PaRud OS: Choices - Page 8

Originally posted by: flower27

can't stop reading you are such a good writer hope to read more and more 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: aruni50218

WHOA!! NICE! I desperately hope this to happen in the story...

Originally posted by: Ash_KriYaansh

Hmm...

So... I don't watch Rangrasiya !!
I mean, yeaa... I have had glimpses of it when my mom sticks to TV, everytime it is aired. But I've never really 'watched' it...

Koi baat nahi beta.. At least you commented!

Still I came here n read this.
Because I can never ignore any of ur write-ups dii !! ^_^

Thank you so much baccheee!!

N I read it like a story... Not a fiction.
N to be frank, meko kaafi samaj me bhi aaya...😆

As always... The way u portrayed the emotions of the leads was flawless! Not just Rudra n Parvati, but u seemed to have well described Tejawat's POV too !!

I liked the way she was yearning to see him... Feel him... Or whatever...
But wanting him to come to her rescue...

As I said, I have no idea of the storyline Rangrasiya holds, so I can just compliment u on ur amazing writing skills !!

I liked it ! 😃 :*

Originally posted by: custodian75

A very logical taken the situation. Rudra is using his brains this time.

Originally posted by: hilly

OMGGEEE ! BESTEST imagination I've come to read on the current track.

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TRULY LOVEED IT ! such a brilliant piece of writing, and I reaaally hope this come true. Actually, THIS has to come true. I loved the way you executed such a scene followed afterwards from the mela and taken place at Tejawat's haveli... and the ending! *sighs* PURRRFEECTO.
So awesome.

I loved how he considered her naivety, her not being able to know anything and yet, she did what he instinct told her to do.. to go there where she had been 'protected' all her life and came there to be truest saviour, to guard and save her from painfully scorching haveli.

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I could SO see this play out in front of me, the imagery was spot on. I really wish something like this happens, so both the leads to team up and fight against Tejawat and yet, both don't blame each other and neither are they wrong in your Fic, which I loved. Both fighting for what they held righteous and believed in through out.. & Paro got to know the reality.. though how bitter it was .. she actually and consciously saw the care, concern, pain from her saviour. I loved how her subconscious mind played a role in assuring herself, what was true and yet hidden, right from the beginning. She just didn't end up choosing the option, which she had though was wrong and yet right for her future.

Originally posted by: malkasub

Beautiful story. so well written. I can imagine this happening in the story, wish it does. I liked the way you made Rudra reign in his temper. Well done👏

Originally posted by: k.sweet

nice one

superb os

n well written

loved it

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

You have been watching RR?? When? How? Why didn't you tell??

Hain?? Hain?? Hain??

I have been missing you loads!

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Of course I've been watching RR. Since the beginning! And I did tell you. Tu bhool gaya.

I've missed you loads too! We have so much to catch up on! It's been forever since we last had a proper conversation!

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

No, I would have remembered that you were watching too!

And come on AA sometimes naa!! Its only RR we talk about now there!

I am so darn happy to know you are watching too.. Like seriously Pri!

Are you gonna start writing on RR as well??

I am in louuu with Ashish!

Ugghhh... If only I could hug you! Itta zyaada I missed you!