~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff) - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ash419

Those words made the dormant butterflies in Tia?s stomach go delirious.

Tia Ahuja... Heartbreakingly beautiful Tia Ahuja. Tragically magical Tia Ahuja. Just when Ranveer thought she couldn?t get any more stunning, she did. Standing there in the glowing light, she honestly looked to him like an angel descended from heaven. A delicate, dainty, breathtaking angel, adorned in pearls.. but all alone, with sorrow in her eyes. He wanted to hold her in his arms and protect her. Please smile for me Tia, happiness looks good on you, he felt like saying. But how could he talk to her. What would he say to her? After all this time.. What were they now? Friends? Enemies? Mere acquaintances?

Who said time was the greatest healer? Even now when he looked at her, he felt as if his heart had been torn out of his chest and smashed into a million pieces. He couldn?t, shouldn?t, wouldn?t look at her. Oh, but how could he not! With every glance he fell in love with her all over again...

But before he could do anything else, a cloud of classmates drifted over to him, showering him with questions and blocking his view.

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Ashhhhhhhhhhh r u sure its ur first FF?????😲😲😲it doesn't feel like, it so doesn't feel like ur first FF😳😳😳omggggggg u r soooooooooo awfulllllyyyyyyy gooooooooooodddddddd wid the emotional parts👏loved the sentence abt butterflies in tia's stomach😳😳😳
and absolutely adore Ranny's feelings on seeing Tia👏👏👏"wid every glance he fell in love wid her" awwwwwwwwwwwwwww loved this lineeee👏
Continue Soon.
Natalie.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
omg, this was a super-awesome part ash,
Their feelings were described very well,
and omg they saw eachother,
awww ranveer found her even more stunning ......thats sooo cute,
yeah friendz kahan se aa gaye.......lol,
fantastic update ash, this has left me even more eager 2 know whats going 2 happen now,
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continue soon,
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ash419

Omg, finally its here! Worked hard on this part (there's more coming soon😊😳), and i really really hope it doesnt disappoint you!
Part 6: The Reunion ? part I

Although now they were running late... and he didn?t want to waste any time; a moment more here was a moment less with Her.

Ranveer looked in the mirror while he hurriedly did up his tie. His mind was oscillating between the prospects: She?ll come but ignore me... She?ll come with her new boyfriend... She?ll come but we won?t talk...She won?t come at all. Out of these potential unpleasant scenarios, the last one was clearly the worst.

His eyes were yearning to catch a glimpse of her, to make sure she was alright, and happy. He knew that if she was happy, all the torment he had been through these past few years would be worth it. Only he knew how he had survived the anguish of being away from her, unable to hate her or love her, see her, touch her, talk to her. And then just as he was starting to pull his life back together, life had once again played an evil game on him by bringing him back here. Now the meeting was so close, so tangible, he just had to see her. Despite trying not to, his hopes had now been built to dizzying heights. If she didn?t turn up, he?d fall a long way down.

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Tia thought she?d be over the moon about meeting her classmates again, but things weren?t going as she?d expected. Tia had known not everyone would graciously avoid the topics she didn?t want to talk about, like her loved ones did. But she didn?t know how much more of this she could handle. Everyone seemed to be singing the same song: ?You?re a banker?? Tia Ahuja, a banker??? ?Tia, we always thought you?d be in fashion, especially with your dad?s contacts?

And then came the worst parts:

?Tia! Ranveer didn?t come with you?? ?What?? Not together?? Even Ashi and Yuvi are still together!? ?We thought Tia and Ranveer would be forever.?

?So did I!? She felt like screaming back to them. It just goes to show, life throws things at us that even we can?t fathom. If Life was a bottle of perfume it should come with a warning label: This product will never smell the way you expect it to, and it won?t always smell nice...

Instead she smiled a honeysuckle smile and carried on making casual small talk. She had to do something to pass the time. When eventually she needed a break, she walked over to the table and poured herself a glass of water.

?Kyaa hua Tia?? asked Vrinda, seeing the visible irritation on Tia?s face.

?Vrinda, why do I have to explain myself to everyone? Why do they judge me? Can?t they let me be? I mean, is it SO shocking that Tia?s a banker??

?Honestly I?m not surprised.. Tia, you acted like a Barbie doll in school, but the truth is, when you put your mind to something you always succeeded. We?re all really proud of you! But...?

?But??

?But... someday you have to come up with the answers to the questions you?ve been hiding from... not for anyone else but yourself. You have to come clean to yourself. Is this the life you want Tia??

Tia pondered over that question, and then gave her straightforward reply: ?No. But it?s what I have. I?ve been so incredibly lucky...I got given everything I could possibly want for 18yrs. And now it?s like I?m balancing out by having a little less. But I still have my family, my friends, a job which I worked for myself.. I?m content.?

?And love??

?Puh-leez Vrinda...?

?But you were always so optimistic, a dreamer and a true romantic.?

?I guess I grew out of that phase.?

?Love?s not a phase.?

?I don?t care anymore! I stopped wishing for my fairytale ending.?

?Why an ending? Love never ends; its forever! And you better start caring, because you?re a good person Tia, and you of all people deserve everlasting love. And you?ll get it, even if I have to do the wishing on your behalf. Especially tonight...?

?T..tonight?? Tia whispered, too scared to speak louder, as if her voice might shatter this fragile fantasy of a possibility.

?He?s on his way,? Vrinda whispered back.

Those words made the dormant butterflies in Tia?s stomach go delirious. She walked away as if in a trance. She felt queasy and uneasy, and (for once in her life) foolishly dolled-up. Would He think she was trying to hard? She had wanted to wear something less dressy, but Meher had insisted on this creamy silk gown and all these pearls. ?Tia Ahuja?s place is in the limelight, not in the background!? Meher had said.

Spending time with her family and friends had kept her occupied and had been a good distraction. She had written herself mental notes and stored them neatly at the back of her mind ? stay calm and composed, act mature, be gracious, etc etc. But nothing (NOTHING!) could have prepared her for the actual event of meeting Him.

She paced up and down the room, a nervous wreck, hyperventilating, incapable of speaking. If she was already such a mess what would she be like when He-

Tia froze in her tracks. Her heart stopped beating there and then, as if its batteries had died. In a rush of adrenaline, she spun around.

And there He was.

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And there She was.

Tia Ahuja... Heartbreakingly beautiful Tia Ahuja. Tragically magical Tia Ahuja. Just when Ranveer thought she couldn?t get any more stunning, she did. Standing there in the glowing light, she honestly looked to him like an angel descended from heaven. A delicate, dainty, breathtaking angel, adorned in pearls.. but all alone, with sorrow in her eyes. He wanted to hold her in his arms and protect her. Please smile for me Tia, happiness looks good on you, he felt like saying. But how could he talk to her. What would he say to her? After all this time.. What were they now? Friends? Enemies? Mere acquaintances?

Who said time was the greatest healer? Even now when he looked at her, he felt as if his heart had been torn out of his chest and smashed into a million pieces. He couldn?t, shouldn?t, wouldn?t look at her. Oh, but how could he not! With every glance he fell in love with her all over again...

But before he could do anything else, a cloud of classmates drifted over to him, showering him with questions and blocking his view.

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👍🏼
omg omg this is fantabulous jsut ausumn whole moment is superb ver well done ash 👍🏼
you go girl
you really took me away to a new world of tr through your ficiton cant belive a fiction can brign such ebautiful oments you have really described this too sides so beautifully i really want to thank you by heart 😳
tia bridna convo was superb 😳😳😳and last part mindblowing tia dizzling like angel and all with sprrpw in her eyes wanted to say so much things😳😳 and ranveer wanting to go beside her protect her😳😳😉 superb
tia getting butterflies and vrinda comment that tia deserves every love and she will get it tonight is so well written i cant thank you enough for this it is fantabulous 😳
thank thank you so much for such ausumn moments👏
desperately waiting for tr to come close🤗
Edited by angel3142 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
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👏wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you surpaseed our expectations.. and the words were like sweet music..
Tia Ahuja... Heartbreakingly beautiful Tia Ahuja. Tragically magical Tia Ahuja. Just when Ranveer thought she couldn?t get any more stunning, she did. Standing there in the glowing light, she honestly looked to him like an angel descended from heaven. A delicate, dainty, breathtaking angel, adorned in pearls.. but all alone, with sorrow in her eyes. He wanted to hold her in his arms and protect her. Please smile for me Tia, happiness looks good on you
you are incredible talentedashma..nd trust me you dont have to request rachel.. to read your fic it would be her pleasure.. .
you certainly do.. deserve a standing ovation from all of us for your excellent writting skills..
and also filling out heartswith immense joy..
Edited by aparna_1988 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏ItIt just goes to show, life throws things at us that even we can?t fathom. If Life was a bottle of perfume it should come with a warning label: This product will never smell the way you expect it to, and it won?t always smell nice... just goes to show, life throws things at us that even we can?t fathom. If Life was a bottle of perfume it should come with a warning label: This product will never smell the way you expect it to, and it won?t always smell nice... we are so honoured to have you among us ashma .. i just cant express my joy upon reading this part..
Edited by aparna_1988 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
wat is this ...........................omg
i mean it doesn't feel like a fic
i can visualize everything in front of my eyes while reading this
tia's dress wit pearls
ranveer 's wearin tie
both of them starin at each other
omg
its just awesomeeeeeeeeeee
please keep writing
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
wow yaar very nice part.....
cant wait 2 read next part,,,,,,,,
so plz continue soon.....................
thanx for pm
love u
yogitha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazee4remix

wat is this ...........................omg
i mean it doesn't feel like a fic
i can visualize everything in front of my eyes while reading this
tia's dress wit pearls
ranveer 's wearin tie
both of them starin at each other
omg
its just awesomeeeeeeeeeee
please keep writing

i felt the same way too.. you could actually feel the magic.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ash419

Omg, finally its here! Worked hard on this part (there's more coming soon😊😳), and i really really hope it doesnt disappoint you!
Part 6: The Reunion ? part I

?Hi Ranveer!?

?Nainika? Naini, what?s wrong???

?I miss you, thats what?s wrong!?

?Oh...I?m coming back really soon.?

?That doesn?t matter!? she giggled on the other end of the line.

?Er.. ok... listen Naini I really have to go now, I?m running late. But I promise I?ll call you later. Take care of yourself, OK? Bye.?

?Bye! Love you!?

Ranveer put down the phone, once again without reciprocating the affection. Did she not notice, or did she not care? he wondered. Anyhow he carried on getting dressed. Vrinda had left early to help Ashi with the party preparations, leaving him and Aman to join them later. Although now they were running late... and he didn?t want to waste any time; .a moment more here was a moment less with Her

Ranveer looked in the mirror while he hurriedly did up his tie. His mind was oscillating between the prospects: She?ll come but ignore me... She?ll come with her new boyfriend... She?ll come but we won?t talk...She won?t come at all. Out of these potential unpleasant scenarios, the last one was clearly the worst.

His eyes were yearning to catch a glimpse of her, to make sure she was alright, and happy. He knew that if she was happy, all the torment he had been through these past few years would be worth it...

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me really curious to know the reason behind teir break up..
wow !!!!!!!loved this sentences..youre too good for words..
If Life was a bottle of perfume it should come with a warning label: This product will never smell the way you expect it to, and it won?t
a moment more here was a moment less with Her👏⭐️
as if her voice might shatter this fragile fantasy of a possibility.
...""I got given everything I could possibly want for 18yrs. And now it?s like I?m balancing out by having a little less""""
With every glance he fell in love with her all over again..😳.
Edited by aparna_1988 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
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Hi everyone!! This is a msg for everyone (il reply individually in a minute!)
firstly THANK YOU so much for reading, its more than a pleasure to write and receive ur wonderful feedback... at least some one other than me is reading this story! im so glad to be able to share it with others who love TR just as much as moi😃😳
Secondly: the part, Tia Ahuja. Heartbreaking beautiful Tia Ahuja. Tragically magical Tia Ahuja. was the very very first thing i wrote! it just came into my head and i wrote it down... and then somehow it turned into a story! So basically, everything else i wrote b4 that part woz just so that i cud write that part!!😛😳
Thirdly: I feel zapped of all my creative energy at the moment! its like, all my imagination went into that last part, and now i feel clueless!! 😲 haha bt dont worry i will continue, i hate leavin anything unfinished, esp at this stage! its just it mite take a lil bit longer (il try as hard as i can!), n id hate to disappoint all u luvlies by riting something boring. 😆
Ok thats all i had to say,😊
THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS!!!
Love
Ash

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