~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff)

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ANYONE WHO EVER LOVED REMIX AND TR.. PLEASE READ and let me know if i've done them justice...
Hi everyone! This is my very first fanfic.. so I would be really grateful to anyone who reads and gives me feedback 😊

Its based on Remix... but set 4 years after they leave school. I know this show no longer plays in India... I dont know how the show actually finished (as its still playing in the UK), so Ive made up my version of how things ended at Maurya High...

This ff is essentially about Tia and Ranveer.. And the rest.. well if you read ull find out!

INTRO

He's running, running, breathless yet desperate to find her before she leaves.

And then he spots her. She senses him and turns around. Their eyes meet. And in front of all the bystanders at the airport, he declares his undying love for her. She drops her bags and runs into his arms.

The movie ends. Tia Ahuja smiles wryly and switched off the tv. Funny, she thinks, how they always show the fairytale endings, but never what happens after the "happily-ever-after". You can't spend your whole life like that; at an airport in each other's arms.

The phone rings. It's the daily call from her Papa.

"I miss you Princess.. I hope you're taking care of yourself?"

"Papa I'm fine! Seriously!"

"Hmm well I don't believe you.. but there's only so much I can do to convince you to come back home. What's there in Dehli that you can't find in Bombay?"

"Everything Papa.."

"You know you can come back anytime. It would make me so happy. This house, this company, its all yours."

"I know Papa, but I think I just need to spend some time on my own right now... I've depended too much on others all my life. I wanted to start afresh, and for that I needed to get away....Anyway I really need to get some sleep now Papa.. Good night. Love you"

"I love you too my Princess"

Tia really did feel exhausted and sleep seemed like the sweetest gift these days. The long hours and hectic lifestyle of her job kept her busy, but also gave her a focus in life. As Tia got ready for bed, she pondered over her current lifestyle. Tia Ahuja, most popular girl in school. Tia Ahuja, beauty queen. Tia Ahuja, rich and spoilt.

But Tia Ahuja, hardworking investment banker, living all alone in Dehli.. who could have imagined that?

Tell me what you think, and if you like it I'll continue!😊

Part 1 - page 2

Part 2 - page 3

Part 3 - page 4

Part 4 - page 6
Part 5 - page 7
part 6 - page 8
part 7 - page 11
part 8 - page 14
part 9 - page 16
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Bhaggu! Ok i posted this same thing in the fanfiction forum..and il post it here too:

i know my writing isnt amazing, but is it SO terrible that i didnt get a SINGLE reply?! 😲
Plz someone say something, anything? Pretty plz? Even f u just need to tell me to never EVER write ffs agen!
Cmon guys this is my first ff.. a little response would mean so much to me..😊
and this is the REMIX forum! if u guys wont read it, then who will?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ash I haven't read it because I don't read TR fics but don't feel bad... People who reads it (TR fans) are sleeping right now...its early morning in india... and hardly any remix fans comes online at this time...I am sure they will once they come online! :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Hey ash I haven't read it because I don't read TR fics but don't feel bad... People who reads it are sleeping right now...TR fans...its early morning in india...I am sure they will once they come online! :)

hi! thanks for replying :) yhh i hope they do.. il see agen tomoro! im already working on the second part lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its beautiful fiction loved the start from tv and end the way you mentioned tia😳😉
pleasee cintinue soon and let us know what all things hppened in tias life😛
how did tia go to delhi and where is ranveer😛
cant wait to see the next part 😛😉
the intro is reallly beautiful😳😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel3142

hey its beautiful fiction loved the start from tv and end the way you mentioned tia😳😉

pleasee cintinue soon and let us know what all things hppened in tias life😛
how did tia go to delhi and where is ranveer😛
cant wait to see the next part 😛😉
the intro is reallly beautiful😳😛

hi darling! thanks so much for the words of encouragement! haha ul find out everything as the story unravels.. il post the next part today soon😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😊hey ash419,

i hope u dont mind me caling ur username as i dont know ur real name. i just wanted to tell you that it was an awesome part. the beggining , i felt as if u were talkig abuot tiara but the twist was nice n xciting. and thank you so much that some one finall took the effort to write a tiara ff other wise i just keerp reading the old ones agian n agenthank you sovery very very very ver yvery much.please dont stop continuing it . i'm really banking on ur ff. dooooooooooooooo continue sooooooooooooooon.😊😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi!
Yess u can call me Ash :)
Thanks so much for the sweet comment!
I'm just gna post the next part... right now! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1: Two Good Mornings

So what exactly is the deal with Miss Lonely Banker?

She's more modest now, more mature, more hardworking. She hadn't realised it, but these were all the traits that Ranveer had given to her. But when he left... he took so much of her old self with her. Now she smiled a little less, laughed less, and hadn't written a song in years. Now love and fate just confused her, so she stopped thinking about them altogether. She changed her ambitions, and her environment and her wardrobe. But she simply couldn't change the fact that as much as she tried, not a day went by when she didn't think of him.

However, some things just never change, no matter what a person has been through. For example, how long does it take for Tia Ahuja, Miss Lonely Banker, to get ready in the morning?

Shower. Teeth flossed and brushed. Face washed. Make-up – concealer, eyes, lips. Perfume, phase 1. Clothes- black sheath dress. Hair – pulled back in a chic chignon. Make-up check. Shoes – black patent heels. Perfume, phase 2. Last check in the mirror. Handbag check. And out the door!

So you can imagine how long that would take, to get it all done to a Tia Ahuja standard of style ;)

Because even though her wardrobe now mainly consisted of black and white business attire instead of bright mini dresses, she still never compromised on style. She compromised on her sleep, meal times, music ...But never her style. Things like that were just too deeply etched into her identity.

So never ask Tia Ahuja to get ready in 5 minutes, because it simply isn't possible. She may no longer have a fit about a broken nail, but that saying still applies: Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi hai!

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"Good Morning Sunshine!"

Ranveer Sisodia opened his eyes to looked dazedly into the beautiful face that was gazing back at him. Aah... Nainika... what a nice dream.... He closed his eyes again. Someone started to shake him. He opened his eyes, saw the same face...Then jumped up. This was no dream, it was a nightmare!

"Nainika! What are you.. how did you...?" He was embarrassed at being caught in this state by his gorgeous co-worker and recent object of his affection, Nainika.

"Ranveer u look like you've seen a ghost! It's only me! What's the matter?" She laughed.

He gulped and ran his fingers through his bedhead hair. Today was the day he was planning on finally asking her out on a date...

"What are you doing here, so early in the morning?"

"Well I was ready early this morning.. so I thought I'd come pick you up for work, oh your mother let me in by the way... and then we can have breakfast together. Like the plan?" she asked, looking at her watch.

"Of course I do, but what was the need to come all the way? If you'd said I would have come..." God she'd never go out with me now, after seeing me in such a mess.

"Don't be silly Ranveer, I came because I wanted to. Anyways I'm waiting outside, get ready quick!"

Ranveer nodded like a fool. Why today of all days did she have to see me like this??

"Oh and by the way Ranveer... you look cute in ur PJs" she called as she left his room.

He flopped back onto his bed and thought.. Damn now how am I ever going to get the courage to...woahhh wait a sec. Cute? Did she just call me cute??? Haha looks like it is a good morning after all!

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So what happened to Tia and Ranveer?! Why are they apart? Will the meet soon?

Keep reading to find out...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ash
read ur part.loved it .continue soon. really xcited to know what tore tiara apart.do keep updating . first one to comment. yipee .i just have 1 request . could you please post longer parts? . pm me wen updated
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