~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff)

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Ashma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: karanrox
omg. it was amazing.i really cant express myself in words . i was speechless. it was like so real.the lines u sed to describe thir feelings were fantastic. m really waiting to read thier talk . yhe next part .please continiee soon dont keep us waiting. the curiosity is build up to the peak .thanx for the pm.first one to comment an honor

yayy u all can have individual comments this time :) Well rika, thanks for the 1st comment!! haha im waiting for the next part too... and im the one writing it!!!😳😳 its so confusing wot to do... :| il try not to keep u waiting too long... 😊

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: luv_huda
Ashhhhhhhhhhh r u sure its ur first FF?????😲😲😲it doesn't feel like, it so doesn't feel like ur first FF😳😳😳omggggggg u r soooooooooo awfulllllyyyyyyy gooooooooooodddddddd wid the emotional parts👏loved the sentence abt butterflies in tia's stomach😳😳😳
and absolutely adore Ranny's feelings on seeing Tia👏👏👏"wid every glance he fell in love wid her" awwwwwwwwwwwwwww loved this lineeee👏

Continue Soon.

Natalie.

Aww thank you!! well i guess its not the first thing iv written, but yhh my first ff, and the first one ive posted online!

well abt the emotional parts: i have spent an embarassingly large part of my life reading love stories and watching films... i think coming up with romantic scenarios is embedded in me by now! atleast it can come into some use 😳😛😆

ah yes, everyones frends, the stomach butterflies. they HAD to get a mention in there somewhere!

thanks for the sweet sweet comment, i just hope i can live up to these high expections in the next part!

Love

Ash

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy
omg, this was a super-awesome part ash,

Their feelings were described very well,
and omg they saw eachother,

awww ranveer found her even more stunning ......thats sooo cute,

yeah friendz kahan se aa gaye.......lol,

fantastic update ash, this has left me even more eager 2 know whats going 2 happen now,

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continue soon,

n thanks for the pm

omg glen, i dnt deserve all this! i think u shud save that for the end... the biggest acheivement wud b to just finish this!! im stuck on how to continue 😕😳

bt thnx so so much! ur soo sweeet😊

haa yaar yeh frenz kahaa se aa gaye!😆

luv

Ash

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: angel3142

👍🏼

omg omg this is fantabulous jsut ausumn whole moment is superb ver well done ash 👍🏼

you go girl

you really took me away to a new world of tr through your ficiton cant belive a fiction can brign such ebautiful oments you have really described this too sides so beautifully i really want to thank you by heart 😳

tia bridna convo was superb 😳😳😳and last part mindblowing tia dizzling like angel and all with sprrpw in her eyes wanted to say so much things😳😳 and ranveer wanting to go beside her protect her😳😳😉 superb

tia getting butterflies and vrinda comment that tia deserves every love and she will get it tonight is so well written i cant thank you enough for this it is fantabulous 😳

thank thank you so much for such ausumn moments👏

desperately waiting for tr to come close🤗

omg sushi, u too! this is too much!

all i can say is that im so glad tr fans still exist to read it, even tho remix is finished in india! i got lucky :)

also wen i rote abt tia lukin like an angel, i remmeberd ur username and that tia siggy u used to have (which sed sumthing like i saw an angel of that im sure(?)..) 😊

thanks fow the wonderful comment!!

luv

Ash

ps- thats a reeli pretty thank you 😛😊

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: crazee4remix
wat is this ...........................omg
i mean it doesn't feel like a fic
i can visualize everything in front of my eyes while reading this
tia's dress wit pearls
ranveer 's wearin tie
both of them starin at each other
omg
its just awesomeeeeeeeeeee
please keep writing

aaa omg wot a sweet comment!

il keep writing so long as u keep reading 😊

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr
wow yaar very nice part.....
cant wait 2 read next part,,,,,,,,

so plz continue soon.....................

thanx for pm

love u

yogitha

thanks for reading and commenting yogitha! 😃

Love

Ash

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: aparna_1988
you are incredible talentedashma..nd trust me you dont have to request rachel.. to read your fic it would be her pleasure.. .
you certainly do.. deserve a standing ovation from all of us for your excellent writting skills..

and also filling out heartswith immense joy..

Appy, u have to stopp with all these compliments.. keep me modest gal!😳😳

n omg, i dnt deserve anything yet! let me try n finish it... u never no, the rest of it mite be dull in comparison to this part! (n most probs will be!)

it fills my heart with immense joy that ppl like u r reading and commenting!!😃

Originally posted by: aparna_1988
me really curious to know the reason behind teir break up..
wow !!!!!!!loved this sentences..youre too good for words..

If Life was a bottle of perfume it should come with a warning label: This product will never smell the way you expect it to, and it won?t

a moment more here was a moment less with Her👏⭐️

as if her voice might shatter this fragile fantasy of a possibility.

...""I got given everything I could possibly want for 18yrs. And now it?s like I?m balancing out by having a little less""""

With every glance he fell in love with her all over again..😳.

so u liked the perfume bottle part 😃 u no that woz a last minute addition.. at first i was jst gna write "life shud come with a warning label: expect the unexpected".. but then decided to make it more tia-ish!

the breakup reason.. cud be complicated, lets hope i can just write it well! trying to figure out how to get it in the story...😳😳 have lots of ideas, im just confused!

thanks agen doll!

Love

Ashma

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karanrox

@karanrox

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Posted: 17 years ago

#78

hey ash please hurry up . dont keep us waiting too long.

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shubha

@GetbusyLiving

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Posted: 17 years ago

#79

u know wat i don;t have words to describe how i was feeling while opening the topic..and i haven;t even read the whole fic yet..just the first two parts...i have heard so many awesome reviews abt ur peice ashma that i was dying to get my hands on my pc and check it out😉...and when i finally could...i already had this huge expectation cos of word of mouth publicity..lolz😉 ..but trust me ashma..ur work totally lived upto it...i just sooo lovedddddd the intro....its so damn well written...its just too good👏

wat i liked most abt the intro is the beginning...d movie clip..like u said it adds realism to the whole fic...and sets the tone for the rest of it...i always believed tia had a very mature side to her personality...she just tries to take life in a lighter vein...

though it kinda hurts to see tia so disillusioned abt love..cos its veyr unlike d tia we know and love..her faith in love and life is wat sets her apart from the rest..but i am sure she'll come out of it soon..cos like u mentioned at d end of the second part..watever life throws at her..der r sumthings very much a part of her to let go😳

i just loved the second part too...even the one abt ranveer...and his crush nayanika...its only understandable that he'll find sumone...life is abt moving on anyways..and u wrote the whole morning part rather cutely...ranny is choo cute...inspite of him thinking abt that girl instead of tia..i still had a smile on my face while readin it😆

and d telephone convo between sumeet and tia is sooo touching..one can make out how much sumeet is missing his dotty...

even i felt that if tr ever spilt post maurya..either tia or ranveer would leave the city to bring distance between the two..cos its not them to be in close proximity and not be untouched by each other's presence..and i always felt tia will be the one who will be leaving..but it was always paris for me..cos tia was so into fashion and she loves paris..but i guess delhi is better atleast tr r more closer if not in the same city😳

i am still reading the other parts ashma...i just can't say howww muchhhhhh i loved it😳..awesome stuff girl...u have a kanck for this...keep it coming😳👏👏

PS: its amazing how well u know tia😳..its gr8 to meet sumone who understands such a complex girl so well😳

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aashni

@animateash

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#80

asmaa have rea dalll your parts from starting but sorry could not reply b4 .... but must sy very welll written loved ur tone of writing ur amazingg vocabulary ...... reli cute dialougesss keep it up dear may god bless u

luv ash😳

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