Duh-uh v/s Wow-oh (fic)

hi guys,hope u aren't bored with my fics but i just wanted to write this .Plz if its bad tell me & i'll stop writing.BTW,in fic ashi's thought will b writtrn in italics
Anyways,heres the 1st Part
Cp 1-new girlfriend
Ashi is walking in the locker room thinking about Shyla her new roomie & friend.At first she had not liked Shyla but after Shyla had helped Vrinda,she changed her mind & started liking her.
Ashi reaches Yuvi's locker & she stops ............
Ashi thinks:Nahin,i've changed my mind again,i HATE YOU SHYLA.
her sudden change of mind has a cause.its bcoz she saw Yuvi openly flirting with Shyla.
How can he do this to me? what happened to his'i love you,ashi''s & "plz give me a 2nd chance:?Yuvi & Shyla.stupid timbo wow-oh psychotic shyla?
Ashi gets very upset but at the same time,she's very angry too.She stomps up to Yuvi & Shyla & hears Yuvi saying....
Y: Babes,lets meet in the shed tonight at 8"
I cant bear it anymore.the shed was our special place.yuvi & my special place & hes taking that loser wowoh there.
Yuvi sees Ashi glaring at him with tears in & he quickly said bye to shyla .
Y:Ashi.....i can explain.Plz dont cry.
A: Mujhe koi explanation ki zaroorat nahin hai aur main ro nahin rahin hoom.main tum jaise loser psychotic daddy's boy ke lia kabhi nahin rongi.Do u get that?
Yuvi looks stuned at her anger.She turns & walks away but yuvi comes to his senses & grabs her hand........

plz guys read this & comment.

no1 is reading.is it that bad? 😭 😭 😭

it is really good plz continue yaar

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Cp-2
Ashi looked at yuvi's hand holding hers.the sight of it brought painful,romantic,sweet memories all together.
She didn't want to let go but she had to be brave.Forget him,she told herself but her heart didn't agree but still she coudn't let him touch her.Why?she didn't know but she had to let him go.....
A:Chodo mujhe
Y: Nahin,1st u listen to me.
A: I don't want to talk to you.
Y: You'll have to.
A: Oh,so you'll force me.
Y: Yes,i will.
A: Acha,dekh lete hain.tum mujhe kaise force karoge.
Yuvi quickly grabbed her other hand & pushed her against a locker.
Y: Aise.now u'll have to listen to me.

I am eagerly waiting for next chap .

please post as soon as possible.

i hope we have a nice Romantic Chapter 3 😉 n Yuvi n Ashi patch up..

yesterday Yuvi promised me he wont fall for Shyla 😊

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omg...... omg omg next part plsssssssssssss........drishti r u an nobel prize winner or somethin........continue wht r u waitin 4 ......jab tak mein hoon ure fic will never be unread...... continue it now im dying to no wht happens and u know i don hve patience so keep goin