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Katrina won't announce her pregnancy, is she?
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TRAUMA DRAMA 15.9
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Conceiving of PL…
Originally posted by: chotidesi
AT, I haven't had time to read your work as much as I would like- exams are hell. But I will say that your writing is absolutely flawless- I loved the way you portrayed him needing her, that... realization, almost. That she's turned his life upside down, but maybe it was upside down to begin with. Fabulous job!
Hmm... i am in a quandary Rae. I thought yesterday's drabble was my fav. But today's is as good. Or is it better? Huh. Am i allowed to have more than one favourite?
Conveying so much, and that too a flow of emotions, not just one, in such few words, is a talent. And yours is becoming finely-honed.
Well done.
Originally posted by: lourel24
WOW I am amazed how in so little words u weave so many emotions.
Originally posted by: SherryGS
So few words with such emotion attached to them. ⭐️
Maybe was exquisite.
Definitely no Maybe about the imagery that a few words could conjure so effortlessly. Waiting for the companion piece of the maybe now :) When is that coming up, Baisa?
Originally posted by: tinkleby
Just when I start to think this cannot get any better,this is the best, you go ahead and prove me wrong! And I absolutely love this feeling😊
"Maybe" felt so surreal to me all along. Perfect I must say. The little nuances are what I so look forward to in your writings and you do that exceptionally well. These 125-140 words manage to convey the poignancy so well that words are just stuck in my throat.
Disclaimer - This story is based on 'Rangrasiya' by Nautanki Films. Please respect this as someone else's work and dont copy/post anywhere else without my express permission.
Dreams
A dream.
It must be a dream.
For there could be no other way for him to be standing where he was.
He was standing with whom he was.
He was standing by who he was.
Her hands felt smaller in his than he remembered.
And her eyes dimmer with more tears than he could recall them to have ever stored.
Her skin had lost its warm glow.
And her hair lay limp.
Yet there was a smile on her face - growing steadily with each passing moment that her hand remained in his.
And suddenly her hand felt a perfect fit.
Her eyes seemed to shine.
Her skin rosy hued.
Her hair now seeming perfect.
The smile on her face growing wider as her gaze arrested his.
And he knew without bothering to check that a similar smile lit his face.
A dream it must have been.
For the man he had been.
But for the man he was now, this dream was his reality.
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