FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed)

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Sumayya Ejaz

@Sumayya_Ejaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

I was literally gona cry for the whole day if Paro would go to munbai just like that😔
But the last 3 lines saved my life 😳
Waiting for the next update and thanks for this gift of Ashish's bdy you make our day special too🤗

Edited by Sumayya_Ejaz - 11 years ago

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SingaporeFan

@SingaporeFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Nice one...kept me gripped...next one please

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Brishti

@brishti84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Oh my another update?! I don't know where to begin. This chapter was great. The roof scene was beautiful and emotional. And she stayed back. But he didn't see her. Hopefully she'll get back to him safely...thanks for the PM. Monday come soon please...

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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+ 31

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

omggg omggg omggg I am on sky high right now bestest gift on Ashish's Bday.
Thanky so so much for such a heart touching and emotional roller coaster chap.
Loved it so so much and as u know can't have enough words to praise you.
Just wanna give lots of love & hugs to you.
For this bestest story on parud.
So I read and again re-read and again & again.
Really I have gone crazy thanks to you Alyssa for making me addict to your wonderful piece of work on parud.
Now eagerly waiting for the next chap.
I only log in on IF bcoz of your FF though I am a busy bee, but I just can't resist or skip your story.
I hope it cont. for long...
Thanks again.
xoxo.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

And yes waiting eagerly for next chap.
Thanks for d PM too.

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

Achi bachi Alyssa...jaldi update kiya 😳
On a serious note,dat was beautiful...am teary eyed rite now...feel so bad for them...
I knew paro won't go...but future seems so uncertain...
Kudos to u for this gripping story...
n pls update fast..

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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Awesome update.

Gripping and intense.

The roof top scene is awesome.

Thank you for the PM.

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#318

That was brilliant. I'm not she which part I liked best the rooftop bit or the station bit. Waiting to see Rudra's reaction when he sees Paro again and a little tensed that somebody else might capture her and hand her to Tejawat

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#319

loved it...the rooftop scene was really well written..showed the spirit of paro..forgiving one...thanks for updating so soon...and you are practically teasing us with that little note at the end...return of jallad and confrontation..wow..😊

hope thakursa doesnt hear abt paro being at railway station...nice update...i like the way the story is paced...perfect...👏

Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago