Duh-uh v/s Wow-oh (fic) - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue wereally want to knw wht happened next
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Posted: 19 years ago
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why r u not writing plz continuw we r all r waiting for it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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arre where are you ?? 😡


plzzzzzzzzz ashi912 continue the fic !! plzzzzz plzzzzzzz plzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
where r u?????????????????????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
i really think it roxxxx plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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where r u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????? we need to know wut happens as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont keep us waiting!!!!!its getting difficult to wait everyday now!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey bhagu .. Ashi912.. plzzzzz continue.. 22nd se 23rd ho gaya.. december mein Chtistmas aa gaya.. December 2005 se January 2006 Aane Wala hai/.... tum kahan ho>??

jab aaogi tab aapni fanfic post karna MAT bhoolna.. plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 8
Ashi looked at her mom sitting next to her.
A:What r u doing here?
S:Mamum,tum mujhe dekh kar khush nahin lag rahi ho.Main abhi abhi wapas aaee hoon.Come on,give ur mamma a hug.
A:Mamma.
Ashi & Sonia hug.
S:Shona,maine sab sun liya.Kya hua,mamum,Yuvi aur tumhare biich?
A:Nothing.Don't talk about that psycho.I hate him!
S:No,baby,I know u don't .u care a lot about him,haina?
A:Nahin aisa kuch nahin hai.i don't care about him.
Just then Sid comes running & says to Ashi: "Ashi,Yuvi ka guitar Mitra sir ne le liya,who bahut upset hai.Please tum kuch karo na,wo meri koi baat nahin sun raha hai."
Ashi gets up & says worriedly: "Who hai kahan?"
Sid: Room main ,baat karo na tum usse .
A:OK,u go .I'll just come.
A(to sonia): Mamma,I've gotta go.see u.bye.
S(smiling):Acha tum kya keh rahi thi.tum yuvi ke bare main care nahin karti.
A:MAMMA
S:OK OK,ab jao.
Ashi goes to Yuvi's room & sees him sitting on his bed & tuning his guitar.
Ashi looks shocked to see his guitar.
Yuvi looks at Ashi,smiles & gets up.
Y:Hi.tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?I was looking for u par tum kahin nahin mili.
A:U..U…Yuvi tum itne ghatia insaan ho.
Y:Maine kya kiya?
A:Abhi sid ne mujhse bola ki mitra ne tumhare guitar le liya hai,but u have it.
Y:Oh.Sid ne tumhe phasaya.
A:What do u mean?
Y:i was telling him ki wanted to talk to u,so he called u.tum mujhse gussa mat ho,yeh sid ne kiya.muje iske bare main kuch nahin pata tha.
A:OK,whatever.ab anyways,tumhe kya baat karni hai,karo ab.
Y:Haan,yeh baat hai ki we both r partners in that dance class.
A:Pata hai.
Y:So u'r cool with it,na?haina Aahi.Haina,haina, haina.
A:Haan,whatever.Ab I'll go Ok.
She moves towards the door to go out but Yuvi grabs her hand & stops her.
A:Kya hai?
Y:Well,I just wanted to say that I'm sorry about the way I behaved with u earlier.
A:Its Ok.
Y:No its not.i'm really sorry.mujhe aisa nahin karba chahiye tha.
He moves closer to her not letting go of her hand.
Y:Main aisa phirse nahin karoonga OK.
He moves even more closer to her.
A:Tum abhi wohi toh kar rahe ho.
Y:Oh ,sorry.
He lets go of her hand reluctantly & moves away from her.
Y:Ashi,anyways,see u tomorrow dance class main.Bye.
He pushes her out of the door .
A:Yuvi.
Y:Bye Ashi.
Ashi laughs & shakes her head.
A:Bye.
She leaves.
NEXT DAY in the dance class the teaher,Ms.khusboo(Ms.K) is addressing the kids.
Ms.K: Bachoon,dance is a very special art .i hope aap sab is class ko enjoy karenge.Maine class ke bachoon ki ek list banadi hai aur maine randomly sabko pair up kar diya hai.I hope kisi ko problem nahin hai.Ab hum sab dance karenge.Main jab music on karoongi tab aap sab log apne partners ke saath aage aainge aur dance karenge.You can do whatever steps u want to do.main aap log ke steps dekhoongi aur aap logon ko aapke steps aur chemistry aur coordination par marks doongi.Class ke end main I'll tell u ur marks & I'll tell u how to improve.Now let the music begin.
She put on some ballroom music.
Yuvi & Ashi stepped forward & started dancing.

Edited by ashi912 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
wow amazing..

its fablous..
i'm waiting for their patch up-.. i think in the other parts they patch up..

n the fanfic part no is 8 not 7
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
Really cool waiting 2 no abt their dance.

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