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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: prettypri
Anky ...here is Shreya's comment or rather praise for your OS😊
She is travelling and couldn't post it herself.

" It is absolutely fantastic and you have got a standing ovation from my side. Absolutely brilliant portrayal of Paros misery and Rudra's restrained outer calmness while tempest rages inside. You have done an awesome job"

Haaye! Thankooo Shreyuu for such an amazing comment!! 🤗

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Sorry...

Comment got posted again... On its own...:P

Edited by Ash_KriYaansh - 11 years ago

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

A very logical taken the situation. Rudra is using his brains this time.

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naz1123

@naz1123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

So beautifully captured...her turmoil, regret...his anxiousness,...their reunion.

All of it, beautiful!!

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Kritika

@jane_krittzz...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Nice OS.. Beautifully written. Thanks for the PM !! 😊

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

OMGGEEE ! BESTEST imagination I've come to read on the current track.

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TRULY LOVEED IT ! such a brilliant piece of writing, and I reaaally hope this come true. Actually, THIS has to come true. I loved the way you executed such a scene followed afterwards from the mela and taken place at Tejawat's haveli... and the ending! *sighs* PURRRFEECTO.
So awesome.

I loved how he considered her naivety, her not being able to know anything and yet, she did what he instinct told her to do.. to go there where she had been 'protected' all her life and came there to be truest saviour, to guard and save her from painfully scorching haveli.

I could SO see this play out in front of me, the imagery was spot on. I really wish something like this happens, so both the leads to team up and fight against Tejawat and yet, both don't blame each other and neither are they wrong in your Fic, which I loved. Both fighting for what they held righteous and believed in through out.. & Paro got to know the reality.. though how bitter it was .. she actually and consciously saw the care, concern, pain from her saviour. I loved how her subconscious mind played a role in assuring herself, what was true and yet hidden, right from the beginning. She just didn't end up choosing the option, which she had though was wrong and yet right for her future.

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Beautiful story. so well written. I can imagine this happening in the story, wish it does. I liked the way you made Rudra reign in his temper. Well done👏

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: shree10
Very nice OS. These OS with hope are required to keep the faith alive in the MU and separation track.

Thank you!

And lets enjoy the separation as well! Log bichadte hi milne ke liye hai..

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: rithureuben
Lovely OS. I am hoping something like this happens on the show, although with Dilsher being hurt by fake Paro I don't know if Rudra will care enough to rescue the real one.

Lets just wait and watch what happens in the real show.. Till then, all we can do is hope! ^_^

Thank you!