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prettypri

@prettypri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Wow Niyo...part 3 is simply superbly written!

Rudra's feelings...what he wants to say..knowing he left it too lat..worrying if he can make things right or she is lost to him...his mad dash to where she is..subterfuge in bringing her home...show his desperation to make her his when he realises he cannot have it any other way!

The final expression of love,..the promises...beautifully written!

Truly a wonderful ending and totally apt title..😳

👏👏

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niyoti

@niyoti

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon
~And ever has it been known that love knows not it's own depth until the hour of separation~

I love this SS to bits! If I could, I would cuddle it close to my heart and never let it go just for the fact that it puts a silly grin on my face. 8 beautiful vows of love to replace the ones from before and i absolutely adore Rudras last vow. I cannot help but think of Lord Shiva and Parvati. She is Adishakti just like Paro is to Rudra. " I promise you the half of my soul that isnt already yours". Truly beautiful way to bring out that connection from mythology. He has accepted that she is half is soul and has pledged the other half too..

This SS is just plain ❤️

Gosh! Thats a beautiful quote PC. Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!

@Bold: That's exactly how i envisioned it! Thank you so much for noticing🤗

So so over the moon that you enjoyed reading this SS.😳

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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: prettypri
Wow Niyo...part 3 is simply superbly written!
Rudra's feelings...what he wants to say..knowing he left it too lat..worrying if he can make things right or she is lost to him...his mad dash to where she is..subterfuge in bringing her home...show his desperation to make her his when he realises he cannot have it any other way!

The final expression of love,..the promises...beautifully written!

Truly a wonderful ending and totally apt title..😳

👏👏

Thank you so much Pri. 8 vows to replace the ones he took when he was mad at her and lost and hurt. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it😳

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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: bluemoon255
That was beautiful niyo.🤗major saab doesn't realise how much she means to him untill she is not around anymore. poor guy just went crazy without her. awesome story. loved it.

Thank you Nishu! 😳 Spot on! He won't realize how much he loges her until she's gone. So glad yku enjoyed the story.

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

⭐️Part III gave me goosebumps.

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PurpleCrayon

@PurpleCrayon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

With all the cuteness from yesterday's episode I simply HAD to read the vows again... LOVED them more if such a thing is even possible. 😃

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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: lourel24
it was beautiful.Rudra won't realize his love until he goes through the turmoil of having lost her.u portrayed it very well.I found it so sweet when paro confessed she was going to return anyway.

Thank you so much!

I think Paro needed a strategic retreat to shore up her denfences for the fight on her hands. She would not give up that easily. But Rudra came to her instead. Isn't that what we all want. To be wanted and needed and manaofied?
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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: SherryGS
⭐️Part III gave me goosebumps.

😳

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Very well written Niyo. BTW, where is she going ? And why ? DId I miss it ?

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Niyo Niyo Niyo,

Sorry for posting before finishing all the three parts. Thanks for the PM. So well written. I am sure we will get to see some parts of this at least in RR. May not be in same words but very similar. Already we saw the cuddling and sleeping part 😃

Great writing. Am really impressed 😆