Duh-uh v/s Wow-oh (fic) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!! plz continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i need to kno wut happens!!!!plz im sooooooo excited!!!! 😃

p.s. AWSOME JOB!!!! 😃 😃 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5
Vrinda walks over to ashi luking worridly at her best friend.
V:Kya hua?
A: Woh Yuvi...i just hate him so much.
V: Tumne abhi kaha ki u love him.
A: Haan,i love him.
V:Par tumne kaha u hate him.
A: Aarrg vrinde!tum kuch nahin samjhogi.tum kya janti ho.tum aur aman ke bich mein zada koi probs. kabhi nahin hue.i need sum1 who is more xperienced in heartbreak.
V: i know tum kisse baat kar sakti ho.
A:kisse?
V: Shyla.
Ashi gets angry.
A: that stupid dumbo bimbo psycho whacko weirdo wow-oh kehne wali paagal ladki.wo kya janti hai.ihate that stupid witch!
V:Ashi,ashi,plz calm down.tum shyla se itna gussa kyon ho?
A:I hate her.don't ask why.i just hate her.
V: kal tak to tumhe woh achi lagti thi ,ab kya hua?
A: Thats bcoz now i know that she is a ..she is a ..i dont know wat she is but I hate her!!!!!
V: Yuvi ki wajah se na?
A: Wat Yuvi?uska naam fake he-man loser,psycho pathetic daddy's boy hai!Loser,creep ,cheat.
V: um...shayad ye sahi waqt nahin hai batane ka par....uv is ur partner in that dance class.jo woh new teacher le rahi hai.
A:WHAT???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
👏 awesome.....keep it goin
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
drishtiiiiiiii........wat amazin twists n turns r u givin to this fic......this is rocking.......pls pls pls continue it asap.....and dont wait 4 too long....if no one replies they r missin on the gud stuff.......dont make us suffer because of tht plssssssss 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
plzzzz continue.its simple mind boggling
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
plz plz plz plz plz continue

the story n turns are FABLOUS 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6
"WHAT!", Ashi said again.
V:Haan,yeh saach hai.new teacher ne khud hi pairs baanaye hain aur tum Yuvi ki partner ho.maine aaj hi list dekhi.
A:Hey Bhaggu,aapne merehi life itne difficult kyun banaye?
V:Ashi,kuch nahin hota.tum pehle bhi uske saath dance kar chuki ho.
A:par not when he had a girlfriend.
V:Girlfriend?kaun?
A:Shyla.The great wow-oh whacko.
V:C'mon Ashi,aisa kuch nahin hoga.Tum to Yuvi ko jaanti hi ho,who kitna flirt karta hai.
A:Haan,I know he's a flirt but this is serious.Usne……..usne us Shyla ko humari special place mein bulaya hai.Shed mein.how dare he.
V:Umm….Ashi,agar tumhe itna bura lagta hai toh tum usse batado na.
A:Kya boloon?Yuvi,tum gadhe ho,loser ho,psycho ho aur bahut bade flirt ho and yes tumne mujpe cheat kiya,par kya karoon,yeh dil maange more.More what?Insults?heart-break?haan,mein stupid nahin hoon.Mein baari baari usse mujhe phasane ka chance nahin doongi.Aaj se,I'm over him,ok.
Ashi smiles a fake smile & says with a false look of courage:
A:Mere lia Yuvi kuch nahin hai.
She walks out of the room grimacing.
Then she runs inside the room again, locks the room & falls on her bed sobbing.
A:I love u,yuvi.mein tumhe nahin bhool sakti.
Just then some1 knocks on the door.
Vrinda looked worriedly at Ashi &then at the door.
V: Kaun hai?
S:Shyla.let me come in.
Ashi gets up ,wipes her tears,opens the door & starts going out of the room.
S:Oh hi Ashi.
Ashi doesn't answer & walks past her.Then she turns &says..
A:Its Anvesha.don't call me Ashi.You s tupid wow-oh,whatever that means.
Shyla looks bewildered & asks Vrinda.
S:(wid her dumb accent )Ab ise kya hogaya?
V:Hummph.
Vrinda ignores her follows Ashi leaving Shyla alone.
S:Wow-oh.Yeh Anvesha ko kya hogaya.
Just then Yuvi comes.
Edited by ashi912 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
bow -wow my god!

plz continue soon

its fablous👏

im waiting for Ashi n Yuvi to dance in the dance class 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Ashi912.. there is one written mistake.. dont mind me telling u tht.. the part u posted B4 was also part 5.. and the above one is also part 5? or 6?

plz corrrect it if possible..

the rest of the fanfic is Superb 👏

continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
that's a kool fic
pls continue

Nicky 😊 😊

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