SS - When You're Gone the Pieces of my Heart are Missing You CH 5 UPD

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rangprab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

good writing... its a different take on the whole mannat and a nice plot to unfold his inner thoughts...

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JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Reserved. Will comment after the updation

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pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

What a description ,Majorsa...

blue ghagra-choli and her height is five foot four inches, long brown hair and fair skin. Caramel-green eyes, she has a mole on her right cheek next to her ear ..

It just reminded me of Arnav's description of Khushi in IPKKND...

Patli si,lambi,gouri..gulabi kapde pehne hue..

Shona..

WOnderful SS!!!

Pls continue soon !!!

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Khuarv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I loved reading your SS.You have beautifully captured Rudra and Paro's emotional angst in this SS.Looking forward to future chapters😃.

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: asmi279
Nice!! Pls update soon..can't bear the cliffhanger :)

Thank you...lol...well you don't have to wait much longer I am here to update 😃

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rashika
Awesome first chapter.
So Parp has been abducted and now Rudra has to go save her.

Hope he gets there in time.

Let's hope...

*fingers crossed*

😉

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Suni
Thrilling story! Looking forward to the next part.

Thank you 😃

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the start rudra reaction to paro missing loved how he described his wife appearance in details amazing start thanks for the pm.

Thank you dumas...n haiye as always...PICTURE PERFECT!!! 😃

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: lourel24
superb.Rudra is really chuparustam.He knows in detail about his wife 😳 .Paro effort to mahe her jija aware was 👏 She really is a fighter.

yes that he is...he may act like he doesn't pay attention but he knows every minor detail...

n yup that is my favourite quality in Paaro...her never-give-up attitude...it is inspirational!! 😃

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: rangprab
good writing... its a different take on the whole mannat and a nice plot to unfold his inner thoughts...

Thank you...yeah i was playing around with the mannat plot that is why it took me so long to post this ss...cuz I wasn't sure how I was going to have it work in my story...this was what finally settled with me so...I hope you guys like 😳

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