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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: FollowYourHeart



kavssssssssss...am trying to de code ur dabba since past two days...trying to link all three sigggys..but am failing tooooooooooooooooooooo....plz bata na am dying wid d suspense....bata bata i wana re discover itttttttttttttttttttt...i sach main am unable to form the connnectionnnnn....is it abt Ay being Soulmates?...but i thought u knew that before only.....i dunno TELL MEEEEEEEEEEE plj acchi hai na acchi hai naaaaaaaa telll me.."makin bhola bhala face"


ahhh now i got it, why u didn't find out till now
the only connection b/w the three is AY..... dont connect them
look at them separately n one of them is answer
n u know what i LOVE torturing -ppl.... HAHA... mein achi bachi nahi hun
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kavssssssss...its d scene when yuvi ke dad tells him ki his mom wants to ddivorce him...and ashi overhears...fir raat main there is remix ka rehersals planned...but noone reaches on time just ashi reaches and sid is gng mad...fir ashi goes to look for yuvi...and finds him sititng akela down and out..and seeing her he goes like whacko whats the deal leave me alone...and she goes like i wld go but first tell me wat u gona do and then goes like ur parens divorcing its their choice their life u dnt have to fel disappointed and let down..instead concetrate on ur life ke priorities....and then se goes like APNE FRIENDS...APNA BAND...APNA MUSICCCCCCCCCCCCCCC".....OMG WHEN SHE SYAS THIS I DIE I DIE I DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE hope hope hope was just shining pouring brimminggggggggggg glemaing form her every fiberrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kavs stop being a devilllllllllllllll and tell i cant think i just cant do din se am scratching m head overrrr it...TELLL....tell warna raath kot erkeo sare un couples ke dream aayenge whom u hateeeeeeeee...muhahahahaha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: FollowYourHeart



bold...kavs i cldnt get u here....

and awwwwwwwwwww kavs🤗🤗🤗 i reallly dunno what to say omg this is kind of weird am actually blushing so damned hard reading all this...jab ki am of that kinds u lwd black mail people to do u know put me on channe ka jhaaad🤣☺️...but abhi right now i dunno seieng u love this so much am actually getitng butterflies in my tummy☺️☺️

Looooooooove you for loving thissssssssssssss.....i dunno...more than the fact ki i wrote this fic and blah....am happy ki u read it FOR AY and not FOR ME...and am happy i could make u FEEL AY and can u know cummunicate my vision of their love my vision of AY to u and u actuall felt it that is what is making me go all goosebumopish...coz AY r damn special yaar....and i wanted to put across a message...a message which they themselves brought to me....am glad u felt it kavsie and even loved it yeaaaaaaah🤗🤗🤗

and i know yaar ki u must have cried through out the fic....coz u know when i was writing it...i didnt sit and write it all in one go it took me some three freaking months to complete it....not coz i cldnt wrie this long in one go and blah...but coz u know i used to write this only only when i used to get flashes visions whatever u call it...aise hi kabhi i wld be sititng and doing some random work and ek dum se this vision wld cme before me and then i wld know ki yes this is what i have to write....and befoe writing i lived the visions myself cryied with it loonyly only then i cld write it....even i dunno how much i cried while writing this whole thing out..and am sho happppy u felt all that toooooooo and it could really stir your emotions and give u something to take away☺️🤗🤗



i actually missed this one earlier.... blind me!!!

@bold in my post - that was bcoz, all the while i was saying i didn't cry.... which is truly a blahh
i dont know, i dont knnow.... i never ever thought that a telly couple would effect my so much.... i mean, they even show the path to live in n i still believe ki this is all true but it is.....a couple on TV


waise, i wanted to tell u this, but forget....it took u THREE months na....so hardest part must b the end.... both sid n ashi's part or ashi's part alone .... ryt?

u know i loved sid's part like hell..... i cried while reading his part more than that pf ashi.... even now when i remember his part, i dont know, i cant even say u the ajeeb sa feeling i get, which is good
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bhaggu really DOES create bridges where there r NONE..
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smritsu...awwww.. HUGE HUGIEEEEEE.....BIG ONE............. dis is by far one of ur best bestest waorks...ur such a chhupa rustam...miss essay writer....huh..........godddddddddd..........i loved dis line...d one i posted above....
bhaggu does create bridges wen der are none....
although am a sucker for romance..n i cn never ever imagine AY apart.....bt somehw i cn imagine dem living with just der memories....
i really have no words.....smritsu ur a BHAGGU'S GIRL...dats alll
PS: dis more of a req....plz write a nice romantic one also....ill be really happy if u do....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LMAO @ dreams.... no problem....i believe that the strength of good increases more bcoz of bad


OMG that scene.... only i know how many times i have watched that scene last week.... u actually got it ryt smriti.... to some extent....but it was there frm start of AY's journey.... i'm afraid i'm leak out what it is, if i say more abt it

n u know, last weekend this scene saved my life..... i had plenty of free time n no net, my roomies were also not there
the b4 day i watched this scene.... n didn't feel like closing the tab... so i had it... i didn't shut down my lappy frm then.... only today, i closed that tab
that scene is so spl smriti

apne frnds, apna band, apna music
that was freaking awesome.... she is the hope.. SHE IS!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya.b

LMAO @ dreams.... no problem....i believe that the strength of good increases more bcoz of bad


OMG that scene.... only i know how many times i have watched that scene last week.... u actually got it ryt smriti.... to some extent....but it was there frm start of AY's journey.... i'm afraid i'm leak out what it is, if i say more abt it

n u know, last weekend this scene saved my life..... i had plenty of free time n no net, my roomies were also not there
the b4 day i watched this scene.... n didn't feel like closing the tab... so i had it... i didn't shut down my lappy frm then.... only today, i closed that tab
that scene is so spl smriti

apne frnds, apna band, apna music
that was freaking awesome.... she is the hope.. SHE IS!!!

kavya wat scene r u talkin abt?.is dis d one in which shes telling yuvi to do his own thing?
Edited by luv_wacko - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_wacko


kavz wat scene r u talkin abt?.is dis d one in which shes telling yuvi to do his own thing?


hmm i dont know ur name.... sry!!
ur good name plz?

i'm talking abt the scene, smriti posted in the last page....when he gets to know abt his mom divorcing his dad n ashi over hears.... that nyt, b4 going to the rehearsal, they talk
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya.b


hmm i dont know ur name.... sry!!
ur good name plz?

i'm talking abt the scene, smriti posted in the last page....when he gets to know abt his mom divorcing his dad n ashi over hears.... that nyt, b4 going to the rehearsal, they talk

uhhh am devyani....oohk dar scene..havnt we already discussed dat?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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MADS...DO NOT READ MINE AND KAVS KA POSTS...ELSE U WLD RUIN THE FIC FOR URSLEF YAAR...SO STAY AWAY FORM THESE POSTSq


Originally posted by: kavya.b


i actually missed this one earlier.... blind me!!!

@bold in my post - that was bcoz, all the while i was saying i didn't cry.... which is truly a blahh
i dont know, i dont knnow.... i never ever thought that a telly couple would effect my so much.... i mean, they even show the path to live in n i still believe ki this is all true but it is.....a couple on TV


waise, i wanted to tell u this, but forget....it took u THREE months na....so hardest part must b the end.... both sid n ashi's part or ashi's part alone .... ryt?

u know i loved sid's part like hell..... i cried while reading his part more than that pf ashi.... even now when i remember his part, i dont know, i cant even say u the ajeeb sa feeling i get, which is good



Nooooooooooooooooooooo no no...all this floooooowed....u know the ultimate climax....jab i showed moments with everyone...that all floooooowed....the hardest part was in between during the party and all....coz they were just filler parts u know...and i was so ecited to write aage ki i just cldnt feel that in betwene part....infact ultimately what i did was left that part in between and started writing form where he comes in....and wahaan se toh it flowed...but i used to write like one two thre paras in one eke ten days...as i said i never wrote until and unless it all flashed in front of my eyes and i myself felt it and cried with it...jab tak yeh feeling nahi aati i cldnt write only and once i felt this happpy sad i dunno what wala feeling once i cried just coz i was feleing way way too mch love only then i cld write it all......

Sid and Ashi i knew had to be special damn speciallllllllll....and i knew it cld neevr be just abt Ashi only..Sid just had o be there HE HAD TO....more than anything whats special to me is the sid-ashi part...the part when they both fele each other....i just ADORE that part....and apart form this i adore adore ADORE ADORE Sonuuuuuuuuuu's part...OMG.....and u know even though i just hate TR...and i know both of them r selfish gits...and they can never lvoe ashi yuvi or for that matter any dmaned one else apart forme ach other..ek doosre ko bhi they love so shallowly wat wld they lvoe others.....but ya i know all this..i know they can never really fele Ay but still in my fics i cant potray them as pathetic...even though i didnt write THEIR feelings...but i liked what i wrote from his pov...he feleing them....i like all of these moments....and the very end ashi bit..i sitll have to live it i just wrote that wwithout thinking....

and aww i know what u feleing kavs....even without u syaing it i know what u feeling...am just so happy u felt it...and i duno am damn proud of all those moments yaar....coz i really believe ay werent ever just abt the two of them....all these people DEFINE their life their love


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