NAVARASA Series | Raudra ~ 2nd OS pg9!! (19/07)

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varshu27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Loved it Sebon...wonderful contrast of what Rudra was with Laila and his soul connection with Paro...fantastic...

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anisa79

@anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Wow, loved it! The comparison between him and laila and him and paro. The way he feels her. Amazing

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Love how sweet and passionate rudra is to paro in comparison to paro

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Kahan ke weak? This was fantastic!!

Although the fate of Laila left me sad. And I kinda don't like the always-gussa-wala Paro either.

But a great read -- man we have so few of them nowadays!

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HappyBird

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

This is so sweet and passionate at same time

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

A comparison of how true anger v. a facade of anger. Feelings that cannot even compare: anger of being with Laila and "anger" of being near Paro. All of his anger is a facade. To protect himself.

He has no idea why he torchers himself with going to Laila so he reacts to his internal anger and he has no idea at all how he can still feel anything besides anger and hate when Paro is around him. He resorts back to anger but cannot bring it out in a fever pitch.

Enjoyed your OS very much.

Edited by SherryGS - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Such a brilliant update sis!

How dare you insult me by saying your part isn't that great. It's amazing!!!!😭 You always do this flawlessly so take a bow😉

It's always great to read a comparison and this one was just perfect!

Loved how there was the difference between Rudra's attitude between Laila and Paro, but I also loved how there was the slight undertone of Guilt from Rudra's side from his past actions towards Paro.

I'm glad you wrote this in a positive light compared to mine. Mine is quite intense lololol. I enjoyed yours much much more.😉

Love jubbly! Go Team!

Edited by -Zara- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_
finally ab mai ijjat se res kar sakti hu.. Maine nahi padha tha jab tak I completed mine. Also, mine is very lame. And fluffy. I dont know how that happened.
Okay, whatever. This is my res for your OS.

Next I will post mine. I wrote it in like fifteen minutes and it is very shtupid. ugggh.

Unres.

You know what Zarooo, I don't think you really like me. Seriously. What are you saying!?😲😆

You do this so flawlessly, so seamlessly, and I wince and cry and ache and just go wallowing into depression. And then I feel like you are this sadist sort of a person who just likes watching me like this. No I'm not a sadist...but when I feel low I like doing some intense pieces.😆

Why do you have to kill them? Really. Just answer me. Honestly, last time I killed them with a happy ending not a lot of our team commented ( even Angel can agree with me on that note), so I thought this time I'll do it differently MUAHAHAHA! 😆 I was right! Even Napster commented!😉😆

Yes, this is something I have dreaded since the first time I saw Rudra onscreen, and since the time I knew he has shades of othello inside. The blinding mistrust on women, so rooted inside him, has made me have sleepless nights during the older days. It has that element of 'this can happen'😆 which is why it may be a little disturbing.

And here, you just made me relive all my fears about Rudra going blind with fury, and making a mistake he cannot rectify. I do think though it's coming up soon. Especially with Shantanu planning to create an MU between Parud.

That made me cry. so damn hard. *hands a tissue over*

And you should be happy that you can toy with my emotions like this Zaroo. Yay!😆😆😆 Love ya!