SS: Unraveled. *COMPLETE* 22/4/14 - Page 14

yayy!!...you've updated a new chapter..and boy, that was brilliant!..👏..rudra seeking some kind of help from mami was where i went all aww...this man is indeed insanely in love...waiting to read more such romantic pieces from you...really loved your work..👍🏼

gawd !! the ending !!

Originally posted by: What_the

Amazed by the parts in bold...Such depth and clarity of thought, Niti..

Are you sure that you are not a professional? You should definitely consider it...

So excited you are writing a part 3...eagerly waiting!!

I must also share with you, that i shamelessly read the update while at work today...surreptitiously alt+tabbing whenever I felt my boss standing over my shoulder...

<shaking head in disbelief> I have really got it bad for Rangrasiya... God help me!

Originally posted by: shagun-rocks

yayy!!...you've updated a new chapter..and boy, that was brilliant!..👏..rudra seeking some kind of help from mami was where i went all aww...this man is indeed insanely in love...waiting to read more such romantic pieces from you...really loved your work..👍🏼

I am so late!

Originally posted by: peppygeek

The unspoken words created such a beautiful impact. I was pleasantly surprised by Rudra's demeanor. He didn't coerce Paro but left himself open for rejection. Extra love for such swift updates!

I think underneath all the bluster is a very tender person. And I'm sure when he realizes he's in love with her, he won't coerce her, he can't imagine hurting her. He already has his instincts honed towards her well being and when he comes to terms with his love for her, I think it may get magnified.

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely feedback 😳

AWESOME niyo 👏 👏
Luved his pledge at the end...

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Awww!! You made me all mushy mushy!

You know, this name is perfect. Unraveled. Nothing else will actually make him realize he loves her unless she is gone.

And Paro... Haaye. She was gonna come back anyway. Such boundless unconditional love she has for him. And to sate my soul, Rudra loves her as much, if not more.

Beautifully written yaar Niyo! And what is this about leaving IF? What is happening?

And I am terribly upset that I am two pages late!

Originally posted by: Suni

Loooved the last para - the rain on the parched desert. 👏Uff, the vows he made. Love that she was preparing to come back the same evening - they can't stay away from each other. 😊Lovely ending to a beautiful story.

Thank you suni 😳

I was using the desert and rain metaphor for Rudra and Paro. So glad you liked it 😳

You write so beautifully, it is a treat !! Please also update Moments in Between. Desperately waiting for that.