SS - When You're Gone the Pieces of my Heart are Missing You CH 5 UPD

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: pakpearl
What a description ,Majorsa...

blue ghagra-choli and her height is five foot four inches, long brown hair and fair skin. Caramel-green eyes, she has a mole on her right cheek next to her ear ..
It just reminded me of Arnav's description of Khushi in IPKKND...

Patli si,lambi,gouri..gulabi kapde pehne hue..

Shona..
WOnderful SS!!!
Pls continue soon !!!

lol...omg now that you mention it I remember the scene...lol...yeah I guess both Rudra and Arnav are like that aren't they...where they act like they don't know but are aware of every detail...I mean in yesterday's episode you see Rudra doing the same thing...apne ek lardki ko dheka hai, lambi si, dubli pathli, gori...😛

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ACTywm

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Khuarv
I loved reading your SS.You have beautifully captured Rudra and Paro's emotional angst in this SS.Looking forward to future chapters😃.

Aww thank you...😳😳😳

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ACTywm

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: henamani
pls add me to ur list

sure I'm sending you a buddy request accept it and you will get the pms 😊

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ACTywm

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Chapter Two - Ray

This chapter has now been shifted onto my blog, where the whole story is. Find the link below. Thank you.

Chapter Two - Ray

Edited by ACTywm - 10 years ago

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nice story!!

Thank God someone remembers that Paro is still a witness in the Tejawat case...because the CVs have definitely forgotten about it..

That he should arm twist Paro in to staying back as his witness and for her own safety seems very plausible...good thought, that one!!

And I love how she left the rudraksha beads as a trail for Rudra...

Hope that you will be posting future updates jaldi se 😛

Cheers

Maya

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago

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Suni

@Suni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Loved it! Waiting eagerly for the next part.

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: What_the
Nice story!!
Thank God someone remembers that Paro is still a witness in the Tejawat case...because the CVs have definitely forgotten about it..

That he should arm twist Paro in to staying back as his witness and for her own safety seems very plausible...good thought, that one!!
And I love how she left the rudraksha beads as a trail for Rudra...

Hope that you will be posting future updates jaldi se 😛

Cheers
Maya

Lol...well I don't think they have forgotten it...but yes it seems to have gone to the back of their minds...n will probably venture forth when the need for it arises again...althought Tejawat doesn't seem to have forgotten...although he hasn't said it blatantly...he has just said I want Paaro becuase he wants to kill her for dodging him...but I guess it's implied also because she it their witness...

Thank you about the beads...inspiration stuck...I had was like ok how will Rudra find paaro n then it was bling, the light turned on in my head 😆

Yes I will try to update soon 😃

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Tannu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Oooh this is really interesting! It's full of action, drama and suspense, which makes it a good read. Well done so far, I'm looking forward to the next update :)

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anisa79

@anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

awww!! that update was amazing! loved it

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dumas

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Amazing update Rudra is looking for her beehma will die when Rudra finds Paro and she is hurt and bleeding loved that she is leaving a trail for him to follow loved Rudra reaction on the officer poor guy did not know he was talking about Rudra wife awesome update thanks for the pm.

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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