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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Thanks everyone....hope you like this part!
I'll be posting the concluding part later...tonight!
It'll be like my parting gift to all of you!
I dont think I'll visit for a while 😭

So enjoy, and watch out for the last instalment tonight! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
the toy car and yuvi an itellectual was damm funny
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
👏 👏 nice.i love the way u use ur words.
waiting for ur parting gift 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
good going my fren keep it up 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: remixfan

the toy car and yuvi an itellectual was damm funny

????what toy care???I dont remember any😕

Anyways....everyone....here is teh concluding part to my story! hope you like it!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
PART 16

Ranveer looked at Yuvi & Ashi staring painfully at the scene that was unfurling in front of them.
Tia looked up at him and said, "Sirf tumhare hai hum, Ranveer. Main hamesha tumhare saath hoon. Tumhe bas vishwaas karna hai, apne aap pe, humaare pyaar pe.
Jis din tum accept karoge, uss din mein tumhe miloongi. Tab tak, tumhara hai intezaar.

Tears were streaming down Yuvi's flushed cheeks and Ashi turned to him and said, "You are not alone Yuvi. If you look hard, you'll see me right by you. Then I will not be a figment of your dreams anymore".

Then as Yuvi looked to his left he caught Ranveer's eye and instantly they were transported back to reality.

Yuvi found himself in a puddle of water, a few meters away from the shed. The fog had cleared and the sun was shining. He walked back to the shed, slightly dazed. There, in the shed, by the pole, Ranveer was sound asleep.


PART 17


That evening as Ranveer & Yuvi descended the mountains, they had left behind the heavy hearts and the secrets they came with. They were both whistling all the way down to the valley and back to Mumbai.
Their hearts were brimming with an exuberance that arose from the hope and anticipation of searching for someone whom they had never met but had known forever!



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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
hey write more na.....when are the going to meet...dont leave us hanging ok...anna.........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
nice ending aparna.keep it that way.i liked it. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 ...............hey ....tht was a good ending .... 👏 .........really enjoyed ur fanfic a lot 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
I leave the continuation to your imagination!!!

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