SS: Unraveled. *COMPLETE* 22/4/14

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Anushka

@bebo2050

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Amazing , u write so well ..

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niyoti

@niyoti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Yay!!! Beautiful end to that beautiful story...!

Originally posted by: zanayaforever
AWESOME niyo 👏 👏
Luved his pledge at the end...

Originally posted by: custodian75
Lovely end to the story. Both needed to communicate their love to each other.

Thank you guys!😳

Originally posted by: Aish002
aww...such a lovely end to a wonderful story on PaRud...the rain falling on desert was very symbolic...Paro is going to fill Rudra's life with her love...something for which he has been yearning for all his life..well done...👏

Thank you so much! I'm glad you got the desert-rain metaphor😃

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TheMogambo

@TheMogambo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Niyo...me too in ur club...*hi-fi*

Rudra needs to miss Paro...and that separation is gonna make him spill those 3 precious words...

This was a true delight to read...enjoyed it thoroughly...

Waiting...for more...😊

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

it was beautiful.Rudra won't realize his love until he goes through the turmoil of having lost her.u portrayed it very well.I found it so 🥱 when paro confessed she was going to return anyway.

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

it was beautiful.Rudra won't realize his love until he goes through the turmoil of having lost her.u portrayed it very well.I found it so sweet when paro confessed she was going to return anyway.

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niyoti

@niyoti

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: naz1123
I was following this story so intently, thank you for updating so quickly!!
Such a lovely ending!!
Loved the way he declared his love, not yelling, not shouting, not manhandling, but with a tender hold of her waist and quietly for her only, "I love you Paro". Loved it...And in the end, Rudra sweeping her up in his arms and carrying her off, sooo can imagine that happening...Lovely...
Thanks!!!👏

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback.😳

I'm hopelessly romantic and i think that the biggest meanest warriors can turn into warm puddles of goo for the right woman😆 so i think Rudra might do the same for Paro.

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niyoti

@niyoti

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: TheMogambo
Niyo...me too in ur club...*hi-fi*
Rudra needs to miss Paro...and that separation is gonna make him spill those 3 precious words...

This was a true delight to read...enjoyed it thoroughly...

Waiting...for more...😊

*Hi-Fi*😃

Glad you enjoyed it Leena!😳

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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Aaw loved the ending

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Loved it.

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Beautiful ending dear

Originally posted by: bebo2050
Amazing , u write so well ..

Originally posted by: prabha.abha
super dear

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this little SS😳

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

That was beautiful niyo.🤗 major saab doesn't realise how much she means to him untill she is not around anymore. poor guy just went crazy without her. awesome story. loved it.

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PurpleCrayon

@PurpleCrayon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

~And ever has it been known that love knows not it's own depth until the hour of separation~

I love this SS to bits! If I could, I would cuddle it close to my heart and never let it go just for the fact that it puts a silly grin on my face. 8 beautiful vows of love to replace the ones from before and i absolutely adore Rudras last vow. I cannot help but think of Lord Shiva and Parvati. She is Adishakti just like Paro is to Rudra. " I promise you the half of my soul that isnt already yours". Truly beautiful way to bring out that connection from mythology. He has accepted that she is half is soul and has pledged the other half too..

This SS is just plain ❤️

Edited by PurpleCrayon - 11 years ago