Duh-uh v/s Wow-oh (fic) - Page 6

Originally posted by: divya_92

Ashi912.. there is one written mistake.. dont mind me telling u tht.. the part u posted B4 was also part 5.. and the above one is also part 5? or 6?

plz corrrect it if possible..

the rest of the fanfic is Superb 👏

continue soon

ya u r rite.sorry i made a mistake.it is part 6 only.i've corrected it now.thanx 4 telling me 😃

Part 7
Shyla sees Yuvi & goes to him.
Yuvi doesnt greet her & straigt away says:Tumne Ashi ko dekha hai kya?
S: Haan woh abhi yahan hi thi.Woh bahut bure mood main hai.She yelled at me.
Y:Oh no.
S:Yeah,i feel very bad.
Y:Nahin i didn't mean u.i meant Ashi.Tumhe pata hai ki woh kahan gayee hai.
S:Nahin mujhe nahin pata.shayad canteen,i dont know.par uv usse mujhse bahut rudely baat kiya.
Shyla says this trying to get Yuvi's sympathy but uv is too lost in his thoughts 4 ashi.
Y: Acha bye.
He goes away leaving shyla saying"Yuvi,yuvi,come here"
Then he turns back & says...
Y: Shy,aaj humari date jo thi na.we'll have 2 cancel it ok.
S: What?????!!!!
Y: yes,bye.
He goes away leaving shyla very angry.

Meanwhile ashi is sitting in CCD with Vrinda sitting next to her.
A: How i hate that shyla.usse maurya main kabhi nahin aana cahiye tha.she is sooooooooooo.....
V: Bas ashi,calm down,shyla ko nahin pata tha ki tum Yuvi se pyaar karti ho.
Ashi gets upset & starts yelling:I dont love him.Main Yuvi se pyaar nahin karti.
Just then some1 sits next to her & places his/her hand on ashi's
Ashi looks at the person & says :YOU!

no1 is reading.half of the replies r mine only. 😭

plllllzzzzzzzzzz reply if u r reading

Great going !!! 👏 👏 👏

Please continue.

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue.. 👏

i must say tht ur story is better dan d present remix story.. 😕 😕

some one can actually shut ashi's mouth !!!!!!!
wow !!!!!!! kisne billi ke gale main ghanti baanddhi ??

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this shyla stuff looks sick she over-acts what vo-oh its funny 😡

hey bhagu...

ashi912 tum kahan ho?? do i hv to complain the police??😛


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where are u ...

plz continue ur fanfic ASAP