| Mirror Images | Drabble Series ~ Last Drabble + Note - Pg56 (24/05) - Page 18

Originally posted by: radhikalaya

Lovely again. Indeed they are soulmates, the two halves need to come together. Once gain you conveyed so much of depth with such economy of words.

Originally posted by: ddFan2012

AT

Another beautiful treasure of 375 words...

Just Wow!

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Rae - do you need a virtual hug? Sending you a huge hug your way🤗.

I don't remember if i commented on this thread earlier - but i did read the drabbles. And loved everyone of them. Frankly i like your writing so well that if i see you as the TM i almost always peek in. You capture emotions so darned well. And you did so here too. Very well done.

And since i am years older than you and advice is free: Write for yourself. Its wonderful to get feedback. Especially if the feedback is what you are looking for (be it constructive criticism, validation of your skill, whatever). However, at the end of the day, your real target audience, the one person you really need to satisfy, is you. I know what i am talking about 'coz i have been through the whole gamut. But like i said, this is free advice. Lena ho to lo.

All the best,
Kat

Its amazing how in a meagre hundred words you have managed to capture every little detail of their reactions on seeing each, even though it might be a dream. Very beautiful!

In just 125 words u managed to stir such emotions within me: confusion, sadness, excitement and happiness

love how the drabbles are all adding up

continue soon :)

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Cant say about the ending but if you would allow me I would recommend you to read 'Dreamers' again...specially the end part :)</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank You! And Thank You again for saying the last part! :)</font>

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PS - Read 'Dreamers' with 'Believer' in mind :)</font>

Don't be silly - why are u thanking me?! You're the one with the talent of writing Marsha'Allah.

'Dreamers' is that a novel or a story on RR forum?
Now that u have recommended it, i'm intrigued :)

Awww, that was lovely.

Wonderful - so much expressed in such short sentences - wow their meeting surpassed even my expectations - so beautiful, so real sometimes action speak louder than words and we want something so much that when we get it - we wonder if it was real or just a dream 👏