse acchi and sabse sweet !isse main aur neal tab mile the jab hum 1 saal ke the , mama tells so ! u know what koi mujhse naraaz ho jaaye , I don't care much , but I cant stand khushi being angry with me !! (and hugs khushi )
this is harsh !! very stupid and a big duffer ! sid tumse bhi , I know u ppl wont believe that , but its true !! harsh hamesha hum sab ko hasaata rehta hain ! par jab serious ho jaaye yaa gussa ho jaaye toh bhaggu bhi nahi bacha sakta ! ek brainy hain and yeh ek engineer banna chahata hain !
and yeh eyes hain !!!! I mean naina ! tum logon ne dekha hoga , is ki aanken bahut beautiful hain so her name is naina !! pata hain mom kept her name as naina ! sonia-naina , naina – sonia arrrrgggghhhhhhhh rhyming !! yeh sab mujhse bade hain , isiliye hamesha dada giri karte rehte hain !!! but not anymore !!!

all start laughing and greet each other . tia is really impressed by both naina and khushi and thinks " actually is red head ki friends uske tarah tacky nahi hain , then tia wonders why is she like this !!!" . ranveer is impressed by both khushi's simplicity and naina's charm , both had no much make up , nor accessories nor did they go for heavy designer dresses like tia and shyla . sid couldn't help but drool over the girls and pri couldn't help dreaming abt the guys . varun was just impressed by harsh's intelligence and meher was busy talking with vrinda abt their assignment .
by then uv goes and stands near ashi and tries to speak to her , but by then ashi sees him and tries to move away , yuvi holds her hand and stops her , but he doesn't notice two eyes watching them ………..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
😳

He holds her hand!!!
How sweet!

Continue ASAP please!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!
This is the BESTEST fan-fic I have ever read!!!!!
PLEASE CONTIUNE!!
Waiting..waiting...

luv,
anku
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
I can't wait any more it's getting more & more exciting. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
aww...tht was soooo cute..i loved it...plss cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really nice. the intro part of the frnds was written very well. and yes i am just waiting 4 yuvi to say something 2 aashi. please continue fast.


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guyssnce u ppl are soo sweet and enthu , i am posting the next part now !! but the part 10 shall be posted only on tuesday !! monday prac exam hain isiliye
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ashi: (whispering so that only uv can hear) uv plzzzzzz mera haath chodo!!!!
Uv: ashi ……
Ashi: tumne suna nahi mera haath chodo!!
Uv: mujhe tumse baat karni hain
Ashi: oh!!!! but sorry main strangers se baat nahi karti!!!
Uv : ( taken aback ) strangers !!!!!!
Ashi : haan tum mere liye ek stranger hi ho !!!
Uv : ashi ……tum yeh kyaa keh rahi ho ?? are u mad or what ! how can I be a stranger to u ???
Ashi : no uv !!!! I am not mad !! I am just telling u what u told me !! after all I am no one to u no ?(in a sarcastic tone ) and u told me to not bother u !!!! and I hope that even u too follow the same what u said to me !! (trying very hard to get her hands out of his grasp )
Uv : I told that because ……….i was in a bad mood !11
Ashi : oh mood !! tumhare liye har relation mood ke hisaab se banta and bigadta hain ??? sorry , but not for me !!!!
Uv : listen to me ashi !!!
Ashi : no !!!! u listen to me !! I don't want harsh or neal to see u catching my hand like this !!! alrite !!
Uv : why ??
Ashi : coz they may hurt u !!! they cant stand anyone abusing me !!! or misbehaving with me !!!
Uv : I don't care !
Ashi : u don't care , but I do ! I don't want them to be involved in a petty issue !! and listen uv , main apna koi tamasha nahi banana chahati !!!!! I am in a happy mood now , now u don't spoil it !!!!
Uv : me ?? spoiling your mood !!
Ashi : yeh u !!!!
(by then tia comes there and sees uv holding ashi's hand tightly )
tia : puhleez uv !!! leave her hand !!
uv : no !!!!
tia : uv …….plzzzzzzzzz leave her ! agar kisi ne dekh liya to problem create ho sakta hain !!! come'on plzzzzz (even ranveer comes there )
ranveer : banaa !! tia is right !! unka haath chodiye ! (and holds uv's hand , now uv had to leave her hand . ashi sees her wrist and there were marks left by his fingers coz his grasp was soo tight that it hurted , but she didn't want him to leave her hand , but she had to ask him to do so , coz she had to speak abt their relation to others , else they would not accept uv . tia sees those marks )
tia : oh …..gosh !! ashi !!! tumhara hand !!! uv !!! how tacky ……tum aisa kaise kar sakte the !!!!!
ashi : timbo !!!! don't yell !! else they will come here and a big scene will be created here !! (she observes harsh coming there and quickly interchanges her watch and wristband so that the marks are not visible )
harsh : hi !!!!! yahaa koi secret meeting ho rahi hain kyaa !!!
ashi : (almost trying to be normal ) haan !!!! hum yeh soch rahe the ki hum apna nayaa face pack kispar try kare ! then I told them that harsh hain naa !!!(patting his back )
harsh : kyaa pack karna hain !!!!
ashi : tumhe pack karke andromeda galaxy bhejna hain !!!! ab chalo (leaves with him , turns back and gives a glance to both tia and ranveer )

tia : uv !!!!! tumne aisa kyun kiya ?
uv : I wanted to speak to her , but she didn't listen to me …….
Tia : that doesn't mean that u had to behave like a beast ! do u have any explanation for such a behavior !!! come'on uv tum itne possessive kyun hote jaa rahe ho !!!!
Uv : and what she did !!!!! was that right ??
Tia : yes !!!! it was !!! u forced her to do so !! tumhine toh usse kaha " mere maamle main dhakal mat do " . u told her that she is nobody to bother about u !
(the entire maurya group was stunned to see tia fighting for ashi )
uv : tia !!!! even u are supporting ashi !! I don't believe that !!!
tia : yes uv !!! I am and I will !! and not only me all of them here do support her
(uv looks around to see his friends including Sid staring at him ) uv !! u say u love her and understand her ?? in fact tia thinks u don't even know her !! tumne usse bahut hurt kiya hain apni stupid jealousy ke wajah se ! u didn't even give her a chance to speak to u , u insulted her and all of sudden u believe her to be too good towards u ! this is soo tacky !! just because she doesn't show off her emotions doesn't mean that she can be treated soo badly !!!!alrite ! tia abhi yahaa se jaa rahi hain !! tia cant take it any more !!!!

(all of them leave nodding their heads except vrinda and ranveer , uv just collapses on the chair )
vrinda : ( keeps her hand on uv's shoulder ) uv ! don't worry ! sab kuch theek ho jaayega !!
ranveer : haan banaa !! unhe thoda sa waqt deejiye !!
uv : dude !! mere samajh main kuch nahi aa raha ki main kyaa karu aur kyaa nahi !!
vrinda : uv !!!! main ashi ko jaanti hoon !! she is just trying to mask her emotions in front of her friends . tumhe pata hain naa woh uske liye kitna care karte hain . she was telling that they came to maurya just because , they couldn't leave her alone . and don't worry she will take care of everything !! just support her , that's it !! she just needs your support not your anger or jealousy
ranveer : haa banaa !! vrinda theek keh rahi hain !! aur rahi baat neal ki , hume kyaa pata ki unka rishta kyaa hain !!! kabhi kabhi hume apne faisalon ko zara sa waqt dekhar dekna chaahiye !!
uv : but jab bhi main use uske saath dekhta hoon ……mujhe gussa aata hain …….after all I love her !!
ranveer : I understand it !!! even I have been through this …..(remembers tia with arjun )
uv : I really don't know what to do !!!!
vrinda : uv ! plzzzzz apne emotions ko chupakar rakho !! who knows what is their relationship !! but one thing is clear !!!! ashi sirf tumse pyaar karti hain !! she only loves u !! and no one else can take your place in her heart and in her life (uv feels somewhat better hearing this but is still not sure ) ashi ne mujhse khud yeh kahaa hain
ranveer : yes !! she only loves u !! else why would she always save u ?? and now get ready and go to class !!else mitra aa gaye toh …….

On the other side tia is walking with her angels
Pri : tia !! tumne ashi ko ……..usse defend kiya ??
Meher : haan tia !!!
Tia :yes angels !!! tia ne ashi ko defend kiya …….pata hain kyun ……ashi tia ke liye ek sister jaisi hain
P and M : kyaaaaa ?????????
Tia :yes babes !! ashi tia ke liye ek sister ki tarah hain ! so what if we always keep fighting , but whenever we are in problem we both help each other !! tia really cares for her ! ashi ke baare main tia ko pehle wrong impression tha , but when tia spoke to sonia aunty , tab tia ko pata chala ki ashi kitne acchi hain ! kabhi kabhi thodi si crack hain …….but she is good !! even papa . kailash kaka say the same !!
(just then ashi runs and comes and holds tia )
tia : ashi !!!!!! tumhe kyaa hua ??
ashi : kuch nahi timbo !!! I am fine !! anyways thanks ki tumne situation sambhal liya !! (panting for breath )
tia : its ok !! askir tia ahuja hona koi aisi waisi baat nahi hain !! and tum naa ab deep breathing karo warna ………..
ashi : stop it timbo !!! mujhe timbett infection ka shikaar nahi hona !! anyways bye !!!!(and starts running to the other side where khushi and naina are waiting )
tia : ewwwwww !!!!! that red head !!!!! anyways angels chalo ! tia ko apna make up touch karna hain !!

ashi , naina and khushi are walking . just then naina remembers something and leaves .
khushi : so ……..
ashi : so kyaa ??
khushi : u like him ??
ashi : nahi ……aisi koi baat nahi hain ………main uv se pyaar nahi karti !!
khushi : maine uv kab kahaa ?? and when did I ask that u love him or not ???
ashi : woh ……..
khushi : annie !!!! don't worry !! u can speak to me !! if u really like him ……sorry love him(winks ) main tumhaara saath doongi !!!
ashi : mujhe bhook lagi hain main canteen jaa rahi hoo !!!!(tries to leave , khushi holds her hand )
khushi : stop !!!!! (removes her wristband ) oh !! so u don't love him ?? (pointing towards those marks )
ashi : khush …….. (unable to ctrl her emotions ,she hugs khushi and starts to sob )
khushi : ( wiping her tears ) u know what !!!!! tum rote hua bilkul acchi nahi lagti ! u look like ………..emmmm………..et !! bahut stupid lagti ho !!
ashi : main ……..
khushi : shhhhhhhh………..i wont tell anything of this to anyone even naina and I will say her to keep quiet too . stop it now !! (asking her to stop crying ) we will speak about this in the evening in our room !! alrite !! abhi classes ke liye chalte hain else we will be late !!!!

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