OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Repentance-Completed. - Page 6

Again so beautifully written. Dilsher's wry observations about life, universe, his son and daughter, lovely. This is why I want Dilsher to wake up immediately. He has so much to offer and this chapter says exactly why 😊

Thank you so much for updating ... i've too have been stalking this post 😆

The way I squealed when I found out u had updated! Gave my friend quite a scare 😃

Okay I was more eager for the yesterday part so honestly my excitement sort of dimmed when I saw Tomorrow written over the update.
But but but, that was only till I started reading it and as I read, I had this feeling of positivity n goodness gradually sweeping over me - Dilsher's care for his daughter in law never ever fails to bring a smile to my face! That's like the sweetest relation ever! And how effectively you describe it, through his thought processes. Their relationship was unique-the way the calm and meek Paro interacted with the rough and outspoken Dilsher, it always used to be special to watch. I miss it so much on the show 😔
The way Dilsher thinks about his son and daughter in law's activities - haha you bring out his naughty side so well!
I feel so nice reading how the whole house hold revolves around Paro, like the sun in the solar system, she is the pull of gravity that brings and keeps the other planets together. Love you Napster for this beautiful and effective narration!

So now that Mala has come into the picture, m waiting to see how you deal with her story. This is an angle which has not been explored yet in the real show. M hoping for an update soon on that😊
But before that-PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update the yesterday part soon! M dying to know what happens after you left off in the last part...Can I have it this week? Pretty please??? 😳

I was waiting eagerly 4 ur updates and the wait finally ended with an intense and emotional update.. though it didn't have much parud, I liked it immensely. I have got addicted to this series. Eagerly waiting to know what happens next.. :-)

Jab dilsher met Mala?!

beautifully written. loved it😊

loved it...!!!
w8ng for part 2..!

OMG!!!

U write beautifully! Can't wait to read the next one!