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Posted: 15 years ago
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debo....i suck at writing romance....i suck at writing conversations and dialogues...u wld hardly HARDLY find any dialogues in my fics/shots...they r mostly abt emotions and inner feelings inner chaos confusions dilemans certainity.....so i dunno if i can write a typical romantic fic...waise bhi my defi of romance damn diff...have written a ffew of that genre too....but dunno if u wld like them or no

and kavssssssssss....KILL THE SUSPENSE YAAR....am dying know seirously pet doing flip flopppppppppppppppppppppppp ab toh khana bhi digest nahi hoga until u just say it.....HAY BHAGGU...what was there form the start of their journey?...r u tlaking abt their first meet...?...thts what i got form your post in maktub.....i felt ki finally u realized ki ay were in love right form the word GO....right form the moment they met coz they r soulmates...they had been in love sicne the very creation of time...their souls were already in love...now all they had to do was relize this feel this...ru implying thisssssssssss???...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: FollowYourHeart

debo....i suck at writing romance....i suck at writing conversations and dialogues...u wld hardly HARDLY find any dialogues in my fics/shots...they r mostly abt emotions and inner feelings inner chaos confusions dilemans certainity.....so i dunno if i can write a typical romantic fic...waise bhi my defi of romance damn diff...have written a ffew of that genre too....but dunno if u wld like them or no

and kavssssssssss....KILL THE SUSPENSE YAAR....am dying know seirously pet doing flip flopppppppppppppppppppppppp ab toh khana bhi digest nahi hoga until u just say it.....HAY BHAGGU...what was there form the start of their journey?...r u tlaking abt their first meet...?...thts what i got form your post in maktub.....i felt ki finally u realized ki ay were in love right form the word GO....right form the moment they met coz they r soulmates...they had been in love sicne the very creation of time...their souls were already in love...now all they had to do was relize this feel this...ru implying thisssssssssss???...

@bold: ohh cmon..if u cn write abt dis..den u cn write abt romance too..smrits...i noe dat u have unravelled do many definations of love..which r soo complex to understand...i noe u cn do dis...n i will read ur romantic fic too..i think iv already read one of dose..rem i even told u dat i loved it..i think d christmas one...am i rite?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
!devyani - i can't get enough of discussing AY... whatever the scene may be.... but this one is damn spl to me

@smriti - i'll reply to ur other post later..... may b 2morow ...hopefully!!!

look at this....


i hope u got it now.... dont tell me no, or else i'll also start calling u timbo.... BEWARE .... i'm a devil
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Posted: 15 years ago
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okie guys....wld reply back later....🤗🤗🤗...love u allllllllllllllllll for loving this so damned much seeing u all love it has made me fall in lvoe wid it all over againnnnnnnn.....🤗🤗🤗

kavs....OUT WITH IT RIGHT NOW.....and check ay month topic..i guess u cant see d scenes thats y u didnt go omging thereeeeeeeee....first we went nuts on love station..their song...OMG...then the scene where they hug and pretend to be a couple jus to show off to YD and Sonu...and today debs posted PERFECT HONA ZAROORI NAHI HAI BUT REAL HONA BOHUT IMP HAI momentttttttttttttttt....AAAAAAAAAH...ii know i have to buck up there...wld dooooooooooo....aaj ke liye all i can feel and hea is APNE FRIENDS APNA BAND...APNA MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSIC...omg the way her eyes go all mistiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic when she says APNA MUSIC...omg omg omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg u cd see happy warmish tears beginning to crystalize...dunno kya tha but her eyes looked like water...jismain yuvi ke dreams jhalk rahe th...no not yuvi e...HER DREAM to see him play his guitar ALWAYS...ALWAYS...OMG
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: FollowYourHeart

okie guys....wld reply back later....🤗🤗🤗...love u allllllllllllllllll for loving this so damned much seeing u all love it has made me fall in lvoe wid it all over againnnnnnnn.....🤗🤗🤗

kavs....OUT WITH IT RIGHT NOW.....and check ay month topic..i guess u cant see d scenes thats y u didnt go omging thereeeeeeeee....first we went nuts on love station..their song...OMG...then the scene where they hug and pretend to be a couple jus to show off to YD and Sonu...and today debs posted PERFECT HONA ZAROORI NAHI HAI BUT REAL HONA BOHUT IMP HAI momentttttttttttttttt....AAAAAAAAAH...ii know i have to buck up there...wld dooooooooooo....aaj ke liye all i can feel and hea is APNE FRIENDS APNA BAND...APNA MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSIC...omg the way her eyes go all mistiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic when she says APNA MUSIC...omg omg omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg u cd see happy warmish tears beginning to crystalize...dunno kya tha but her eyes looked like water...jismain yuvi ke dreams jhalk rahe th...no not yuvi e...HER DREAM to see him play his guitar ALWAYS...ALWAYS...OMG

u noe even if she din feel all dis...we are surely feeling it.....sometimes i feel..ki kya uss scene me itna bhi emotion tha..jitna hum usse kured kured ke bahar nikalte hai???just an errant thot...im glad we do dis actually....its a gud mental exercise...😆😆😆
n smrits i ant a nice romantic wali fic...or a one shot....pleeejjjjjjjjjjjj..........i want romance.......
n kavya..go to that topic..ull go absolutely nuts....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
ohh n smrits..i posted d oder part of dat epi too in AY month wala tpoic...real dialogue usme hai....do see dat also..n duh uh ..wen will we discuss dem???
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Posted: 15 years ago
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okie....i wld think abt it tonight in my dreams kavs..it better reveals to me else i wld cme and just arghhhhhhh do i dunno what KILL YOU for keeping me in so much suspense i mean u nt even imagine how otugh this is for me am those kinds u wld first read the last page of a mystery novel..ic ant handle SUSPENSE and thats why dimaag too stops functioninggg

and YEAAAAAAAAH u said it kvsie...no end to ay discussion..and debs...its never enough to discuss any scene just ONCE....coz everytime u see a scene u fele like OMG m watching this for the first time everrrrr

omg kavs u r abt to be DEAD soon in the upcoming epis u so r abt to be DEADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD....i hope that dya u can sneak in here..am sure u wldcoz u wld need to u know pour in ur feleigns coz it wld just ovrwhelmmmmmmmmmmmm uuuuuuuuuu

and NO NOT TIMBO plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...not timbo...as i naps calling me that wasnt enough...argh.....ii fele like u know pulling ur hair outtttttttttttttttt....MEAN DEVIL.....if id nt get it u better tell me chup chap tommmmmmm...stop deriving sadistic pleasue man u wicked wicked duh uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhness personified girllllllly
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
debo...wlld discuss that tommmmmmm....but atleast u toh start discussing na....

and NO man AY scenes arent abt MENTAL EXERCISE or blaaaaah...woh sare ke sare every emotion which we talk off is there wright there written in their eyes..the point is u have to yourself believe in those emotions those feelings only then u wld be able to see them...AY arent abt just AY..AY r abt BELIEFS your beliefs your faith....they ld reveal to u only if u belive in their kind of love.....and no mental exercise yaar...there isnt one moment of brain over pwoering them NOT ONE MOMENT.....brain is almost like a westigial organ for them..all they do is follow their hearts...and hats exactly what they make us feel tooo..everything just comes form within we dont sit and think ki yeh hua is scene main ya woh it just FLOWS and it flows coz its there its very much THERE for everyone to take away..but only those who believe wld be able to
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
smriti, gues what, i have jus replied in that topic n u asked me to check it out!!!!
anyway, to make it clear to u, i'm a very big sadist.... but i show this sadism only to my frnds..... i get immense pleasure in that ...sach mein 😈 😈 .... no wonder i liked ashi's character in the very first epi itself...haha

@sneak peak abt cmng episodes.....u dont know how eagerly i'm waiting fot the cmng episodes, much more aftr reading ur post... waise i saw some scenes of AY (future ones) long long back... one of them is at the election time i guess
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Di, nice to see you writing something after agesssssssss. Really liked the way you described sonia-ashi relationship and the whole sun thing which you just said so beautifully. I can totally hear sonia saying this to ashi. You have really captured the hope and faith that sonia-ashi symbolise together. Could picture ashi and cocoa as well - i always loved those sweet moments during bet phase when ashi was all blushing and cute like a lil kid at xmas and i could see her like that when you mentioned cocoa.
Engagement eh? It has to be with Yuvi na? Then why didn't he wish her? Ok, ok, i know all will probs be revealed later but am an impatient kind of girl! 😆

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