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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
u know what i think we shud be given bravery awards for this risk taking buisness
but its os worth it
i just luv to read this one
good goind apple plzzzzzzzzzz
continue fast
i am waiting
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
hey i loved it...they all end up at the same spot huh?? is there something imp abt this lake shore?? the part was so beautiful...so ranveer was hurt coz he saw tia crying...thats so wonderful...i am so waiting to read the next part...plz write soon anna
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
Hi everyone...thanks for all the words of encouragement!

i'll be posting the next part real soon and then the remaining bit by tonight!

my exams resume on tuesday(had a lovely 3 day gap that got over 2 soon) 😭 😭 😭 ....so wont be around for a couple of days! 😭
So I thought it would be better to go without any unfinished business!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 14

Those were the days!!! Ranveer had just realized that Tia was his soul mate and that no matter what happened, they would always be one. Ashi & Yuvi were painting the town red with their love.
Music was the common thread running through them all and uniting them. It had provided them with a unique way of proclaiming their love for each other and their love for life.
Youth had brought with it an inner drive to see the world and enjoy life to the full. Ranveer & Yuvi often camped by that very lake, whenever they felt like having "boys night".

It was on one of these adventurous camping trips when the girls too were invited, that their blissful lives turned into mayhem.
The icy blue waters had beckoned and Ashi was only too glad to jump into it, not realizing that these waters were fraught with danger…..whirlpools that swallowed everything into a watery nadir.
In a moments' lapse, there she was….yelling out to Yuvi to rescue her. But Yuvi was too shocked to comprehend what was happening. He just stood dumbfounded, as if nailed to the ground. It was Ranveer who ran into the lake and swam to rescue her. But he too couldn't withstand the force of the water and was beginning to be sucked in. Ashi was so close but he just couldn't get to her.
Tia started to panic and quickly went after Ranveer. But her petite frame was too frail for the fury of the whirlpool and she too was swallowed into the depths of the lake.
Yuvi saw his love, calling out to him….he wanted to reach out and pull her back, but his body never responded. Ranveer realized that it was futile and receded, only to see Tia caught in the whirlpool herself.
It all happened so fast. One minute tranquil, the next second Ashi & Tia in the middle of the roaring waters and the next second….. tranquility prevailed as the whirlpool had moved on, taking everything & everyone in its path, along with it.
Ranveer floated back to the lake shore and sat in the shallow waters, staring in disbelief at what had just happened. Yuvi was in a similar state of mind.
The young boys had just witnessed their whole life being snatched away right in front of them.

They returned to school soon after but they could never return to their lives ever again.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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are tia and ashi ghosts???

or r they real??

did they get yuvi Ranveer there so that they could remember everything or so that they could give up their lives to be together??

i am so curious to know what happens next..do post soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: lamina

are tia and ashi ghosts???

or r they real??

did they get yuvi Ranveer there so that they could remember everything or so that they could give up their lives to be together??

i am so curious to know what happens next..do post soon

yaa pls post soon !!!!! i'll die out of curiosity!!!!!😭😭😆

waise gr8 job aparna again!!!!!👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
I just read the parts 10 to 14 rite now....and I must say this fic is simply superb 👏 👏 👏......I dont have the patience to wait for the next part aparna.......plz post it asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda

same here

yaa pls post soon !!!!! i'll die out of curiosity!!!!!😭😭😆

waise gr8 job aparna again!!!!!👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: lamina

are tia and ashi ghosts???

or r they real??

did they get yuvi Ranveer there so that they could remember everything or so that they could give up their lives to be together??

i am so curious to know what happens next..do post soon

exactly .............thts wat i m wondering !!

aparna .................gr8 job

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 15

Heir to a small kingdom, a family of reputed lineage, having the best of both occidental & Indian education and lifestyles, Ranveer was born a prince…..a modern prince who like his forefathers were sent off to Maurya High to pursue academic interests.
Ranveer always kept to himself and mingled with few. People often joked that Ranveer had the snobbishness that was befitting his royal position. But his reserved nature had nothing to do with his status. Ranveer was just trying to cope with and obliterate the voice that kept recurring and the images that never ceased to perplex his young mind.

Yuvi was born to scientist parents and he too was blessed with wisdom & intelligence that many a scholar envied. He was brought up in the midst of doting parents and protective elder brothers. From a very early age, Yuvi was a quiet child and his family felt that these were signs of an intellectual. Little did they know about the flashes of memory, the innumerable dj vu's, the voices and those eyes!!!!


When they met for the very fist time as toddlers at a social gathering, Yuvi was instantaneously aware of a strange bond or connection between him and Ranveer.
Then a few days later they exchanged their favourite toy cars on the first day of school. From then on, Yuvi & Ranveer were inseparable. A day wouldn't pass without them ever meeting. They were more than best friends, like brothers. They discovered their passion for music together and shared all their dreams and aspirations with each other. But they never shared the one most important thing…..their memories!

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