FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed)

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kulfi89

@kulfi89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Wow u r amazing... 👏🤗to be honest i wasn't expecting d next chapter so soon... just jumped in joy when i saw dis...thank u sooo much... keep writing such awesome stuff...😊

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cutiesmile

@cutiesmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

OMG!!!!! Awesome it is.. Plz continue and update soon😊😉

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Syaza

@syazaibrahim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

wow, what an update, totally an emotional one.. Now the return of jallad, - i really wish/hope he would not return to his shell and avoid paro. Really cant wait for monday which is tomorrow., I cant wait to read the next chapter!! Please update fast! :p thinking alot of things right now so i dont know whats gonna happen the next chapter, really excited for their confrontation. :))

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

When i read the update all i was thinking was what if somebody saw them like Bheema !!

what a cliffhanger

Monday come soon

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harman12

@harman12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Awesome part
rudra wants paro to be safe so he is sending her away from him

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Girl, you update faster than I could even form and type in a response!!!!! You're one of the best authors around with such super fast updates, almost every day!!!!! Let me unres my other two posts before I come back to edit this one...

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One more to the to add to the emotional upheaval going on in Rudra's mind!!! Its unbelievable that he had defied Tejawat's order, that too for two days, before finally getting down to some action... He can't keep with with him, nor can he pull the trigger on her... Such well written scenes!!!! *claps*

Thank God, the sacrifice was to send Paro away from Birpur and not some drastic measure like killing himself or going to fight Tejawat!!! Although it bothers me that what'll happen to them both if Tejawat ever comes to know f this treachery on Rudra' part... Okay, bad idea... I will keep going th your flow...😉

Our stubborn, stubborn Paro!!! Tried to stay with Rudra, adamant Rudra trying to make her go for her own safety and then when he finally manages to get her to sit on the train, she comes down as soon as he turns to go away!!! Wow... Can't wait to read the confrontation sequence...

And he rooftop scene with a canopy of stars overhead was so poignant... I liked how Paro was just trying to smile and make Rudra smile, even if she was gonna die, eventually!l!!

Fantastic update!!!

Edited by shutter - 11 years ago

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nidhi.b23

@nidhi.b23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

with each chapter it just gets better. you really write bfully. What a gripping saga..

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Updated a post on page 41!!!!

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@rupao21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

So this was the 'ultimate sacrifice'?! As you know, I thought one of them would die.. *phew*

Nonetheless, this was heart breaking. I'm glad you're giving us sneak peaks, and even more glad that Paro never left!

The starry night. It symbolizes their future, I like to believe.They might be going through dark times but only in darkness do the stars shine the brightest. Make sense na? ;p

*sigh* the rebelling lovers. He indirectly rebels Tejawat and his feelings. Paro rebels his orders by staying back! Makes me go arey wah! xD

I love how they sat under the stars until dawn. That was beautiful. In my opinion, it can be depicted as the typical romantic scene but I'd argue that this FF is no where NEAR typical. It's full of beautiful and heart tugging surprises. Which is a really good thing by the way. Their emotions under the stars, his unspoken words and glances.. the real Rudra of your FF is slowly starting to come out of his cave. The fact that rudra acknowledges and is absolutely sure of his feelings is one of the things that separates this FF from the rest I've read. You've made this more emotional, grasping the readers emotions. I, for one, feel everything reading this FF. Will always be a favorite of mine!

This was such a joy to read, seeing the update in my PM box just made me grin from ear to ear like a kid! Thank you for spoiling us with your surprise updates and PM'ing us weekly!! LOTS OF LOVE AND APPRECIATION!