~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff)

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aparna

@aparna_1988

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Posted: 17 years ago

#91

iam runnung out of words to praise you .. so ashma so ill just go with natalli.. and i liked te way you ended this part..

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: karanrox

hey ash it was awesome dont keep underestimating your self . ur a fantastic writer . but no omg how did nainika come into thier magic moment . please dont let it be destroyed. they've just met no . the last 2-3 lines were like nightmare and u truly described it as the breal ing of a beautiful magic spell. dont stop writing . i'm like getting addicted to this ff. continue sooooooooooooooooooooon n pls pm.

aaa its already destroyed! 😭 im so sori!

n dw, i cant stop writing, esp when ppl like u r reading it so faithfully!😊😊

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: luv_huda
😆😆looks like we have something in common😳
Natalie.

yayy! 😆 im addicted to them!

Originally posted by: luv_huda

Ashhhhhh stop being modest girl, this part is the best part soooooooooooooo farrrrrrrrrrrrrrr👏it wasn't just TR under the spell, u bewitched me too😳😳😳dunno frm where to start and what to say😳its just sooooooo damn gooooooodddddddddd👏first of all, lemme confess this is the first TR FF that i ever read😳and now i realised how much of TR i have been missingnow m gonna search every nook and corner of Remix Forum to read all Tiara FF's😆😳but m sureeeeee this ones gonna be my absolute favourite forever😳😳😳

arre im nt being modest, i actually thought this part was all over the place n didnt flow too well! 😳😳 i mean, i worked hard on individual bits but had such a hard time putting them together!! but omg ur comment has just made my day!😃 seriously.

this is the first TR ff iv ever read too! 😆 actually ive never read an entire ff before, ive always ended up just reading bits and pieces😳 hehe maybe i shud do the same! bt after i finish mine :)

Originally posted by: luv_huda

i absolutely lovedddddd these lines, loved how after so many years she's still fussing abt his appearence😆and thinking abt his clumsiness😆😆oh!and her calculation leading her frm cell phone to call to a girl is hilarious😆

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m speechless😳its so emotional and touchinggggg😳😳😳their dance was sooooooooo magical, loved the expressions u used 👏

can't wait for thr next part😳hope Remixers wud do something really mean to Nainika😆😆

Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooonnnnnnnnn😳😳

Natalie.

Natalie.

thanks so much!! hehe i like those lines too!😳

awww poor nainika, shes not really a bad person.. just at the wrong place at the wrong time, with the wrong person!!😆 well lets see what happens to her😛

will continue real soon!!

Luv

Ash

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: aparna_1988
iam runnung out of words to praise you .. so ashma so ill just go with natalli.. and i liked te way you ended this part..

aww bless, thank u darling! u must no by now that ur comments mean so much to me 😊

luv

ashma

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Glinda Elizabeth Kushero

@Ezria_Fan_4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#95

OMg, what do i say ya😃,

Ur FF is getting better and better with every update👏,

im in love with ur FF😳,

Simply fantastic update👏,

i liked the way u described whats going on in Tias mind😳,

and they danced......awww soo cute😳,

and whats with the scar on his hand.............it was sweet that she asked him about it😉,

But from where did this nainika cum now😡,

common, ranveer-tia should have had some time alone😛,

im sure tias gonna get jealous of her.......for sure😕

Loved the update👍🏼,

simply superb,

plzz continue soon, i keep checking everyday whether u have updated ur FF or no😆

Continue with the good work dear,

Love, Glen😉

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tanya

@tanya-karan4eva

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#96

wow dis is reli gud im in luv with dis eva thought bout airin it....😉its 2 gud!!!!!!!welll done i cnt stop readin it over n over again!!!!!

luv tanu

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aparna

@aparna_1988

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Posted: 17 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: tanya_remix4eva
wow dis is reli gud im in luv with dis eva thought bout airin it....😉its 2 gud!!!!!!!welll done i cnt stop readin it over n over again!!!!!
luv tanu

oh tanya ..thank you somuch for taking my word and making an effort to read this fic..

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sushma

@angeltiara

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#98

gosh ash very weell written you are truely pro in this i just loved the whole secanario

both of them feeling trying to talk to see each other look at each other wanna be close to each other but too much fear to speak their feeling loud and trying to stay away from touch and breeze of love but still not able to get away from it i could visualize all this in this parts it is amazing😳😉👏

i wished that nainika didnt came so early and ranveer tia had spent much memorable time with each other loved the part where tia says to him tum gaaon mein jake aur bhi clumsy ho gaye ho and ranveer reply kaunsa gaon miss tia ahuja london it brought back sweet tiara nokjhok which they always had😳😉

gosh well written waiting to know what will happen further😛

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Ashma

@ash419

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Posted: 17 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy

OMg, what do i say ya😃,

Ur FF is getting better and better with every update👏,

im in love with ur FF😳,

Simply fantastic update👏,

i liked the way u described whats going on in Tias mind😳,

and they danced......awww soo cute😳,

and whats with the scar on his hand.............it was sweet that she asked him about it😉,

But from where did this nainika cum now😡,

common, ranveer-tia should have had some time alone😛,

im sure tias gonna get jealous of her.......for sure😕

Loved the update👍🏼,

simply superb,

plzz continue soon, i keep checking everyday whether u have updated ur FF or no😆

Continue with the good work dear,

Love, Glen😉

hii glen! it always makes me happy seeing ur comment 😃

i no i no, even i wish they spent more time togther... bt i cud go on and on describing them together, n i felt the story needed to move forward ( this isnt dmg u no😛).. But basically u can assume that they did spend a while together... i just seemed short the way iv written it, because they'd lost all sense of time😳😊

nainika is full of surprises isnt she! 😆

il try n update tomoro!

Thanks for the comment (that goes without saying!)

Luv

Ash

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Ashma

@ash419

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: tanya_remix4eva
wow dis is reli gud im in luv with dis eva thought bout airin it....😉its 2 gud!!!!!!!welll done i cnt stop readin it over n over again!!!!!
luv tanu

hey tanya! im glad u liked my humble attempt at writing a ff... n id luv to air it! 😆 haha, altho some scenes sound good onli in writing due to the description, as therz no such story to them 😳😳

thanks so so much for reading n commenting!

Luv

Ash

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