-A Promise Of Eternity : AY One Shot-

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Hola hola hola holaaaaaaaaaaaa☺️🤗🤗...me baaaaaaack with a banggggggg and with my new ONE SHOT...yessssssssssssssssssss....i finally FINALLLY FINALLY was able to write something and complete it finish it right till the very end after threee freaking long years...OMG OMG OMG....feels like found a lost part of me mysellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllf☺️...i was such an adowable writer happpy so happpy to find that part of me againnnnnnnnn☺️🤗🤗...three long years...not three actually two and a halfish or so..... dunno what happened just had lost all faith in my writing I DUNNO WHY but i just couldnt feel it.....lekin this just flooooooooooooooooooooooowed.....and am damn damn proud of it DAMN PROUD coz via it i found the writer in me againnnnnnnnnn☺️😍...this is already part of Maktuuuuub....☺️....but but but am hopinggggggg am so hoping ki u all wld have diiiiiiiiied reading the first post itself☺️....first post padh ke hi sabko itna hyper wala happy warmish rona aaya hoga ki they couldnt and they wouldnt have been able to go reading further☺️...and the same story is happening to all of u again and again everytime u open maktuuuuuuuuuub everytime u open it and think ki aaj aage padhungi aaj aage journey karungi but fir se u get lost in the magic of first post onlyyyyy☺️....and hence u all havent reached to my OS wala poooooooooosht..... meaning u ugys havent read it yet....sho me thought of posting it here in parts..coz blah says i wrote a novel....HMPH...I HATE YOU....YOU BETTER RED AND FELE THIS NOW RIGHT NOOOOOOOOOOW...G E T I T?????????....

but i do agree instead of an OS i wrote a novellllllllllllllllllllllll🤣☺️☺️....and its kind of not possible to read it all in one go unless ofcorse u as loony as me nd u love me as lunaticallly too☺️....i know u doooooooo...butt um sab ke convineance ke liye me breaking this into parts...and now u all dont do cheatinggggggg and dont read it wholelly in maktub...bhool jao i posted there....and read here part by part get excited and hyper for nexht paaaaaaaaart...okie?..and the likes of ninnuuuuuuuuuuudi who read it alllllllllll..welll tu poori story hi bhool ja and think s if this is firsht time around u seeing this...think ki u came from school and opened RF and this topic is awaitingggggggg u☺️....react that ways only...ek dum phata phata hua mooooooooooooooooh☺️☺️....okieeeeeee?☺️..

and plus its AY MONTH ek OS toh on air hona hi chahiyeeeeeeeeeeeee☺️

So here u go peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeps.....hope u like it no loveeeeeeeeeeeee it U BETTER coz i freaking adore it scope hi nahi na lvoe karne ka...☺️....imperfectish hai in terms of writing..but else its beautifullllllllll☺️....sishhhhhhhhhh sorry i lack modesty....i mean come on wrote after this looong whoeevr wants to be modesht when i know that i loved loooved what i wrote toh why be modest?..☺️....infact if u ask me then this is my besht besht piece of writing everrrrrrrrr☺️

Chalooooooooooooooooooooo read this with me and be my bridges tand make me discover my own One Shot and do lot of my tareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeef okiie?..and say loads of i love yousssssssssss to me and to AY☺️☺️

looooooooooooooooove u alllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.....☺️🤗🤗



-A Promise Of Eternity-

Part 1



16th August...it was the morning of her Birthday..her 25th Birthday...but "sigh" would her Mom ever EVER let her feel older than a 5 year old kid??...NOT a chance in HELL! She frowned but before her frown deepened..she remembered that it was her Birthday..and just the thought of gifts awaiting to be rampaged made her KICK out of bed!!

Her life's Santa Clause..had a damned special way of delivering her gifts..She always hid them in her balcony which made sure that the first ever thing Ashi did on her every Birthday morning was to throw open the doors and allow the sun to shine its way into her life..her heart..and her soul!

Sonya Ray knew the mystic powers hidden behind the warmth of every single ray of sun shine..to her this golden sun represented much more than just a start of yet another day...it was NEVER "yet another day" for her..it was always A NEW DAY ...a symbol of light's victory over dark...a faith that there was someone out there who was fighting for light for love for all of US,,,and it was THIS faith and hope which Sonya brought to her Mummum and over the years Ashi had come to love love this gift so so much that despite of knowing the fact that no "physical" gifts awaited her..YET she never failed to run into her balcony..and JUST feel the sun cast its golden hallow upon her..and right at this moment she would hear her Mom's voice within her whispering.."All Is Well..Mummum"

But today...today she didn't hear this voice..and THIS scared her..it scared her to death...yes even ABR gets scared...Unbelievable but true!....Why?..why didn't she hear the voice?..Was it some sort of a sign?...Was something amiss?...The thought made her more anxious toh she shewed it away by blamin it all on her Mommy..her best way to deal with a crisis...."Mumma apni beauty sleep main itny busy hai ki mere ander aake whisper karna hi bhool gayi hongi...Mom buddhi ho gayi hoo tum"

Aaaah that DID made her feel good..at least for NOW....I mean come on..she pondered...what could possibly be amiss with my life..its my birthday..that too 25th...i have Mom..i have my friends and top of that i am even getting engaged today........and JUST then she remembered EXACTLY what was amiss

YUVRAJ DEV....HOW COULD U?...JUST HOW????

Since the past seven years she has been too too used to hearing his voice wish her Happy Birthday Wacko right at the VERY stroke of midnight...a voice which always had a promise of eternity...she didn't know what that promise meant..but she knew she NEEDED this promise..it made her look forward to EVERY SINGLE moment of her life...it made her FEEL he was there...he would just be there NO MATTER WHAT..and this thought itself was enough to make her embrace life with EXCITEMENT..

No doubt she had felt something missing today...for the first time in seven years her birthday didn't begin with his voice promising her eternity...and this made her damn restless..She picked her phone and typed his number without even looking at he digits..she swore that the minute he picked she would blast his ear drums out..a part of her was so so so so so so MAD at him...(but this was NOTHING new alright..this particular part of ABR justhad one damned job..to stay MAD at Yuvraj Dev for NO rhyme and certainly NO reason)...and another part of her just yearned to hear his voice and feel All Is Well...She was in luck..today was her birthday and her bhaggu just had to grant all her wishes today...even though o one picked the phone on the other end..yet she managed to hear his voice..."Hey..this is Yuvi...sorry to have missed your call..would get back to you asap..and thats a PROMISE!"

She banged the phone on her head..it was a typical 'hey bhaggu" moment for her..she WANTED to be frustrated for not getting to talk to him but she couldn't HELP but feel eternal....She smiled and went up to her Coco and hugged him loonyly ...then she broke the hugy and went on to niharofying him..she ate his big wala nooosey...rained kisses kisses kisses on his chubby wala cheeks and then fir se huggyed him tightly
..she didn't know what was this moment all about..but she felt so safe so warm so at peace just by hugging Cokoooo...geee..Bhaggu really DOES create bridges where there r NONE..

And with that feeling..she went on to live her 25th birthday fully...from her mommy's endless kisses...to leo's monkeyness...from mp's non stop leg pulling to mate's lectures on engagement and marriage...the day had all the ingredients of her life...and dekhte hi dekhte it was time for her to get ready..and in a jiffy she was ready!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank God you posted it as a separate topic ............. noe i'll be able to all the parts separately........... waise toh i hav read it already but i'll read it again n then reply achhe se................
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I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! 🤗 This shot is seirously my most fav. one ever...i have cried buckets with it and you have actually seen me!! I can't say more on that part...but you know it loons! I CANNOT FORGET THE FURTHER PARTS! I mean...I cannot behave as if i haven't read further because its just i don't know! I can never forget but i will try so that i don't reveal the further parts of this one shot!☺️😳 But aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! Will read this part and comment on it!☺️😍😍
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oh shucks tani partner u read this already???....i thought u wldnt have...but omg part of me damn happpy ki u diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid☺️....i mena u actually read the whole of ittttttttttttttt?...omg omg thats so sho adowable of u tani partner making me feel specialishhhhhhhhhhhhh☺️🤗🤗

Blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kuch seekh....OMG...i want u in here RIGHT NOW RIGHT NOOOOOOOOOOOOW....come read and do my tareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeef ENDLESSLY and ofcorse cry with it endlessly tooooooo😍 and also say rezi meziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii YOU ROCK and me your dron suck to the freaking core of suckinggggggggggggggggggggggggg and i loveyouuuuuuuu meri rezzzzzzzzzzz i love youuuuuuuuu 9993774739847876398264783286 se bhi zadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa☺️☺️😍

lekin bhool ja bhool ja ki padha hai...read as if u dnt know...and i know people couldnt have read this...so this one is for all of them...like dhakkan madoooooooo...omg i guess this is gona be your first time reading somethig form my pen hai na mads?...excited😃..annu shelly debs...sab comeeeeee...and if u feleing me besharmly advertising mthis..then YES thats exactly what am doingggg🤣☺️...A-Y-AAAAA-S-H-I😍😍

and guys i forgooooooooooooooooooooooot to say somehting VERY IMPORTANT...if u want further parts u have to bribe meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee like u used to do before ninnuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu i work only ONLY on the basis of rishwat u gettttttttttttttttttttttttttt....if u want more OS i want bribe for every EVERY partttttttttttttttt....OKIE?...OKIEEEEEEEEEE?....OKIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE???...are okieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee????????
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ya Loony dear i had read it the very day Nats posted it in MAKTUB.......... I had cried soooooo much while reading this ............. n i know that i'll cry again when i'll read it again...............
n dodo why hav you named it as "AY One shot" ............. name it as "AY MAHABHARAT"🤣🤣
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUU SOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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i READ IT........ I READ IT.... I READ IT jus now but i'll reply later

so u posted this already somewhere?? fully?? i need to read orelse i'll go mad..... PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ tell me where u posted it
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i'm ready to bribe u even..... if u give me the link na, i'll say u what i realized lately, which made me love them all over once again.... plz plz plzzzzzzz give me the link
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u know what smriti.... crying is not my type, i dont cry.... i DONT CRY.... i'm not a cry baby.... i didn't check the maktub,. i didn't read the 1st page.... i didn't read anything...ANYTHING... n i AM NOT crying bcoz i'm not a loony baby... got it??
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Originally posted by: kavya.b

u know what smriti.... crying is not my type, i dont cry.... i DONT CRY.... i'm not a cry baby.... i didn't check the maktub,. i didn't read the 1st page.... i didn't read anything...ANYTHING... n i AM NOT crying bcoz i'm not a loony baby... got it??



OMG....u read it didn't uuuuuuuuuuuuuu?????

hay bhaggu i was so hoping ki u wldnt find out where its posteeeeeeeeeeeeeed....and awww u sounding so i dunnno seems🤣🤣 like u r seriously impacted by this 🤣☺️.. me everything kavise .and ya sure SURE kavs i got exactly how much u are crying🤣🤣....so telll me how many buckets u filled kavsss?...omg u sounding so CUTEEEEEE🤣🤣

.OMG OMG OMG....telll how you found ittttttttttt?

Read here again na part by part.....but ah since u r short of itme i wont force u to do that...happpy u read it...and i can feel u did got moved by it....cant wait to hear what u felt whhile reading it....its okie if u didn't cry though i cna so FEEL u did🤣...

but this fic isn't about crying with sadness.....or feeling bad about how it ended...this fic is about celebrating the eternity of LOVE....the fact that love isn't dependent on someone's existence love exists on its onw force...and just like the soul love too is immportal it would just go on and on and on its present in the VERY air and all we need to do is FEEL it LIVE it....i just wanted to reflect that their love knows no DEFEAT their love just knows light and anyhow whatever happens just whatever they would find a way to be happy and to celebrate life and not waste away their lives and dreams coz they couldn't be together in physical form....NOPES..their life would always have a reason a menaing a blessing a dream to follow..and all this coz of just one force...LOVE..


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OMGG !!! smritsss.. OMG .. jus OMG WHAT IS THIS??!! I dunno .. more than the fact that I loved this .. or even tht seems to b an understatement .. or I dunno what .. jus the thought ki I m READING ashi n yuvi again .. jus that mere thought n feel of it..n that it had to cum to me via YOU .. is making me moist wit tears right now .. I jus read this all soo excitedly..ki prob didnt hav time to feel each n every line .. n take in every emotion n thats why I m a mixture of emotions at the moment..like I said, it seems like an eternity when I read the last FFs .. I dont even rem which was the last FF I read .. or I guess it was an OS by u only .. n then after that, its THIS one now ..

u very well kno the power of ur writing .. so I need not really say how beautiful this is .. all I want is the next part now .. cuz u hav stopped it at such a POINT ..

I wud go on reading it again..taking in every line..n then describing it n all .. but abhi ke liye .. THIS is for u .. for making me read AY again .. 🤗

u kno what..u always kept on saying right..read my OS in maktub..read it..read it .. n everytime I went ther .. n began to read it..I realised sum work missing so had to go..but I guess .. it came to me via this topic..its MAKTUB after all ..

n its all the more exciting tht I hav to read it in parts .. so I dunno whats coming..n my excitement meter keeps on raising ..

so now I m not saying a word here..atleast in this post..but jus POST THE NEXT PART ASAP!

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