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This was a wonderfully original concept! I loved how you put the two relationships and the two versions of Rudra at a contrast. It was very interesting to see how past Rudra changed so much in comparison to present Rudra. One can definitely see the effects of love on him 😳
I also liked how you contrasted the two women, yet somehow they were similar. Laila and Paro both care for Rudra but it is Rudra who has decided who to care for himself. It is Paro's anger that affects him - like Paro's very being affects him too - and so Rudra turns into a cajoling husband, which is always lovely to see. With Laila he is Rudra in the purest sense; he is only destruction.
Finally, my favourite bit was the ending, when you described Rudra's emotion s whilst watching Paro sleep. It was interesting to note that he himself noted the changes within him, and how he enjoyed actually feeling things. That, for me, was a very strong scene.
Well done dear, and don't be ridiculous, this was not at all weak. Your job was to focus on the theme of RAUDRA and that is exactly what you achieved by spinning your own creative twist on it. It was fantastic 👏
