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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

baabu-sa...

aapka sapna sach hone ko jaa rha hai...

badhai ho...

so I cannot comment over characters... coz still am to acquiamt myself with names...

I bhill comment over writing style sa..

I toh lubhed how u showed the emotions... esp the description...

the starting one bhaaajjgh awesome... and then how she was shouting that too...

then rudra forging papeersss... ooohhh

saam daam dand bhed it ijjhhh

lubhed how u showed blind trust thing.., awesome...

lubhed it...

lubh u.,. eee

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

This was awesome
Love the way you write
Emotions and plot and everything was well drafted
Awesome work
Write more please

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DN2012

@DN2012

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

OMG Such beautiful OS,wish something like this happen in the show.Shall i send this link to St or Ashish for consideration??😳

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Beautiful Work... 👏

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wohooo...Anky Sa...This was simply awesome. Simply written but hit the right emotions...I wud love to see this...bt it wnt happen this time round.

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shruathi

@shruathi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

awesome awesome awesome wow WOW

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

That was amazing Anks! Now I have high expectations from the cvs to give us a great scene like the one you wrote!

Aise aur dreams dekha kar so that we can get more wonderful OSs like this. Lol

Write more! <3

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

That was just fantastic. Hats off to you girl for such a beautifully written OS. They way you portrayed both characters was spot on. Paro's anguish of choosing Tejawat over Rudra was heartbreaking. I guess that's understandable when you've considered the man to be like a father then find out he never thought the same. A calm Rudra coming to the rescue was executed perfectly. If he'd come in with guns blazing who knows what the outcome would have been like. This is one ending the cv could take inspiration from. It would definitely do justice to the show.

I don't think I've read anything else of yours but hope this is the start of reading many more wonderful pieces of Parud from you.