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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This was great. So intense. I miss this couple so much. Their raw intensity in any given situation. Good stuff.

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: JJKKL
WoW BugSa.

You were missing for such a long time. And when you appear you make time stand still. Have you split that one minute to 60 seconds and written about each second ? Or even further to micro second level ? So detailed and well written it took my breath away.

Wonderful. Enjoyed it. And was reminded of our old RR and Reverberating Reviews by you 😳

Kuch Tuition Milega Aapse ? On how to write 😉

Arre JK, lovely to see you here!! 🤗 And thanks for responding to the pm. Such a long time and I was missing both RR and the forum, until finally just decided I wanted to do more than remember both with a smile. 😊

So glad that you enjoyed it!! This was a tiny take by your standards, kinda micro.

😃 But it was just a moment I'd always imagined them in and wouldn't go away. So...

And look at the result, this feels just like a RReview thread, yup reliving the good old days. 😃

As for the rest, you are much too humble and you know it. 😊

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: aaliah3108
Wow tvbug ji ! U wrote again!!!
It feels so good to read something on Parud everytime as they are so special!!! I have not gotten over them nor am I making an effort because they were extraordinary . Such magic does not happen very easily.
The OS is so intense. Loved it. Thank you. I realise how much we all miss RR and Parud. Please write more dear. 😊

Thank you Aaliah for your kind words here and on the Sanaya thread and your warm welcome. 😊 I would have responded there if I were not finishing off this piece, and figured you'd excuse my not replying this once. Please feel free to call me Sabs.

You say it so well - it was indeed a rare magic between PaRud, which is why they pop up in my mind so very often.

Delighted that you liked this effort and yes, I'll try to complete it. 😊

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pavinitishiv

@pavinitishiv

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

nice. Very intends it would be if you continued. Looking forward for more parts...thank U for the memories

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

TVBUG!!!!

Love you for this! Me too missing PaRud.

Phir kya hua? Tells, tells...

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Cutemithra

@Cutemithra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome writing...very intense...made miss parud even more... Please do continue...

Edited by Cutemithra - 10 years ago

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Love the os, amazing writer 👏
A small request, please make this into an ff 😳
Eager to read more 😃

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: pree_28
RR was an intense passionate love story.. and you captured its essence pretty well 😳
You should write more.. as rudra paro love story addict i would love to read about them 😛
Nice work.. 👍🏼

Thank you Pree. Delighted you liked it. I will try my best to complete this one. 😊

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: RangParud
Hey
It is a wonderful description about parud.
If you can please translate the hindi dialogues in English.
Please continue the story.😛

Thank you for appreciating despite the lack of English dialogues - I will make the necessary amends in Just a bit. 😊

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-
This is brilliant. One can feel the intensity in the words that was last seen in the first few months of the show.
Do write more.

Thank you Suganthi. 😊Delighted that a writer like your self has appreciated my work. I will try to complete this one but no guarantees that the tone, etc will remain the same.

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