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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Beautifully emotional heartbreaking soul shattering all in just a few word amazing rae every single one thanks for the pm sorry that i am late.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: mistyrains

Its amazing how in a meagre hundred words you have managed to capture every little detail of their reactions on seeing each, even though it might be a dream. Very beautiful!

Continue soon! :)

Thank You so much! :)

The question of whether or not its a dream should br answered in the next drabble :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: MissAsian
In just 125 words u managed to stir such emotions within me: confusion, sadness, excitement and happiness

love how the drabbles are all adding up

continue soon :)

Thank You so much! Glad you feel so! :)

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Don't be silly - why are u thanking me?! You're the one with the talent of writing Marsha'Allah.

'Dreamers' is that a novel or a story on RR forum?
Now that u have recommended it, i'm intrigued :)

'Dreamers' is the drabble before 'Believer'...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Ah good to be here after so long.

Have I ever told you, Rae - that drabble is your forte...maybe because you use the freedom of no boundaries very well

Eluded is beautiful..and I could feel Paro's urgency as she took what she could only take in his sleep.

Fancies much like the man they tease, was a lot more reticent in emotion. Maybe that is the beauty of it? :)

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

A thousand crickety old buses could rattle in her ears for her entire life just as long as in the back of her mind, his steady heartbeat resounded.

I have recently discovered the joy of finding and collecting beauty in writing that is on IF. And the line above, goes to my (mental) collection, pronto!

Heartbeats or rickety old buses - how you weave them together...who would've thought?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: LadyR
Your very few words stir up a multitude of emotions once again...they create a punch and make their point... The reader does not have to delve too deeply to understand what is being conveyed by the writer,

She imagined his touch just like one imagines the sun peeping out amongst the clouds just for that one second and as soon we look upto the sky ...

Did she just imagine it or maybe there was something more...? I guess the answer will be in the companion piece...

Thank You for your comment! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Awww, that was lovely.
One could feel their pain, the love, the hope.
Beautifully written.

Thank You! :)

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Okay THIS is your best drabble so far!

Your words create magic - SO many emotions in such a few words - I. am. speechless.

Okay can i hope that this is NOT a dream? 😳

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

AT, I haven't had time to read your work as much as I would like- exams are hell. But I will say that your writing is absolutely flawless- I loved the way you portrayed him needing her, that... realization, almost. That she's turned his life upside down, but maybe it was upside down to begin with. Fabulous job!

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Hmm... i am in a quandary Rae. I thought yesterday's drabble was my fav. But today's is as good. Or is it better? Huh. Am i allowed to have more than one favourite?

Conveying so much, and that too a flow of emotions, not just one, in such few words, is a talent. And yours is becoming finely-honed.

Well done.

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