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Shona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: arniepervaiz
Awesome update..continue soon

Thank you :)

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ipkknd12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Love this story. Like the fact that the fake wedding did not happen. And most importantly Paro knows the truth.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Shona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ipkknd12
Love this story. Like the fact that the fake wedding did not happen. And most importantly Paro knows the truth.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thank you I'm glad you're liking my tweaks to the story.

I honestly thought Paro should have known the truth in the show earlier than she did but then again if she did, her relationship with Rudra wouldn't have grown so much in that time

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@rupao21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Intense, the precap is just ugh. What a cliff hanger yo. I admire that this is a different take on how they actually met, quite intriguing. Eager to find out how this all works out, how they become lovers, equals.. how they become PARUD.

What I am fond of most though, is that Paro finds out the truth quicker than how she did on the show. It raises my hopes that this FF will (hopefully) continue for quite some time, because you know how most indian dramas are, unfortunately, slow in progress of the story and has lack of logic. This however, this FF, is quick and plausible.. not to forget that this is merely a twist.. the brilliant kind.

Can't wait for part 5, well done. Thank you for sharing ;)

Lots of love,

Edited by rupao21 - 10 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

These tweaks are really wonderful Shona..makes even more sense..Can't wait for next update with Paro knowing the truth and Tejawat on the run..

Your precap is very intriguing ...Wonderful piece of writing..👍🏼

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-Disenchanted-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Beautiful piece of writing Shona. Can't wait for the next part

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kulfi89

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Paro is no lesser dan Rudra in anger.. tht makes a good combination... Seriously never liked paro being a door mat even one bit... Here S she is scared of him but still holds her ground... Really luving the story... waiting for more...

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Shona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: rupao21
Intense, the precap is just ugh. What a cliff hanger yo. I admire that this is a different take on how they actually met, quite intriguing. Eager to find out how this all works out, how they become lovers, equals.. how they become PARUD.
What I am fond of most though, is that Paro finds out the truth quicker than how she did on the show. It raises my hopes that this FF will (hopefully) continue for quite some time, because you know how most indian dramas are, unfortunately, slow in progress of the story and has lack of logic. This however, this FF, is quick and plausible.. not to forget that this is merely a twist.. the brilliant kind.

Can't wait for part 5, well done. Thank you for sharing ;)
Lots of love,
Ru

Thank u Ru for your feedback :)

I'm glad you're liking it so far

Honestly I loved RR and the way Parud were bought together through Paro not knowing the truth but I was pulling my hair at how fishy the scam marriages looked especially if the person is as observant as Paro, I expected her to doubt Tejawat a bit more than she did after 16th Jan epi

Will post part 5 by the middle of the week hopefully :)

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Shona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: deepsel
These tweaks are really wonderful Shona..makes even more sense..Can't wait for next update with Paro knowing the truth and Tejawat on the run..

Your precap is very intriguing ...Wonderful piece of writing..👍🏼

Thank you Deepsel :)

I'm pleased you like the tweaks

Hehe one thing is for sure, I won't turn Tejawat stupid and useless like he became on the show