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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

So beautifully written , such powerful deep emotions woven in every line !!
Loved it dear !!
Ur PaRud stories are sheer delight to read !!

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tinkleby

@tinkleby

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow!

You just summarized their whole story in these lines and it was beautiful!!!👏

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

This was poetic almost..very nice idea, to capture all the different emotions that Paro expresses so well with her eyes..

Though, today, i genuinely felt, as i watched the episode, that even though we miss her warm, lovely eyes, she emotes so much with her voice as well...making us feel for her, even when her eyes were not seen..

Especially liked the below parts...

Nice work saambavi, looking forward to you work on Navarasas as well..😛

Originally posted by: tic-tac

Had he seen the eyes that had reflected his pain, trying to suck every drop of his agony?

Had he ever seen those eyes which, still in inebriated state, had acted more aligned than him?

Had he ever seen those eyes that had reflected pure heartache seeing him losing his life?

Had he ever seen those eyes that had tried to make him laugh, not caring whether in return she will get what she was trying to give him?

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prabha

@prabha.abha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice is and his promise also so gud

Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago

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rangprab

@rangprab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Pure Bliss is what i feel when i read this OS...

Superb work...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

So beautiful

Very well written. 👏

This one shot is fabulous 👍🏼

Indeed Parvati eyes were very expressive that could speak volumes for which proper words lack.

The end was very sweet and lovely.

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

😭😭

the last lines.. haye

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khankiran

@khankiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

very cute..keep it up dear

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fairy shah

@fairyshah

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

emotional yet such a cute n romantic os dear

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-NatureLover-

@-NatureLover-

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Awww... so sweet Parud moment, just when i am enjoying the "farq padta hai kyun ki" rajastani version that came out so fast today... 😳

My fav line was this : Had he ever seen the eyes that had accepted defeat? Like a true warrior!
Pata nahin kyun, that line struck me. Glad to know Paro made Rudra proud.

Thank you dear :) The line you have mentioned was for the Paro who sat in front of the world to accept her defeat :)