RR AU FF - Mere Manbasiya - NOTE - page 30 - 08/10 - Page 3

Originally posted by: cryscaralagh

I am loving the story so far. And I am going to enumerate some points which really stood out for me, rather than telling you over the phone as well :)

1. I love how this answers a big "WHAT IF" . Like, I love how you brought in Aman actually checking the bags and taking them in custody. And its nice how it ties into the story as well.

2. I love this stronger Paro. While it isnt very obvious, you can see her strength of character, her moral compass and selfless nature. And in a way, we also see her blossom as Rudra also will.

3. Muhahah. I love how Rudra is indebted to Paro for his life, his conflict with that, and yet an inner vulnerability he shall broach soon.

You want this reminds me off : Remember the OUAT epi where Emma & Hook travel back in time, and they see SnowIng falling in love , albeit in a different way. This is like that. The pull of fate for PaRud will always bring them together, and they shall have the soulmate love.

As I already mentioned, I am so eager to see what goes next and am excited to see what plan is running in Rudra's mind. I dont know why but I see the 17th Jan episode popping up where Rudra takes Paro back to see her family, and they disown her. ( I can so imagine her in that jodha and the villagers insulting her, and he standing up for her). I shall just shut up.

I am so happy you're writing this! And this makes me fall in love with PaRud all over again.

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Just finished reading chapters 1&2.

Both were lovely updates 👏

Lovely start; I love the idea of yours that Paro is the saviour 👍🏼

So Paro saves Rudra, but Rudra's attitude is bad. And I don't think it is going to change very quickly.

Waiting for the next chapter since the precap is very interesting.

Continue soon, please 😳

Originally posted by: Parud7

Ya this is called alternate parallel story. You r amazing. You choose scenes frm RR bt modify it so greatly that it makes a new RR which we wish to see on screen in a decent way. In Story angle u create gr8 twists...plz update soon.

Originally posted by: Jennymyola

so engrossing story! loved reading this... update soon