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shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ohh emm gee!!!!! What was that??? Did Rudra think that Paro and Shantanu had something going on between them????? He killed Shantanu, unknowingly fired at paro and then unable to bear the pain, shot himself...!!!!!!

By the way, why did Rudra have to hit Aman??? Ohh bad question, he can't bear anybody seeing his defeat...

Depressing, yes, but an awesome piece Zara... 👏

Well, despite the darkness, it was good to know that they will be together even in death!!!!!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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"Anger and intolerance are the enemies of correct understanding."

~ Mahatma Gandhi

This is what really holds true for Rudra. His anger and his intolerance make him do things that hurt him the most. He saw the doll with Shantanu, a man he already cannot tolerate and the anger just hit the roof...although I doubt Rudra shot Paro as in aimed the gun at her, even shooting Shantanu for this was an act of not understanding the repercussions of his actions and see where it got him? Sad.

Its good to see this series back on track, had seemed like it had been left off the past month or so.

Also hopefully all the Res' will get updated for you this time...unlike most of the Res' on the Navarasa collab that we two worked on :)

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1sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

Well written, nice read, but don't want something like this in the show.

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603840

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shutter
Ohh emm gee!!!!! What was that??? Did Rudra think that Paro and Shantanu had something going on between them????? He killed Shantanu, unknowingly fired at paro and then unable to bear the pain, shot himself...!!!!!!

By the way, why did Rudra have to hit Aman??? Ohh bad question, he can't bear anybody seeing his defeat...

Depressing, yes, but an awesome piece Zara... 👏

Well, despite the darkness, it was good to know that they will be together even in death!!!!!

Thank you! I thought I'd get tomatoes at the first comment😆, but this was lovely! *hugs*

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Zara ji,

Well, that is truly a gut-wrenching write-up. Very emotional, very well justified. Like Rudra says in a promo - Paro nahi , toh Rudra nahi!

I believe you touch one's heart and soul with this wonderful scene depicted, and make us realize, we need to stand up, go to our Mummy-Papa, any loved ones, kind and dear ones and go give them a tight hug, and not leave them for a good odd minute. Yes, you are indirectly mending broken hearts, minds, making us baisas correlate it with our real lifes, and allow us to take the opportunity to let go of our anger and forgive our loved ones.

The term Anger is synonymous with Rudra and the magnificent way in which you have portrayed his inner-turmoils, his sense of fear, his thoughts all relate to the reader in such a manner that they, expect the outcome and are not depressed, but find solace, having Rudra punishes himself and let's go of his anger in the end.

It's a honour and pleasure to be a reader/an outsider who gets to set their eyes upon such mind-blowing write-ups and be proud to be a member this forum, the very same forum where you take the liberty and time to humor us and emotionally take us on a roller-coaster ride of our lives.

And oh! Yes thank you for including Aman as part of the write-up, a very significant person, imparting a significant role. He truly would be the Godfather of PaRud's kids!

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rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

very depressing but well written...loved it

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603840

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2
Hi Zara ji,
Well, that is truly a gut-wrenching write-up. Very emotional, very well justified. Like Rudra says in a promo - Paro nahi , toh Rudra nahi!

I believe you touch one's heart and soul with this wonderful scene depicted, and make us realize, we need to stand up, go to our Mummy-Papa, any loved ones, kind and dear ones and go give them a tight hug, and not leave them for a good odd minute. Yes, you are indirectly mending broken hearts, minds, making us baisas correlate it with our real lifes, and allow us to take the opportunity to let go of our anger and forgive our loved ones.

The term Anger is synonymous with Rudra and the magnificent way in which you have portrayed his inner-turmoils, his sense of fear, his thoughts all relate to the reader in such a manner that they, expect the outcome and are not depressed, but find solace, having Rudra punishes himself and let's go of his anger in the end.

It's a honour and pleasure to be a reader/an outsider who gets to set their eyes upon such mind-blowing write-ups and be proud to be a member this forum, the very same forum where you take the liberty and time to humor us and emotionally take us on a roller-coaster ride of our lives.

And oh! Yes thank you for including Aman as part of the write-up, a very significant person, imparting a significant role. He truly would be the Godfather of PaRud's kids!

Such a lovely comment for such a short OS? I'm honored!😳

You caught the underlying message of being aware that Anger is of the devils works and makes us do things that we do regret. It can be very dangerous as you can see in this instance.

I'm so glad that you liked this OS despite the depressing ending and it's truely a pleasure to write for such readers like yourself.

Thank you :')

*Hugs*

xxx