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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

WOW I am amazed how in so little words u weave so many emotions.

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

this is an awesome piece of work...
loved it...!!!

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

So few words with such emotion attached to them. ⭐️

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: neet2407
Wonderful - so much expressed in such short sentences - wow their meeting surpassed even my expectations - so beautiful, so real sometimes action speak louder than words and we want something so much that when we get it - we wonder if it was real or just a dream 👏

Thank You so much! :)

The question of whether it was a dream or reality should be answered in the next drabble :)

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Maybe was exquisite.

Definitely no Maybe about the imagery that a few words could conjure so effortlessly. Waiting for the companion piece of the maybe now :) When is that coming up, Baisa?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: dumas
Beautifully emotional heartbreaking soul shattering all in just a few word amazing rae every single one thanks for the pm sorry that i am late.

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Suni
Beautiful!

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: meera30
Ah good to be here after so long.

Have I ever told you, Rae - that drabble is your forte...maybe because you use the freedom of no boundaries very well

Eluded is beautiful..and I could feel Paro's urgency as she took what she could only take in his sleep.

Fancies much like the man they tease, was a lot more reticent in emotion. Maybe that is the beauty of it? :)

Thank You so much, Meera! :)

Feels nice to hear your views on my work after so long, your feedback has always been much cherished as you know :)

And yes, the man's POV has been planned to be reticent to suit him as a character as we grow along with him.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: meera30
A thousand crickety old buses could rattle in her ears for her entire life just as long as in the back of her mind, his steady heartbeat resounded.
I have recently discovered the joy of finding and collecting beauty in writing that is on IF. And the line above, goes to my (mental) collection, pronto!

Heartbeats or rickety old buses - how you weave them together...who would've thought?

Honoured that you feel that something by me can make place in that list :)

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Okay THIS is your best drabble so far!
Your words create magic - SO many emotions in such a few words - I. am. speechless.

Okay can i hope that this is NOT a dream? 😳