read at own risk: My fan fic:)Pg 10 - Page 6

what did he see..........?? plz post the next post now instead of later in the night na...u can post a new post again later in the night

who did he see...tia, ashi, yuvi..the other kabab mein haddi's.....tia..who is the cook in this life???

Originally posted by: lamina

...patience done with...where is the part 😉 😆 😆

Well Sapna....I hope it was worth the wait! Do let me know!!!

This is one of my most fav parts of the story!

I'm sorry sweetie...You'll just have to wait.... I haven't finished writing the next part!

waiting..patiently again 😭 😭 .....

this part was lovely....ur story is so different from the usual remix fan fics that all of us have written....i really like it

arrrrre continue pls pls pls pls


u will kill me this time aparna!!!!!! 😆

Originally posted by: lamina

waiting..patiently again 😭 😭 .....

this part was lovely....ur story is so different from the usual remix fan fics that all of us have written....i really like it

seriously main toh kudh ki fic se tang aa chukhi hoon!!

aparna patience is not one of my biggest virtues .neways post it in the nite so that if at all i am studying i will get to read it.

nice part👏kool descriptions.

rikz..we should start a post to analyse this fan fic...i mean who do u think tia will be in this new janam..the cook??..who will be ashi..the maid?? devil woman???..y was ranveer shattered when he saw her face.....u know like we do with remix shows... 😃

Originally posted by: lamina

rikz..we should start a post to analyse this fan fic...i mean who do u think tia will be in this new janam..the cook??..who will be ashi..the maid?? devil woman???..y was ranveer shattered when he saw her face.....u know like we do with remix shows... 😃

oh god...no.....I think comments here itself are good enough!😆

i mean, u guys have already decided that this is a punar janam kinda thing and decided that the cook has a major role & the devil woman etc etc. I'm not giving away anything! Partially because I myself donno what I'll be writing next.

I jus hope I dont shatter your expectations with the following posts!!!

PART 11

She had big tears in her eyes. She was crying.
"God…..why is she crying...Please god, make her stop. I can't bear to see her cry. Burden me with all her sorrows and give her all my joys, but please make her stop crying!" Ranveer thought. Tears rolled down his cheeks too as the two of them came face to face. Though teary eyed, he could see her innocent child-like face clearly and by some strange force that seemed to guide Ranveer, he uttered…


"Tia?"

PART 12


Yuvi gazed in wonder at the figure that stood in front of him. He knew that she was not a sentient being. The magnetism that her wondrous eyes exuded was unreal. Yuvi found himself completely lost in her refulgent eyes. There were a thousand questions twirling in his mind but as he parted his lips to ask, all that came out was…...

"I love you"

And Ashi smiled……her eyes showing a softness & serenity that Yuvi had never seen before.


She moved close to him, clasped his hand with a reassuring glance and led him further away….

They walked and walked….miles together, but neither spoke a word. They just looked at each other and smiled all the way. They walked fast, hand in hand, unaware of their surroundings. To an onlooker it would seem that the two were intently saying a million things to each other, without uttering a word. They moved swiftly through winding lanes and small pastures but Yuvi didn't notice at all.
Finally she stopped and looked straight ahead. Yuvi then followed her gaze and found himself at the lake shore. Yuvi stood there in rapt silence as he watched the vision in the middle of the lake unfurl in front of him.

PART 13

Tia led Ranveer to the lake's edge and both stood there, watching, as their lives unfolded in front of them in the middle of the lake. The vision of him & Tia was like a reveille. He had seen some of it in his dreams but now, watching the entire thing triggered something in his mind He remembered everything!
Then he turned to his side and to his greatest shock, found Yuvi standing there as well, watching the spectacle unfurl. Ashi stood by him holding his hand and watching with a sadness that had filled them all.

nice.so after all they were yuvi and ashi...and tia ranveer eh!
appy for a change it was me who read it first......whopieeeee
and aparna first go and change the title of ur fic.or should we like suggest some?
read at ur own risk 😆 but see how many risk takers r present..man we should congratulate our guts shouldn't we 😉
on second thoughts read at ur own risk is nice makes ppl more curious don't they say curiousity kills the cat? 😆
but really beautiful appy.
refulgent eyes loved that word!

icouldnt stop myself from appreciating u for such a wonderful fanfic 😆 😆 👏