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Suni

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's time for Chapter 3 right?😃

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Good suspenseful writing. Looking forward to more.

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DDC1
Good suspenseful writing. Looking forward to more.

Thank you 😳

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Suni
It's time for Chapter 3 right?😃

Lol you are quite right 😛

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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter Three - Warehouse

This chapter has now been shifted to my blog. Please find the link below. Thank you 😊

CHAPTER THREE - WAREHOUSE

Edited by ACTywm - 11 years ago

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome.eager to read more parts

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yay he found her amd hopefully they'll find Tej soon too and hmm I wonder what he'll say

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henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

good going; but how come no pm ;(

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update and interesting start

I am loving the story.

Rudra emotions on finding Parvati abducted and the hell he went through until he found her were beautifully written.

I think time has come when he confess to Parvati that she is very integral for his life, his sanity and he need her.

Update next chapter soon.

Pm me when you update, sending you buddy request

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Mani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Just read the 3 chaps
Beautiful story...
Rudra found paro...phew i was tensed when you mentioned the blood loss she suffered...
You added suspense in here...i wonder if it was a bait for rudra, he wouldn't leave paro unguarded otherwise...
Waiting for more to unfold.

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