SS - When You're Gone the Pieces of my Heart are Missing You CH 5 UPD - Page 4

Originally posted by: Tannakstar

Oooh this is really interesting! It's full of action, drama and suspense, which makes it a good read. Well done so far, I'm looking forward to the next update :)

Originally posted by: dumas

Amazing update Rudra is looking for her beehma will die when Rudra finds Paro and she is hurt and bleeding loved that she is leaving a trail for him to follow loved Rudra reaction on the officer poor guy did not know he was talking about Rudra wife awesome update thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Yesterday's epi n this update..

I m speechless..

'Paaro...' Her name as a prayer. 'Paaro where are you...' his voice was low and forlorn with distress, so much so that it made the fine hair's on the back of Aman's neck stand. He wanted to console him, ease

Rudra's pain is so evident..

He can't lose his only hope to live a life full of love n joy..

Very well-written,Shona !!! 👏

As usual.. 😃

Originally posted by: neet2407

Loved the update! wonderfully written - poor Paro she hasn't got ;long but she is doing everything so that her Major saab can find her and of course he is going crazy looking for wife!

by the way I love the song that you took the title of the story from!