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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: MemoriesDieHard

WOW!!! This was totally Breath-taking... I could see it all in my head.

Ur words just seep through the reader's heart and mind
I am speech less...
I could literally hear Rudra saying,"Dekh dimaag math Kharaab kar..."
Wow!!!
Do I need to say more? Cuz I am totally at a loss of words... I hope u do write more PaRud...

Lots of Love...
Yashi


Thank you Yashi for such an amazing comment! And I'll definitely write more when if and when inspiration strikes!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
heyaaa diiišŸ¤—
this s d 1st tym m reading a work on PaRud😳
well-written diiišŸ‘šŸ‘
jus lovedd ittt😊
thanx for d pm😊
andd congozzz 4 becoming purpleee🄳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: aishu3003

heyaaa diiišŸ¤—

this s d 1st tym m reading a work on PaRud😳
well-written diiišŸ‘šŸ‘
jus lovedd ittt😊
thanx for d pm😊
andd congozzz 4 becoming purpleee🄳


Thankooo Aishuuu!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Anky!!

How did I miss this!

I love LOVE LOVE it very much. I love how he knows he can't screw it up this time. He has to be patient and cant go in with his usual guns blazing approach because now he has something precious to lose. A vulnerable side for a great warrior. I love how Paros subconscious looks for Rudra at such a weakened state and how she had completely faith that what ever game they were playing he wouldn't hurt her.

"He felt his soul was breaking too" ā¤ļø

I love this. Bas!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: niyoti

Anky!!

How did I miss this!

I love LOVE LOVE it very much. I love how he knows he can't screw it up this time. He has to be patient and cant go in with his usual guns blazing approach because now he has something precious to lose. A vulnerable side for a great warrior. I love how Paros subconscious looks for Rudra at such a weakened state and how she had completely faith that what ever game they were playing he wouldn't hurt her.

"He felt his soul was breaking too" ā¤ļø

I love this. Bas!


Hehehe! This is the first write up for RR by me!

I am happy you liked... nahi nahi.. LOVED it so much!

I LOVE YOU for the comment! Bas!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
it was simply beautiful.loved the way he was controling himself so that he won't commit any mistake n risk her life,indirectly his life too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
What a beautiful story! How I wish this had happened on the show...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Just found this OS and read it...
It was awesome!!!! You actually dreamed about such a sequence???

Anyways, your story was better than what we were offered... This is what I had wanted to see on the show... Paro running off with Tejawat, leaving behind Rudra... And Rudra could have figured out what to do!!!!

But this version of Rudra was a treat to read about... He didn't fly off the hook once he realised that Paro had run away with the enemy!!!!!

Loved reading this story...

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