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k.sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

nice one

superb os

n well written

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: gunji
very nice dear!!
this week is proving to be so torturous...cant bear to think about PaRud separation...this OS made me feel happy again

Thanks Gunji!!

Lets just get through this separation as soon as we can.. All we fans can do is wait and watch.. I am sure the journey will be worth it..

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: asmi279
that was beautiful..the last tu theek hai..awesome!! :)

"Theek hai" is the mantra of our PaRud.. 😆

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
baabu-sa...

aapka sapna sach hone ko jaa rha hai...

badhai ho...

so I cannot comment over characters... coz still am to acquiamt myself with names...

I bhill comment over writing style sa..

I toh lubhed how u showed the emotions... esp the description...

the starting one bhaaajjgh awesome... and then how she was shouting that too...

then rudra forging papeersss... ooohhh

saam daam dand bhed it ijjhhh

lubhed how u showed blind trust thing.., awesome...

lubhed it...

lubh u.,. eee

Tune joh PaRud pe likha woh bhi shayad sach ho jaaye..

Heheeheheeheee!!

Lobh you tooo!!!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -DobByDoDgeR-
This was awesome
Love the way you write
Emotions and plot and everything was well drafted
Awesome work
Write more please

Thank you! I'll definitely write more when inspiration strikes! ^_^

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: DN2012
OMG Such beautiful OS,wish something like this happen in the show.Shall i send this link to St or Ashish for consideration??😳

Thanks so much.. But I think its too late to suggest something like this to ST or Ashish nahi??

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King
Beautiful Work... 👏

Thanks!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Sofna
Wohooo...Anky Sa...This was simply awesome. Simply written but hit the right emotions...I wud love to see this...bt it wnt happen this time round.

Sofu-Sa!! Thank you for liking it!

Nothing is going as we expected naa.. Lets just wait and watch! :D

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels
That was amazing Anks! Now I have high expectations from the cvs to give us a great scene like the one you wrote!
Aise aur dreams dekha kar so that we can get more wonderful OSs like this. Lol
Write more! <3

You have been watching RR?? When? How? Why didn't you tell??

Hain?? Hain?? Hain??

I have been missing you loads!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Hunnybunny3
That was just fantastic. Hats off to you girl for such a beautifully written OS. They way you portrayed both characters was spot on. Paro's anguish of choosing Tejawat over Rudra was heartbreaking. I guess that's understandable when you've considered the man to be like a father then find out he never thought the same. A calm Rudra coming to the rescue was executed perfectly. If he'd come in with guns blazing who knows what the outcome would have been like. This is one ending the cv could take inspiration from. It would definitely do justice to the show.
I don't think I've read anything else of yours but hope this is the start of reading many more wonderful pieces of Parud from you.

Thank you HunnyBunny-Sa!!

The thing is, it wouldn't have been worth anything if he came in all guns blazing. That's why such a calculative cold Rudra here..

I am so happy reading your comment! Thank you sooo sooo sooo much!!