-A Promise Of Eternity : AY One Shot- - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

I still havent read it AND M DEF NOT GONNA READ IT.

i hate u coz ur OS's r basically like hollywood movies which s despise write something like mera bollywooddddddddddd end mein sab theek aur agar theek nahiin to picture abhi baaki hai mere dost.

m not reading it at all.

Natalie.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posting next part of this one shot...

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She went up and saw her reflection...and the moment her eyes met hers in the mirror..she felt something or rather SOMEONE behind her..she turned with a jolt to see who it was but the only thing that came within her frame was the stereo which was playing a piece of music...it was the same music that had bee playing in the back ground all through the day..but THIS was the first time she noticed it..felt it...this music was not just music to her..it was the song of her soul...and right now just lookig at the stereo from which it flowed..made her feel as if as if..Yuvi was standing there beaming at her giving her a thumbs up...She smiled at the stereo with happy warm tears in her eyes..She didn't look back at the mirror..she didn't need to..she just turned and walked towards the party hall..strong confident and BEAUTIFUL..the vision she had seen in the stereo was all that she needed to feel BEAUTIFUL....and coz she felt it...every one else felt it too

There wasn't one person out there who wasn't mesmerized by her..but she wasn't aware of it...there was something unusual happening around her..within her...she was gliding through the meadows the forest, the mountains, the clouds...she was walking the skies..the sun, the moon, the stars, everything appeared so so so close..she had journeyed so so far..everything that was known and visible was left behind.. she was entering into a new unknown universe...but she wasn't scared...if anything she was gripped with, then it was an insane kind of excitement..she knew she was getting there there there..where she belonged...and suddenly she saw bridges everywhere..each one of them..whether near or far...led her to the same point the same destination..as if the path she followed the time she took the distance she traveled DIDN'T MATTER..NOTHING MATTERED..whatever happened ultimately she was BOUND to get at this same point..and EVERY moment in her life was a conspiracy to get her THERE..as if it were WRITTEN..as if it was her DESTINY

She got on to the first bridge she could touch and just started running without thinking without caring..the light from the other end was blinding her..it was so white so bright that it made her radiant from within...but she kept on running..she ran ran ran and ran with this faith that all her questions would be answered..all the mysteries would be solved..all the secrets revealed..and she would FINALLY come face to face with her ETERNITY..all she needed to do was cross this one bridge to complete this one journey at the end of which lay..a promise of eternity!!

So she ran...the more she ran the distant it grew...but she kept on running..she wouldn't stop...faith building within her..hope burning through her every fiber...she just COULDN'T stop..she knew she would get there it was but a matter of time...and even before she knew it..she touched it...OMG..she couldn't believe it...she was standing at the threshold of the VERY reason of her being..all her dreams her desires her wishes were manifesting into her DESTINY..she knew the minute she would open her eyes she would see the meaning of her life....she took a deep wwala breath..whispered a thank you prayer and opened her eyes.....her insane happiness left as a scream from her lungs..but it never vibrated the air with its force..instead it got choked midway..and all she could hear was the deadly silence whose echo left a hole in her very core...she was shattered...just when she thought she had it all..everything came crashing down...all the bridges vaished...the light extinguished..and all that her out stretched arms could touch was this..HER REALITY


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For next part...u all gotta earn it!☺️😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
thanksss nitz 🤗 wud read it tomo .. right now I gotta go .. but thanks SOOO MUCHH !!! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow wow dat was an awesome OS on AY dis is my 1st OS reading on dem as I m in new in RF I was in mjht forum bt now as I m now fan of remix so started reading AY ff n OS hehe anyways loveeee da last stanza hehe n hmm engagment n marriage hmm hmm wid whom offcourse yuvi rite anyways awww ashi was desperate to hear yuvi voice n even she couldn't talk wid yuvi she was happy to hear yuvi voicemail talk awww dats called true love lol loved it to n den 2nd part omg omg wow wow u wrote it so beautufully man I don't have any words to describe it it's jst perfect m speechless don't knw wat to say lol awesome wow superb everything hehe loved it
Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

Wow wow dat was an awesome OS on AY dis is my 1st OS reading on dem as I m in new in RF I was in mjht forum bt now as I m now fan of remix so started reading AY ff n OS hehe anyways loveeee da last stanza hehe n hmm engagment n marriage hmm hmm wid whom offcourse yuvi rite anyways awww ashi was desperate to hear yuvi voice n even she couldn't talk wid yuvi she was happy to hear yuvi voicemail talk awww dats called true love lol loved it to n den 2nd part omg omg wow wow u wrote it so beautufully man I don't have any words to describe it it's jst perfect m speechless don't knw wat to say lol awesome wow superb everything hehe loved it

ANUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU...u came u came u came...😳😳😳.....
ur most welcum here gurlyyyy....hope we'll see more of u here...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_wacko



ANUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU...u came u came u came...😳😳😳.....

ur most welcum here gurlyyyy....hope we'll see more of u here...😃


offcourse u will see me here now btw can u give me some links if AY ff plz I read 2 bt it was incomplete bt I loveeee it I wanna read more plz gimme some links plz

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