OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Repentance-Completed.

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Wow naps ! I love dilsher and Paros at her daughter bonding! Dude u blow my mind wid ur writing!

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dreamwinner

@dreamwinner

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

So Parvati was trying to get mala and dilsher together

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Omg a story from Bapu-sa's POV. Really interesting! :)

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Meena

@chotidesi

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Napster, you've done it yet again. You've rendered me completely, utterly speechless. The way you describe Dilsher's adoration of his precious bahu is almost obsessive- but in a good way. He's just as lost as his poor son in her innocence. I loved the sarcastic comment about her sleepless night 😆 Oh, and this line: "mandir-wandir business". That line made me laugh as well.

I loved Dilsher, but I think your Paro is my favorite version of her- she's so innocent and childlike, but there's a woman in her too. It's very, very well done.

I have to say, I had an inkling that Mala would show up. I'm curious to see what she does- I have a feeling she would be desperate to give her son the sargi. My family does not celebrate karva chauth, but I've seen enough movies to know about it. I'm excited to read the next part- update soon! (also, I noticed you post Tomorrow first- is there a reason for that? And I loved your analysis of Parvati on Dear Rudra...)

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

wow! cliff hanger ending... literally...

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

What an update.

I love your account on Dilshar and what he thinks of his daughter-in-law. It is so sweet how he loves his daughter-in-law like a daughter and even if he doesn't want to do certain things he does so for his daughter.

Now at the mandir he has finally come face to face with his wife.

Shock and horror is what I am thinking he may be feeling.

Can't wait for the next part.

Brilliant.

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ujwala444

@ujwala444

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Lovely.. lovely.. want to read more and more.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Loved disher take on paro and her innocent ways and her cuteness married to his jallad son loved how he liked the the idea of teasing rudra knowing he will go overboard in taking care of paro in her fast loved how he wanted to know if he could give her the sargi and loved how he thinking about how much she means to him a fathers love it has no bound be blood or love and he collapsed on to mala awesome update loved it.